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Sampling random images for general shape/form and using the pen tool to make up the emblem shapes.

Used this one to get the outline for Quin's for example.

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Finished! What do you guys think?

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Name: Victoria Cordelia Caesar (prefers being called Cordelia)

Nickname: V.C

Species: Human

Age: 17

Aura Color: Crimson Red

Semblance: Martis Ira (Wrath of Mars)

When activated Martis Ira confers Cordelia red/white wings on her back and the ability to fly at great speed and power. Her eyes turn dark red and a dark red aura surrounds her.

Noted by her father Lucius, Martis Ira is a powerful semblance. Lucius before his death noted that Martis is in its early stages and believes that Cordelia has not even unlocked its true potential.

Weapon:

Bellona and Minerva were both created by Cordelia as a honor to the family warriors of Bellona Caesar and Minerva Caesar who fought against the Grimm when mankind was only in its early stages.

Gladio Bellonae (Sword of Bellona)



Bellona is simple design though durable, powerful and fearsome as noted by her brother Constantine when he first laid eyes upon it. The sword length is the same as a Roman Spatha though has some differences. A ring is attached at the end of base and Cordelia can swing the sword around and throw it at enemies. The ring opens to the dust tubes port which can be filled with 4 dust tubes all of them red dust. Just at the start of the blade is a visible sword like symbol which represent her dust capacity. When the Bellona uses dust, the sword is engulfed into flames and burns anything it comes into contact.

The swords color is silver but from the middle to the top of the blade is black.

Bellona can also transform into an assault rifle that holds a 100 clip. The assault rifle has an RPM of 650.



Clipeo Minervae (Shield of Minerva)

Minerva is large shield that is red and has gold markings. The shield displays the emblem of the Caesar Family. Notable is the round sliver ball in the shield that is used for charging at opponents. Minerva has the ability reflect bullets and attacks with high durability and the shield can be thrown at enemies. The shield is also collapsible and can form into a gauntlet when she needs to use her Assault Rifle.



Dust: Cordelia uses Red Dust (Fire) on Bellona. The Red Dust gives the sword the properties of fire.

Other Equipment:

A Loculus (leather satchel) carrying various small items including her dust.

Skills & Abilities:

Being from a family that created custom weapons, procured Hunters/Huntress and fought in the War, it is no surprise she is a fighter, an exceptionally good one. She is trained in hand to hand combat though only uses as a last resort or when not fighting against a serious enemy.

Description:

Casual Form

When she is not in battle wears a black jacket, a white t-shirt underneath the jacket, black boots and blue shorts. Her hair is elegantly black and eyes are orange-red.



Combat Armor

Cordelia wears a lorica segmentata (body armor) that cover her chest body and underneath it a tunic. On her body armor has 4 clip pouches. A manica (armguard) on her right arm and left arm, shin guards on her legs, a red scarf, and a Galea that she can retract and become a neck collar that she can remove. What is a notable feature on her armor is red cloak with the family emblem on it.

She will look something like this


Personality

Cordelia is one the most seriously, cold, calculating person you will ever meet. She has a huge pride and ego coming from the Caesar Family put off a lot of people due to the families infamy. She likes to tease people and annoy them with her sweet voice and when combined with the way she dresses and her orange-red eyes makes her look like an evil b*tch.

Deep down though, she is depressed and traumatized by her actions. She has kept these memories tucked away by bullying others that support the Faunus or are of the Faunus species as a way for her to repress her memories. Her pride and ego also help repress her memories of Dies Ultionis.

Cordelia still has rebellious personality she had as a kid. She sometimes breaks rules or circumvents them depending on the rule and uses logic and reasons to justify her actions. She has always gotten away with it due to her stature though has pissed off many people in the past including her family.

History

From the Mistral Region, Cordelia was born into the Caesar Family known for procuring Hunter/Huntresses and creating weapons. The house fought in the War along with other noted families such as the Sakanade family. Caesar House harbors a deep distrust of the Faunus viewing their species fit as slaves for Mankind while they’d continue the fighting against the Grimm. The surname Caesar when mentioned or heard bears a sentiment of either love or hate.

Cordelia at an early age was raised strictly by her parents in the massive family estate. By the age of six she was already learning how to fight through weekly hand to hand combat training and learning about the history of war. Though the weekly trainings, lessons on being a noble family member, war lessons made her rebellious at a young age. Despite that her parents did spend time with her and took her to the cities or to the Forest of Vale for picnics and the occasional fight against the Grimm which she saw with admiration.

Though her parents, Lucius and Hera spent most of their time teaching at Sanctum. Cordelia was raised around her family members who had opinions and ideology that would influence her. Older members of the family influenced Cordelia by speaking about the Faunus with distrust, negativity and hate for other members who have discarded the old ideology. Cordelia still at a young age believed all the information the members of the old ideology. At the same members of the new ideology did the same. It was a tug of war. Both members of the ideologies tried to bring Cordelia to their respective beliefs. Her parents interestingly though did not speak anything about the Faunus and were described as ambivalent on the Faunus. Cordelia would remain ambivalent on the beliefs about the Faunus, and human dominance until she was thirteen.

An event that would traumatize Cordelia was when she saw the death of her parents at the hands of a Faunus. Cordelia watched the video footage from Sanctum cameras showing him or her with a powerful green semblance and large sword easily slay her parents as she watched blood erupt from their bodies through the camera footage, her parents lying on the ground, lifeless.

