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[This thread is locked for now, am seeking no new partners]

Hello fellow users of Roleplayer Guild! I am an eighteen year old college student eager to start up an RP.

It's been a long time since I joined up with the site long ago, and while I've been on and off plenty of times I still find myself coming back. Sadly it's hard for me to find the time to RP as much as I used to, however when the mood strikes me I always enjoy writing out a good story. Over five years ago I wrote my very first responses on this site in the month of May 2009, sending out traditional introductions and having my first RP be a vampire highschool thread(One that actually lasted quite awhile surprisingly). I also have very fond memories of the first 1x1 I had ever done, performed with the user Yume with a simple premise along with simple writing to back it up. That one didn't last as long, but still surviving long enough for me to have invested myself enough into the story. I would use those threads to jump off from toward future threads.

Anyway cutting straight to the point, I'm in the mood for a 1x1 with one person to not only practice writing but just to pass the time for fun. However after five years since I've joined this site I wanted to do something nostalgic, so I'm in the mood to 'recreate' the 1x1 I did five years ago. And by recreate I mean take the very basic premise I used back in the day and perhaps edited it enough to make just a little more coherent. A little less basic than it once was.

Basic Idea:

There are two kingdoms in a fantasy world without magic, simply made up of the human elements we find in this world. Both kingdoms are locked in an ever going war between one another: Hadrum and Saramus. The kingdom of Saramus has a dark and barbaric culture, the kingdom that would invade the 'peaceful' Hadrum kingdom. Now these nations are at war locked in an ongoing and unchanging stalemate. The story revolves around two people. The first is a knight of Saramus, a soldier famous for his skill and effectiveness at slaughtering countless Hadrum knights on the battlefield. He is dubbed the Black Knight, feared and hated by many who know his reputation. The second is a brilliant military general of the Hadrum kingdom, a woman who rose through the ranks with popularity and intelligence to beat back the Saramus kingdom. After many years of frustration this Black Knight of Saramus is ordered by his king to infiltrate one of Hadrum's most secure fortresses and kidnap this general, gaining enough information and leverage to potentially crush the kingdom of Hadrum into oblivion.

Edited Version:

This will follow under the template of the basic idea, I won't really change the original version of the idea. However at the time it was really played out like a basic RP love story. There was almost immediate romance and attraction between the two characters, and it fell into what many RP's fall into as Soap Opera Syndrome. It took a page out of Twilight, so here's where things change a bit. The female general will play the part of a princess of Hadrum in line for the crown, with the knight playing the part of an illegitimate son but possible heir to the Saramus crown. The premise is there and whoever I play with has free reign to decide how it plays out, however the overlaying story will involve these two characters forced to come together to unite the land under a single banner. I am aiming for a realistic style of a relationship between these characters, meaning that just because one is male and the other is female that they aren't destined to fall in love. I want there to be conflict, hate even between the two of them when they both discover each other's true identity. I will evolve this into eventual trust and friendship, perhaps even some amusing reactions when they discover they must eventually marry out of necessity to fuse these two nations into one. Romance can blossom, I just would like some realistic climb into it.

What I eventually want is a sort of adventure story, these two reluctant companions forced to travel the world to gain allies and eventually combat two enemies. Saramus isn't 'evil' and Hadrum isn't 'good', both sides eventually showing that their ideals aren't best for the overall well being of their citizens. I wouldn't mind a dragon age esque style of gathering an army to face opposing factions, but there always could be elements of betrayal, political intrigue, mystery, things to keep the idea interesting. It would really be up to the person I'm playing with to help me direct where the story will eventually go, but I hope to find someone who is just as creative as I am. I have a general direction of where I would like it to lead, but I would in no way be upset should someone freely deviate the story into another direction(If that direction is coherent at least).

What To Expect:

-I don't have a minimum post count as I don't believe in that silly nonsense. I post what I think is fitting: Don't cringe at my over ten paragraph posts or scoff at a one paragraph post I may send out. I don't force myself to write many or few words, I write what I think is best in a situation.
-I'm creative and like to direct the story in certain directions. If you make a character I will use him unless something is said otherwise, for a collaborative story I would like to direct certain events as well.
-I get bored easily. Whether that be through absence or just dull events I can find myself tiring of an idea very easily. Keeping active and at the very least keeping in contact with me can prevent things like this. Just know that there is a possibility I might just tire of the thread altogether.
-I have few limits, unless stated otherwise there are certain situations I might not hold back with certain elements. This can include gruesome war atrocities or a terrible man killing a child. I will try to assault anyone with heavy posts immediately, but know that unless stated otherwise I won't hold back for the sake of the story.
-Last but not least I am a human. Kind of a weird bullet, but outside of my posts I'm still just a human being. Expect me to want to just talk and say hello on occasions, that there are times when I'm just not in the mood to post. Times when I have a life or feelings beyond the thread, but I trust you will be human as well.

