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Alright ladies and gents my post is finally up!

Personally I enjoyed writing this one quite a bit. =P It allowed me to show Gadrael from a sympathetic light, it also allowed me to show him delve into the depths of despair and what comes out of that despair.

I realize we could have taken the fight scene further, but in all honesty it would have been dragging it and we have a lot of the plot to cover. Not to mention we haven't focused much on character interaction so I wish for that to be the focus for a little while. :p

Luckily I have already paved the way for that, so when your characters wake up lets enjoy a cup of tea eh? ;)

Oh and personally I loved the last part of my post the best, I am sure you guys will too. =3

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Also sort I am dead tired right now so I won't be able to view yo characters properly. I will give them a look tomorrow.
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Yay, my characters didn't die.

Can't say the same for Maeve. :)
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I really enjoyed the post. XDDD

Still figuring out what I want to do next?

Do the Asylums need help getting out of the pods? Or does it open automatically?
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I have to ask...when Gadreal mentioned the unblinking alchemist was he referring to Mikhail or Gregor...cause either way that was a great reference
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The unblinking Alchemist is actually a reference to the Alchemist who killed his family. The reason he reached there was because of the fear manipulation by your character. I tried meld all the attacks together to boost maximum efficiency. As such Alistair's binds came first but Gadrael would have broken free of them in no time hence Mikae's fear manipulation resulted in him becoming docile enough to take the sufficient amount of damage needed. Both physically and mentally. I am guessing that is what you were after. xD

Oh also do note the pods will not heal the Asylums completely. It will stabalize them. Repair broken bones and close deep wounds ti a certain degree. However they will still feel like crap when they wake up. xD
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=D Thanks for the clarification!

I am almost done with my post.

Done!

=P Sorry Saint! I didn't mean to put Isaiah besides Camron! I wasn't sure how I will interact with Mikael who is the only other Asylum who is awake.
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This is gon' be good. I can't wait to write this... tomorrow. Because right now I'm half asleep. XD Really nice post though, Xodus. The stuff about his wife is really gonna hit home for Lina in a way I don't think you imagined. ;)
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I'll be out of town until Sunday night but I'll get a post up as soon as I can when I return. Sorry for the delay. I'm excited for some solid character interaction!
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Can't wait for all of ya posts. xP

Ryv, that moment when Camron got slapped made me lol so hard.
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xD Haha glad it did. I dunno why but somehow I can't keep serious whenever I write his POV.
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Nice post, Ryver!

I wish I could say I'm starting mine now... and much as I'd love to do nothing but sit here all day and write, write, write, I gotta go do some boring-ass real life stuff. RPG time will start between 2 and 3, and my post should be up before I go to bed tonight.
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There is no hurry Maiden ^.^ the people in Chrono Asylum are going no where :p with them being I'n pods and what not. :p

I need to come up with a better name for these pods. -_- fish tanks? :p that's a nice name right?

And trust me you guys will be seeing these fish tanks quite often xD
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I'm making my post in seperate parts...since Mikhail wasn't directly targeted by Gadreal I'll have him show up later and let Gregor wake up with everyone else.

Sidenote: Even though he's naked his mask will not come off
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Thanks Maiden! :)

Waiting for the new posts...
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Mine's up. Xodus, I hope you don't mind, I took a few liberties with Gadrael's attack, and since Kai and Lina were last on the list I figured it wouldn't matter much if I added an extra sixty seconds to the battle. That's all it took for them to be beat almost to death. >.<

When attempting to write Lina and Kai waking up naked in the pods, in a room containing other people, I realized something. The sight of those pods, coupled with being naked in front of Kai and everyone else, after what just happened... was going to be enough to give my little doll a bit of a mental breakdown. Since I figured it would be better to play it in such a way that wouldn't leave her a sobbing mess for the next several hours and too embarrassed to show her face for the rest of the day... I gave them an early out. They were no more than half an hour ahead of everyone else, and are going to have breakfast while they wait. Again, I hope that's okay with you, Xodus.

My theory is that it's better to ask forgiveness than permission. If you really want me to edit the post, I will... but it turned out so beautifully!

Now, off to my Twisted threads. x.X
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Awwww I think that your post was very sweet. I love how both are dedicated to each other in their own way. You definitely give Maeve or Vaeve a run for their money!!!
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Haha such a pity Angel would have enjoyed the sheer awkwardness of that situation. :p

Regardless I find nothing wrong with the post, it was pretty good as it set the mechanics for both your characters and them coming close to their deaths allowed each of them to progress. Though I wouldn't be surprised if Angel is sitting near a dark corner during the intimate moment with Kai and Lena, his expression saying, 'you guys got in the wrong room'. xp Aah killing alchemists and ruining emotional moments, Angel's forte.

It would have been a little better if you had opened up a dialogue with some Asylums hence initiating the character interaction. However seeing as your characters just got out, they will need to compose themselves. :p

Oh yes and there is a opening, the people who wish to initiate character interaction can join in the breakfast. The Gemellie will do so shortly, once I have enough material to write. xp
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Lina's face when you said breakfast.



Post has been edited... since no one else has made it to breakfast yet, I put Kai and Lina in the dining room alone. Thought one big round table kind of felt like Camelot and would also help for interaction's sake. Although they're eating pretty intently, it's safe to assume Lina would smile and say 'good morning' to anyone who entered the room, and Kai would at least look up and nod when she did so. How's that, X?

Edit: Also, thanks Ryver! I don't intend for them to be so sappy all the time, they're actually pretty lighthearted. I had planned to play that scene during their first close call with death... I just didn't realize that it would be in the very first few posts I made. It's okay, I plan on keeping the tension alive for at least a little while while Lina waits for that perfect moment. And I'm sure that the Gemellie will keep them busy enough that they don't have a lot of time to dwell on it. ;D
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Who doesn't like food?

I wish I could post now but I gotta wait my turn. So many ideas now. Also Camron got his first official weapon of sorts...
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