The assassination of Lucius and Hera Caesar became known throughout all of Remnant. When the spilling of a Caesar family occurs by the Faunus, the Seven Days of Vengeance (Dies Ultionis) is launched by the Caesar Family to avenge their fallen family members. Members of the Caesar House that did join committed mass atrocities to the Faunus in the Mistral Region and by other racist Humans groups in the continent. Shops were raided, Faunus were attacked only making the situation between the Humans and Faunus worse.

Cordelia joined in on Dies Ultionis. She attacked the various different cities of Mistral with Faunus populations wearing a black and red armor and a face mask depicting the ancient family warrior Bellona. The Faunus saw the Armored Maiden as the Maiden of Death as she burned down Faunus homes and shops and attacked the Faunus who cowered at the sight of her flaming sword. Cordelia or the Maiden of Death became a significant talk topic in the media.

After Dies Ultionis, Cordelia gained horrific nightmares. Fires appeared in her dreams, the corpses of the Faunus she killed; she was traumatized by what she did. She wondered if what she did was right as she saw the broken and sad faces of the Faunus. Though she was praised by her members of the old ideology for her actions against the Faunus and that she was doing a great service to mankind. Before she left the family estate for Beacon, she still hated the Faunus and believed what she did was right. Yet deep down tucked in her soul, she knew it was wrong.

Other

Cordelia is seen on advertisement billboards marketing Caesar Weapon Corporation with the notable slogan “Providing you with protection since the dawn of mankind.”

She has a brother and another sister and a total of six cousins going to Beacon.
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Zerochan doesn't allow hotlinking and my only Gripe is that her Semblance seems awefully versitile. Wings, fear effect, heat detectors, and ten floating fire javines? As over the top RWBY often is, ease off on some of the abilities.
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Well, first off you cant hotlink to zerochan. your first image is broken.

Anywho, more importantly, she thinks your semblance is kinda overpowered. She counted five different things it does while everyone else's are fairly simple and does only one or two things. And really, she thinks a passive fear effect on everything close by is pretty broken in general. Dont really have a problem with anything else but really think that needs to be toned down a lot. Not even the headmasters semblance does that much
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The consistent grammatical errors also raise alarms.
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Yeah, she noticed some of those too.
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I suspect she uses a tablet. Or even a phone. But still, the Semblance needs to be rebalanced. Flaming properties to the weapons could be achieved through Dust and I might allow for flaming wings, but Fear control would need to be regulated by the GM's and can't be with the flaming wings. Fire spears also seem rather unneeded. I would also suggest not having Thermal vision if only because she would be the fourth character with a detection based Semblance, though if you want that ability to be your sole Semblance i wont prevent it.
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Asuras said
The consistent grammatical errors also raise alarms.


Ya I already know since I was in rush to get in this quick. Spacing, fragments that needs revising and spell error and will fix that later. Just want to get this in and stop holding up your time for this to start.

Anyway I will get to fixing the semblance aspect and rework it. One thing that will stay is the wings.

EDIT: Got the zerochan link working and the semblance has only been reduced to wings. Could not work out the fear, dread and terror ability of Martis Ira. Removed thermal vision.
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Well, for one, I would say that I'm disappointed in the fact that she ISNT a Faunus hater. Vey disappointed. It's like no one enjoys making racist peeps anymore. So scrubby. Maximum disappointment.

Can you do me a favour in your bio and say that the Caesar family fought alongside the Sakanade family during the Faunus Wars or whatever? Could be a nice tie in to my possible second character.
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Still says that she has Thermal Vision that allows her to see Heat Vision.
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Those are the same thing.
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Which makes me wonder what exactly she's trying to tell me. Maybe she meant Thermal Vision to see heat signatures? Either way, just for the safe of clarity it should be removed.
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Well, for one, I would say that I'm disappointed in the fact that she ISNT a Faunus hater. Vey disappointed. It's like no one enjoys making racist peeps anymore. So scrubby. Maximum disappointment. Can you do me a favour in your bio and say that the Caesar family fought alongside the Sakanade family during the Faunus Wars or whatever? Could be a nice tie in to my possible second character.


Well originally she WAS supposed to be a Faunus hater but I changed it because I didn't want to become the most hateed character again. Yet if we have no Faunus hater in this RP, I can rework the CS easily since all I need to do is edit the history and personality.

So yup, going to rework CS.

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Which makes me wonder what exactly she's trying to tell me. Maybe she meant Thermal Vision to see heat signatures? Either way, just for the safe of clarity it should be removed.


Removed.
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Looks good. now we just need Irish to finish up.

Also I would approve of Fauna hater if you made her like that. Brings drama.
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She wouldn't have to be the most hated character if she were a Faunus hater. She'll probably have a Faunus on her team, which could add a lot of fun drama and helpful character development that could make for an interesting game. If I had made a human they'd definitely been a racist, just because it'd be a fun character to play.

Also sorry if none of this has made sense. Using my phone and half awake
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She approves of faunus racist character. Someones gotta be that guy.
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So how are the team composition? Is Oroku, Quin, Azalea, and Yu actually a team? I need to know this stuff.
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We've not decided since we've still been waiting on CS to finish. But we got these names and Tree is practically done so might as well actually get around to forming teams properly. She still votes for OPAQ as a team which would leave CVT and Y for the other team though, which might not quite work as a team name.

Clementine FairChild
Quin Renard
Oroku Azure
Prudence Nella
Azalea Prayers
Yu Wūyā
Victoria Cordelia Caesar
Tarkus Sloan
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You know, if you changed Quin's name to Lien, Asuras would finally have his Team OPAL.
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Isn't Lien the currency in RWBY? That'd be like naming your kid dollars, heh.
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