Demon castles

Arceous castle : the princes castle the one of treasures and villages all over the place.

Ferrous castle : castle of glowing flames very dangerous but weaker army but powerful guards.

Lunro castle : the castle of stealthy, very well planed demon traps and skilled warriors.

Perios castle : the castle of thieves , watch out because you shall loose things here.

Villages

The Gale Village : a city under the princes rule, never really on their own they seek nothing more the to live and be well. Till the girl came in and their world became scared of her and her gang of thieves and assassins.

Pill village : the village of animals, shifters live in this village.

Yuois village : this town has very stealthy demons. Very dangerous if prevoked.

Character sheets

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Mastery with (weapons or powers you might have)

Weapons

Powers (three)

MY character

Er.... Mythos... hate to break it to ya but your character is kind of a sue. Okay, shes... a big Mary sue. *ahem*

-She is litterally the daughter of Satan yet comes from 'a broken home' which forces her into stealing. And its not even like shes a distant relative, shes directly related as their daughter as you've outlined. Why would she come from a broken home that caused her to steal if she is litterally the granddaughter of the Prince of Darkness AND the daughter of fucking DEATH. First of all, thats a slap in the face to my beliefs about the Grimm Reaper, he is no son to the Prince of Darkness. Secondly, Don't think I missed Lillith the baby stealing hag as her mother. She shouldn't be nearly as pretty as she is considering she would litterally be a devil.

-A POOR FAMILY?! It is the freaking PRINCE OF DARKNESS.And DEATH! They have no NEED for monetary value and would rather bargain corpses than coin! It would make no SENSE that she would have any desire to steal as nothing of that would be inherited. Now, as far as if she were a daughter of a greed demon, that would make sense.

-Who exactly IS the rich here? If its not the fucking Prince of DARKNESS or my beloved religious icon Death, I seriously want to know.

-A ten year old. Offed a Demon king? Are you bloody looney? A ten year old doesn't want to get off the couch MUCH LESS take it upon themselve the arduous task of reigning hell upon a demon king. Let me break it down for you: You have moats(probably filled with Lava since hes a demon), You have over 500 guards at the VERY LEAST, you have traps, you have executioners, torturers, the KNIGHTS which are probably demons and therefore merciless, THEN YOU HAVE the audience chamber constantly filled with guests that would SEE YOU, and THEN you have the King. And This is a damn DEMON king you're talking about. NOpe. nope. NOPE. No ten year old can do that I'm not listening lalalallalala

-There is no point in having so many damn assassins at rest or no. Either you're an assassin or you're not and assassins travel in twos USUALLY. haing a whole group is bad choice and not as effective as you'd think. You might as well just keep it to the two companions.

-most formidable in all of hell? No, you hear RUMORS that shes the most formidable force in hell, there will always be those who don't believe.

-Really? She's mysterious but EVERYONE KNOWS ABOUT HER? Puh-lease. And she stabs them in the back? thats fucking TERRIBLE business. WHY does she stab them in the back? WHY is she so murderous. If shes a bitch keep her as a bitch to everyone, she should NOT Be liked this point but feared and avoided at all costs. A bitch, is a bitch. There is NO nice side to a bitch. Keep it consistent.

-Oh she cannot turn anything into a weapon. Shes not damn blacksmith. and WHO trained her to wield anything shes 'Mastered?'

-What the fucks with the dragon? Where did she get the dragon and where did she learn to summon it?

-Yeah, instant kill on everyone who stands around you? Why the fuck bother with weapons then? That is OP as hell and you know it.

-Oh she can't die, riiiiight. Because she learned how to heal right next to the stabbing lessons. There is no reason for an assassin to ever learn to heal. Medicines they carry on them are far more practical and this just highlights the fact that she's a sue. She can't die? Okay great, see you in 100 years when everyone you know is dead.

-okay where the hell did she learn to summon? Honestly this is getting tiring. Why have wolves that can't be killed? The flames I admit are cool, but you're seriously overkill. Again with the thing that she can't die that's OP as fuck. This wouldn't be fun to rp with, it'd just be catering to what YOU want.

-oh. My GOD. okay that's the last straw with the Dragon. DEATH, DOES NOT, DO, DRAGONS. DEATH IS AN ENTITY THAT CANNOT PRODUCE OFFSPRING AND WOULDNT HAVE TIME TO RAISE A SPOILED ASS BRAT LIKE SASHA. I can't explain how angry it makes me when my effigy is used to someone as low as you. Next time, fucking think about how you might offen other religions next time you spew up about Death.

If you refuse to change, I'm gone. I have no reason to be here if you intend for me to rp with something thats a blatant slap in the face to my religion, and a mockery for a character. If you intend to throw me out for my highlighting how your character is a Mary sue, I won't lose anything. I'm here to rp with you, and I won't lose sleep over not rping if you go through with asking me to leave.

