Keep Spoilers To This Thread, Don't Ruin Things For Others On Skype UGH <3

Because more people need to jump on this bandwagon of writing spam fictions.

Takes place in an alternate reality, some specifics of the differences are pointed out in the writing, although more will become clear.

Liberties have been taken with personalities and behaviours for the sake of the story.

It's not well written, shut up, do better if you don't like it.

Also you can leave comments in the docs. Just highlight a thing, right click, comment, whatever. or not




Interlude 1; A Stab in the Dark

Fuck yes.

This is the best fanfic ever.

I like how instead of commanding the cop to leave or something less harmful Jorick jumps straight to making him shoot himself right in the fucking face.

This is glorious. Please continue.

I'm the Harry Potter

Smiral said
I'm the Harry Potter

Protagonists are nerds.

This is pretty fucking great. All the fourth wall leaning is fun, and my character is kinda badass. :D

ImANargleHunter said
I like how instead of commanding the cop to leave or something less harmful Jorick jumps straight to making him shoot himself right in the fucking face.

He can only give so many commands before he's unable to do more. Best to give ones with a lasting effect where necessary!

I mean that cop sure ain't gonna be a problem no more.

This is a nice read.

As I said on Skype, I friggin' love this so far. :D That's some quality entertainment, and you have captured the essence of Smiral way too friggin' well.

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Originally planned on waiting a couple days before beginning chapter 2.

lolnope beginning chapter 2 now weeeee~

Elendra said
beginning chapter 2 now weeeee~

Woo!

Yes.

Best Spamfic.

10/10

Keep up the good work.

Also, Jorick is Lelouch? I find this amusing.

Kaga said
Also, Jorick is Lelouch?

I had that same thought at first.

Who?

Elendra said
Who?

It's an animu character.

He has the ability to make someone do whatever he wants.

Elendra said
Who?

Someone who has the ability to give an absolute command to those that looked directly to his eyes. Any command goes and no will save, but he can only do it to each person once unless someone has something to negate/nullify the effect afterward.

weeaboo scum

Smiral said
weeaboo scum

Nerd sympathizer.