DeathstrokeSW said
I will look forward to your PM then.

Just send it. However, I am not really looking forward to keep doing such PM's. I would like to say that finding a solution for your problem with the parental blocking could be a better solution. Though, why would a parental blocking would work against our back up forum? It has no mature content regarding pictures or such. S:

Meh. I don't know. Either way.......wait wasn't Pain/Nagato in the series from Amegakure? Anyhow, all I need to know is what year it is IC and I'm golden

Meh. I don't know. Either way.......wait wasn't Pain/Nagato in the series from Amegakure? Anyhow, all I need to know is what year it is IC and I'm golden

Meh. I don't know. Either way.......wait wasn't Pain/Nagato in the series from Amegakure? Anyhow, all I need to know is what year it is IC and I'm golden

Sorry for the triple post but I hit refresh on a RPG isn't working right now message and it asked me to resubmit the form so.....sorry

That double post. And I have sent you the PM. Also, keep in mind that nobody from the cannon does exist in the RP. We have alternative history and such. Some people like to use the appearances of some cannon characters, but we don't have any history shared with the cannon. Not directly. Maybe some similarities, but nothing that is being used from it directly, so far I can tell.

There is one last thing I need before I post my CS. Unfortunately, I am the WORST with naming so help would be appreciated but not necessary. Also what year is it, IC?

EDIT: I got your PM, I really appreciate it. Thank you.

DeathstrokeSW said
There is one last thing I need before I post my CS. Unfortunately, I am the WORST with naming so help would be appreciated but not necessary. Also what year is it, IC?

Look at the pm I have sent you? The last year of the summarized history should tell you enough. But again, I would say to fix your parental blocking. Most CS's are stored on the back up forum. Just like the roster...

Ah. Sorry. Seriously I got your PM and it was greatly appreciated. Seriously, thanks.

Name: Kentachi
Nickname/Alias: Tachi
Gender:Male
Age and date of birth: 15 May 29th,
Age Appearance: Late teens
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Parents: Unknown, Shinji Kaure(guardian)
Length and build Muscular, but lean. He stands 183 cm (6 ft)
Weight 159 pounds
Favorite weather and season Winter, snowing



Village:Amegakure
Birthplace:Amegakure
Organization: Amegakure military

Clan/Bloodline: Unknown

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature: Water



Appearance:



Personality: As a result of his upbringing, he is distrustful of others upon first meeting and is a bit anti social at times. He is largely independent, only going to medics when absolutely necessary. He holds a cynical view of the world and it's people, believing that people are only in it either for their own profit or the suffering of others. However, past the cynicism and the ingrained distrust is loyalty. He will not abandon those he trusts and is a strong proponent of revenge against wronged ones he cares for. He is an avid tea drinker and carries a flask of tea on him at all times.

He wraps his mouth and neck partly in imitation of his guardian and partly to hide the scars
In battle he is sadistic and cruel, doing what is required to procure mission success at any cost.



History:

Born an orphan, Kentachi was left on the streets as a baby where he was taken in to the nearby orphanage. His earliest memories are of rain on his forehead and of beatings.

As a child, he was beaten quite often, whether by adults or by other children, it didn't matter. From adults, he was the receptacle for their frustrations, whether it be the latest gambling losses, or their disappointment in him, or any other excuse they could find to beat him. From the children, it was their sadness and disappointment at not being adopted, at their own mistreatment. Kentachi suffered it all, and worse yet, because he had been born to outsiders, he suffered the worst of their wrath. Frequently he was treated for burns, stab wounds, broken bones, black eyes, bruises, slashes, and whatever other injury they could inflict on him.

By the time he was seven, his cynicism had set in, and the anger, the pent up rage had begun to show. He began to defend himself, to fight back-albeit futilely-to show them he wasn't going to take this lying down. When he was eight, however, he came across his first shinobi, who happened to be an ANBU black ops agent. The ANBU was in the village to search for a criminal, who had come to hide from authorities to the worst part of town-HIS part of town. Kentachi was walking back to the orphanage from an errand he was sent on when the chase between the ANBU and the criminal became a standoff, one with the boy as a hostage. Kentachi , however, had no intention of being used by another, AGAIN, and so he bit his captor in the arm and elbowed him in the gut. Drawing a kunai on the enemy he was shoved aside by the ANBU and he watched with amazement as the criminal was cut to ribbons. The ANBU, impressed by the fighting spirit of the boy, adopted him and enrolled him in the academy, believing the boy to be a potential asset to Amegakure. Eventually the ANBU, whose name was Shinji, came to view the kid as his son. For Tachi's ninth birthday, he was presented a ninjatō, the very same one used to slice that criminal to ribbons a year earlier.