Nope daughter of Death not satan. But ill power her down now no worries.

I would like to be the demon prince and possible love interest for the daughter of Death

I am impressed with your stride, Mythos. I would like to apologize for anything offensive I had said to you during my critique. I'm more passionate over my beliefs than anything else. The only point remaining is that she is too powerful in her fighting skills, especially considering shes had no prior training. You mentioned she was a natural with stealing, and that can be learnt over time, but wielding a blade is no joke.
It takes many years to master that, much less summoning. Summoning anything would be a minor thing at best, even the most trained of mages have to surround themselves in their studies for what you proclaim to be learned on hand. Healing I'll give with the incarnation demon, but not being able to die takes away from the tension of the possibility of dying, don't you think?

She isn't the daughter of death but she is close to it but not death daughter XD . Welcome Mike dragon princess told me to expect you. Sure you can be an interest of the assassin.

Demons are allowed to have any power as long as it's not over board.

As my powers are advanced but in the beginning of the rp they are not what you would call amazing but they get the job done.

Alright I will admit you are right but her powers are not fully like that in the beginning of the rp. This is the last powers she gets when they are fully made. She knows how to use daggers and very small but dangerous needles that she has in her sleeves and shoes. These powers and mastery are not all the way up in the beginning. She is great assassin in the beginning famous for a rumor of the town that she killed the king (not true, her mother killed the king) and ever since then she took after her mother and learned from her mother assassination and fighting.

*looks at above comment* you still didn't remove her being the daughter of Death then? Let me ask you this then. "How does Death itself bring about life of it's own?"
Something my friend pointed out to me.
Edit: Nvm

Music the powers posted are her final powers not what happens in the brining of the rp. They are downgraded to teleporting magic and summon wolves (made of hell material) and her assassin skills are above most assassins but as I posted with that power she has flaws like every demon out there.

I will make any other changes because I want my players to be happy and healthy. That's what a. Good gm does anyway.

You still can't learn unless you're taught, especially in the world of Assassins. I'm not saying she can't master it, but really... every master has had to learn from someone :/

Her mother taught her look at her history. At the age of nine she started learning from her mother in the ways of assassination and ever since then became very good at it not a pro but good enough to get the job done.

Alrighty. And the summoning?

Her father showed her how to do that since he was reincarnation he has a small amount of summoning power which she is still learning she can only summon hellhounds that are made out of evil energy. They can't be completely controlled but she can make them go away if she so pleased. The wolves don't listen to even high ranking demons they are their own wolves not controlled. She can just summon and control then for like four minutes before they run free.

*crawls in* can I join in on this fun please *flobs on back showing I meant no harm*

*crawls in* can I join in on this fun please *flops on back showing I meant no harm*

Alright then.

Dragon Princess? I haven't seen you since you abandoned your own rp :/

Ah dragon. Welcome ^_^

Oh hey music. Sorry about that the or never lifted off so I left it. Gah and life was being an ass to me.

*wiggles out of woodwork...*
I'll take a side character, thank you!
*wiggles back into woodwork...*

ReaptheMusic said
*looks at above comment* you still didn't remove her being the daughter of Death then? Let me ask you this then. "How does Death itself bring about life of it's own?"
Something my friend pointed out to me.
Edit: Nvm

Lol. In the Once Upon A Time RP, my character is The Shadow of Godfather Death, but is pretty much considered his son. Or course, we're going by fairy tales mainly, so...

Just make a character ^_^

Side Character CS

Name:
Spinel (though, it’s a pretty awkward name, so he has people call him Phil instead)

Age:
23

Family Bloodline:
___ human family line, who are gifted every other other generation with the power of ‘Perfect Elimination.’

History:
For the first twenty years of his life, he was raised by his small, lower class family to respect and understand life…since he was born with the power of ‘Perfect Elimination’. For a person born with such a responsibility, he had to be raised to be responsible...and to eventually make the right choice in the future, on who he’d be destined to use this power on. Though it sounds like a heavy sort of fate, he was raised with love, respect, and compassion…he had a good life. Now, Spinel is into his third year of his twenty year travel. Twenty years of life lived, and now twenty years of live searching. At present, he’s working in the Gale village as a guard for a minor noble’s house, but plans to leave in a year or two to elsewhere in the country.

Personality:
A kind and compassionate man, though curious and sometimes even sceptical about far reaches of the world. Spinel knows to keep his power under wraps, and is very serious about this long journey.

Weapons:
Plain steel sword (skilled)

Powers:
Perfect Elimination – Instantly kill one person of the user’s choice, and in the case of an immortal, completely erase them from existence. Can only be used once.

Appearance:
Six feet tall.