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FireHeartWolf said
Name: Avelyn (Avie) Morozova Age: 15Gender: FAppearance: Ability to unlock: Ferrokinesis (Metal Manipulation)Personality: ~Don't like to decide in a CS sorry :P~Bio: Avelyn's mother died just before Avie was due to be conceived, so had to be taken to a special ward and stayed in an incubator and intense care for the first year of her life. She was taken home when she was 2, but due to constant loss of breath and random spasms of pain, she was shipped back into hospital. She lived in the hospital most of her life- it wasn't until she was 11 that she escaped one night and ran away. What Avelyn didn't know was that she was being followed, and woke up in a small cell-like room. It was then, on her 12th birthday, that she joined the group, alone and confused. She hasn't had any spasms or breathing problems since.


If her mother died before she was conceived, it means she wouldn't exist....
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Kay changed it
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It's still not right. Conceived is when the egg and sperm join in the early stages of child development,meaning it's the beginning of a baby. What you've wrote means the mother would die while having intercourse and childbirth at the same time 0_0
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I think she means died in childbirth please fix it to say her mother died in childbirth that would make more sense I can wait to accept you till then.
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PsychoticBreakDown said
I think she means died in childbirth please fix it to say her mother died in childbirth that would make more sense I can wait to accept you till then.


I knew that, I just hate seeing something with flaws in it :p
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You learn something new every day 0_o anyway done may I be accepted?
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FireHeartWolf said
Name: Avelyn (Avie) Morozova Age: 15Gender: FAppearance: Ability to unlock: Ferrokinesis (Metal Manipulation)Personality: ~Don't like to decide in a CS sorry :P~Bio: Avelyn's mother died from giving birth to Avie, so had to be taken to a special ward and stayed in an incubator and intense care for the first year of her life. She was taken home when she was 2, but due to constant loss of breath and random spasms of pain, she was shipped back into hospital. She lived in the hospital most of her life- it wasn't until she was 11 that she escaped one night and ran away. What Avelyn didn't know was that she was being followed, and woke up in a small cell-like room. It was then, on her 12th birthday, that she joined the group, alone and confused. She hasn't had any spasms or breathing problems since.


Accepted join the others in the cafeteria.
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Sorry but I am retiring RPGuild :(
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So you just join then leave what is this ditching central.
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