Now properly cared for by at least one person, Tachi excelled in taijutsu and sword work. When it came to ninjutsu, Kentachi had to work harder but found that water style came the easiest to him.

Theme Song: Whitechapel's Darkest Day of Man


Weapons/Items:


Skills/Abilities
Is better with the sword than anything else
Average level taijutsu
Average level ninjutsu
Average genjutsu



Special Traits
Is missing his ring finger on his right hand, average chakra levels, and has a scar from hairline to collarbone over his right eye, while the eye itself remains undamaged. 20% of his body is scar tissue.


Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Clan:
Description:



Jutsu:



Custom Jutsu



Summons

Could anyone go ahead and hit me up with a invite to the skype group? Apparently I'm only part of the older chat group.
Skype: gamerxgeek

Gerontis said
I am not fond of the KG and rather not see it, cause some already tried their hand at it. I would rather advice some KG-less character to start with. Its easier to move in the RP with a character that can be developed in more ways than a KG character. As the unwritten rules around KG characters limit them and to start with them is not something I would recommend..

Kk fair enough brother. I will try to get my bio up as soon as i can tonight. ^^

Little Alice said
Why is everybody answering when I just did so?Odd... I thought I had it. :I

we all wrote it at the same time

(also: what about hydrification technique?)

DeathstrokeSW,

First I want to welcome you into the RP. At least, for showing interests. A second and more warm welcome awaits you when you're accepted. So I will just review your CS now.

So far I don't see much of a problem. However, the clan/bloodline is set on unknown. If you wished that he discovers a KG later or that he is part of a KG clan, than you need to state so. A KG-less clan isn't a problem, but the sudden appearance of somebody gaining a KG isn't something we want to see. Not that the character in story will know this as writers need to separate OOC and IC knowledge from each other.

Also, if you have time, I would say to fix the link of your jutsu. That and I want to talk with you in private regarding your parental blocking. It will become a bit of a nuisance if you can't get access to the board while there is a lot of information stored there that we use. Its nice that Alice was willing to send you a pm with some history, but I hope that you will try to fix this. For that, I want to talk a bit to see if we can think of a solution together.

AlterNathan said
we all wrote it at the same time

I thought that GM's were used to answer questions. Alice likely refers to that we had some reviewing problems in the past, so its best to let a GM answer a question. Unless its a simple question and you're 120% sure you know the answer. Like if you are allowed to have a tanto.

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AlterNathan said
(also: what about hydrification technique?)

That is more or less a hidden than a technique. I thought some were able to do it, but it depends on the character as a whole before I can give an answer on it.

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Name: Aniru Kazen
Nickname/Alias: Ameno Rannaa (the rain runner, or, runner of the rain)
Gender: Female
Age and date of birth: 26, seventh of March
Age Appearance: 24
Sexuality: Bisexual

Parents: Kyo and Mizuri Aniru (deceased)
Length and build 5'8 athletic build
Weight 125 lbs.
Favorite weather and season a cool spring rain

Village: Amegakure
Birthplace: Amegakure
Organization Amegakure Military forces.

Clan/Bloodline: Aniru

Rank: (Formerly ANBU) Jounin

Chakra Nature: Suiton, Fuuton

Appearance:

Personality: Kazen is very laid back and easy going. Her usually jolly nature either cheers people up or annoys the hell out of them. Behind all the jolliness hides a serious side of her. Kazen has a very high sense of responsibility and justice. what she believes and wants will come to pass unless there is really no other way.

Her favorite things are training, mainly her speed by running. And teasing Nazari. 'Yeah well' are words she too often uses to start a sentence, commonly to much annoyance of Nazari and other people. Her attitude towards others is often friendly but if you show hostility or act like an asshole, you will meet with the only thing that is sharper than her blade, her tongue.

Her way of doing might be a bit different than you expect. You could say she’s a bit, different but in no way insane or crazy. Kazen does not like formality and often acts like it does not exist.

Her history with the ANBU black ops has changed Kazen. She will sometimes zone-out, relinquishing every emotion and turn into an effective cold-blooded killer.

History:
Kazen was born into the proud Aniru clan. The Aniru are a group of nomadic warriors offering their services to the highest bidder. Roaming around Amegakure, which was still a divided country at that time, was not a business without dangerous. But the Aniru were well known and were made sure not to be crossed.

Kyo and Mizuri, Kazen’s parents, were part of the communication and scouting branch and so Kazen was trained in chakra control (e.g. water walking & tree climbing) early so she could get to places easily were other could not. She was also trained in running speed, stamina and agility to make her way from A to B in the fastest and most effective way.

Kazen loved to run and often ran for days after each other. The faster the better and so Kazen trained her legs more than anything becoming the fastest teenager the Aniru branch had ever raised. It did not take long for Kazen to be recruited for missions. Relaying messages to clients and back. In order to protect herself, since she knew no jutsu, her parents gave her a ninjato. Kazen trained with the ninjato (which she often uses in reverse grip) and practiced in different ways of the sword.

Several years later Kazen ran into Nazari, a Chuunin Shinobi. Instead of being killed by her she helped reach her client in time and saved her from a couple of angry Genin. Little did they know and a friendship started to grow between the two as they met later.

Kazen’s jobs started to dwindle as her speed increased, not because of that. She was always on time, much to the delight of her clients. It was because of the imminent war. Kazen came across a severely wounded Nazari and saved the girl from her assailants. Nazari said she would make an excellent shinobi, Kazen shrugged it off, patched the girl up and made it to her client in the nick of time.

Her last job almost became Kazen fatal, she was way early as her speed had increased even more than last time. And instead of relaying a message she had to fight for her life, apparently it was a set up. Kazen fought valiantly but lost but Nazari who showed up just before it was too late saved her life. She convinced Kazen to become Shinobi.

That was when the war started, The Aniru were hired by a landlord to defend him and his land from forces of the great Shinobi nations, they used the Ame as the battleground for their quarrels. But one clan could not stand up to an entire nation or two and was wiped out after a battle that lasted for two weeks. Kazen graduated as Genin pretty fast as she was already skilled in chakra control, taijutsu and kenjutsu. Het speed also helped a great deal.

Kazen speed ran through the ranks making it to Jounin in no time. After that she was drafted into the ANBU were she learned a lot. Getting better with the ninjato, advanced taijutsu techniques, weapon usage and more agility and speed training. This made her the fastest shinobi Amegakure has ever seen.

After a few years serving the ANBU black ops Kazen was relieved from her duties and was appointed as a sensei for fresh graduates. The Amekage saw her abilities fit and wishes Kazen to learn the new graduates what she knew. So she became part of the new Team-Teach project where two jounin-sensei were appointed to a group a young genin. The Amekage set up this program to unlock the full potential of new genin since two could teach more than one. Kazen was happy to find out that Nazari was her jounin-sensei partner. But she overslept the first day of her sensei-ship.

Theme Song:


Weapons/Items;

Name of Weapon or Item:
Kaze Katana

Description:
A ninjato, worn horizontally on her lower back. This blade has affinity for Fuuton jutsu and empowers this for little bit extra chakra, for the rest this is just your average katana, hence a little sturdier.

Kazen's main swordplay is Battojutsu (quick draw) but she is also adept in 'normal'/reverse grip swordplay

Appearance:


Name of Weapon or Item:
Runners goggles

Description:
easy to use goggles that Kazen puts on when running to avoid things getting into her eye, its also tooled with a microphone and receiver

Appearance:

Like this but longer so it covers both eyes

Name of Weapon or Item:
Basic Shinobi weaponry like; Kunai, Shuriken, Wires, Exploding tags, etc. etc.

Skills/Abilities
* High chakra control
* High stamina
* Average endurance
* Average strength
* Average chakra reserves

Special Traits
* Very high speed
* High agility
* Good reflexes
* Expert in Taijutsu
* Expert in Weapon usage
* low skill in Ninjutsu. (thus making her techniques less effective)

Kekkei Genkai:

none

Jutsu:

Academy jutsu:
Clone, transformation, replacement, etc.

Mikazuki no Mai (Leaf's dance of the crescent moon)
Suiton: Teppodama (Water release: Gunshot)
Suiton: Suiryūdan no Jutsu (Water release: Water Dragon Bullet)
Fuuton: Shinkūgyoku (Wind release: Vacuum Bullets)
Fuuton: Atsugai (Wind release: Pressure Damage)
Shuriken Kage bunshin no jutsu (Shuriken shadow clones)

Custom Jutsu
[spoiler]

Name of Technique:
Kaze Cutter
Type of Jutsu:
Fuuton, Katana
Rank:
C-rank
Range:
Self, Blade
Nature Type:
Fuuton
Handseals:
None
Description:
This Jutsu utilizes the air surrounding it and using chakra, similar to chakra flow and the flying swallow technique it increases the size of the original katana with solid air.
Weakness:
Constantly consumes chakra from the user. It consumes more chakra depending on the length of the katana.

Name of Technique:
Fuuton: Kaze Sanpo (wind style: Wind walk)
Type of Jutsu:
Movement
Rank:
B-rank
Range:
self
Nature Type:
Fuuton (wind)
Handseals:
Bird, Dog, Snake
Description:
this Jutsu will increase the speed of the user by about 60%, making them appear to be a blur of motion and difficult to spot or hit by inexperienced ninja.
But this is more often used outside of battle then inside.
Weakness:
Constantly consumes chakra while active, need to be good at chakra control, does not increase speed of reflexes and hand seals, may result in Damaging the body when used too frequent or too long.

Summons

none

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Alternathan ;

The history is a bit strange. Which war? That and Amegakure has been unified under a rule for quite some time. I think it would be around her grandparents youth that it wasn't one unified village. Please read the history of Amegakure.

With very high speed, you are aware that you move fast. But she doesn't have very high speed reflexes, hand signals weaving and such. I hope you're aware of that. I am also against the whole : being the fastest of Amegakure. If she is able to outspeed others, why the need to put on an emphasis in the CS? Amegakure has no shinobi that focus on speed, so I think there is no need for that. It just makes it in my opinion a boast. And I certainly don't like boasters.

No offense, but would you try to put more detail in the custom techniques? I think you need to put more details in them, so there is no need to explain a technique that is described as : ''Drastically increases the users movement speed''.

Is it empowered by chakra etc. Details.

That and I will not allow a technique that is described as : ''Ultra fast movement, like with Shunshin no jutsu. but Tekkei/Jinzen is used in-battle to quickly advance or withdraw from an attack.''
Sorry, but not accepted. If you want, I am on skype where you can talk further with me about it.

Ok. Thanks for reviewing my CS. And as to the parental blocking thing, I really do apologise; it's like this:
My phone has restrictions on it that (insanely) limit my browser to just a handful of sites. I can't undo the restrictions, only my parents can.

I actually don't want him to have a Kekkei Genkai. I think that he's a guy who had to earn everything given to him and a blood limit would pull away from that.

DeathstrokeSW said
Ok. Thanks for reviewing my CS. And as to the parental blocking thing, I really do apologise; it's like this: My phone has restrictions on it that (insanely) limit my browser to just a handful of sites. I can't undo the restrictions, only my parents can. I actually don't want him to have a Kekkei Genkai. I think that he's a guy who had to earn everything given to him and a blood limit would pull away from that.

Then it would be -best- ( I had forgotten to add this word, sorry.) put that he isn't part of a clan. That and can you access the proboards from a lapto/computer? I can't imagine that you're planning to type everything from your phone. I would go insane.

To get past parental blocks you could try putting a proxy browser on a flash drive and using that to browse the internet.

Lesli said
Then it would be -best- ( I had forgotten to add this word, sorry.) put that he isn't part of a clan. That and can you access the proboards from a lapto/computer? I can't imagine that you're planning to type everything from your phone. I would go insane.

I can. Is there anything else wrong with my character in the meanwhile?