What I Expect:

-That you will be imaginative and have a head of your own. Be creative, don't just be along for the ride I beg of you. As I stated earlier I tend to get bored rather easily, and if I'm stuck being the driver and doing all the work then I will burn out of interest very quickly. I might as well just write a novel myself then.
-Post frequently. Not every hour, but try to generally keep it one post per day. I understand, sometimes it may be hard for me to post on occasions. However if you find yourself unable to write something within the next day or two at least somewhat inform me of the matter.
-Keep in touch! I wouldn't mind just talking, outside of writing I would very much just enjoy simple conversation from time to time. But more importantly let me know if you'll be away, or are having writers block, or simply too steamed to get a post down and I'll do the same. You earn brownie points if you have Skype, but PM's are passable.
-I can't read minds, if you want something known say it. If you don't want me to control a character say something. (Though if I control a character I'd stay true to their character, a person with a heart of gold wouldn't outright slaughter an NPC.) If you feel uncomfortable with certain elements say something. LET ME KNOW!
-Have fun, if anything else just have fun with this RP. This isn't work, this isn't a job that you have to do out of obligation. If you're bored with the idea tell me, don't just keep trudging along hoping it will get better. I completely feel you and understand, if you're not having fun than why RP in the first place?

Also I will RP though a thread, but like I said like to have OOC through Skype or PM. Email is just a bit too slow and cumbersome for me.

Decisions:

I only feel like doing one 1x1, but rather than doing the typical first come first serve basis I'd like to leave this thread a day or two and see who expresses interest. If you do I'd like you to submit your own general/princess, and the one I enjoy more I'll RP with. The template is simple enough, but this isn't really a job interview. Don't feel like this is some competition to win against others, I'm just in the mood for a simple RP. There are dozens of 1x1's out there if you aren't chosen, or at worst case make your own. If even just one person expresses their interest with the idea than I will be happy, but please don't submit interest if you genuinely aren't interest in the premise I have put forward. Also be sure that you know what to expect and what I expect from you in the bullets above this response.

Once again a reminder of your character:

A general of Hadrum's military, as well as in line to the throne bearing the title of princess. The story starts out in one of Hadrum's border cities, however is one of Hadrum's most secure military strongholds and really nothing more than a glorified fortress. You will be in command of this city, and while in my head I saw it as an elevated structure with a system of elevators leading into the heart of the city, I encourage you to come up with some design of your own if you want.

If you are interested in this project post a character sheet of the general you wish to RP as, and possibly double up with another character if you wish. The template follows:

Name: This will be your chance to impress me, what will make or break your consideration for this RP- OH I'm completely joking. It's a name, not rocket science.

Age: Simple enough. Child prodigy or an aging elder seems to push the boundaries of the story a bit, but you all have free range here.

Appearance: I find images a bit more fun, however nothing beats a great and detailed description. Illustrate your character how you'd like.

General Personality: Simple enough. Not set in stone, but is your character ruthless to get the job done or kind to care for her troops. You can decide.

Status: Do not give me a biography, save that for character development in the RP. Whether it be a dead family member the Black Knight might have killed, a dark childhood, a forbidden secret, etc. etc. save such reveals and past events regarding your character until future notice. Status is referring to present day. What is your character doing, where are they located, current problems, current affiliations, a background of their present situation but not of their entire lives.

Anyway that's a bit it. I meant to post up my character but...well it's midnight and I'm tired. But putting the interest out there, and at least you all don't have to be pressured to follow any certain template that I place in my character. (Oh he uses description for his appearance, guess I have to use description now. His status is long= My status is long. His age is young I will put my character young etc. etc.) Do what you all would like to do.

Conclusion:

Well hopefully you all find some interest in this idea and my style of RPing your sort of thing. That's really all that's left to say. I'm going to bed.

EDIT: OH one last thing, you all may notice I left things very vague and have questions about the world. Don't ask them. If you're confused about something or wondering what sort of this lore this generic fantasy world has then I encourage you to make it yourself. Will there be fantasy creatures, magic? No idea, I have the basic premise but as to what else I wish to add that's still up in the open. Not only do you earn brownies points for having a Skype, but I practically require a good imagination in an RP partner.
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I'm interested. You want my characters here or over PM? Also, I do have Skype.
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^Seconded. I am very interested. It was very refreshing to read through your post. Please let me know where you'd like a brief bio (I prefer to describe the character in story) in the role play. I, too, have Skype. I also have YIM and Steam.
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Stranger said
I'm interested. You want my characters here or over PM? Also, I do have Skype.


Just post your character here, I'd be fine with it.

Carantathraiel said
^Seconded. I am very interested. It was very refreshing to read through your post. Please let me know where you'd like a brief bio (I prefer to describe the character in story) in the role play. I, too, have Skype. I also have YIM and Steam.


I don't really know what you mean, I asked you NOT to include a biography in the character template I provided for that very reason. You will be describing your characters current situation and role in the "Status" section of the character template, as close of a biography as I want.
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Prince/Black Knight character
Name: Enson Nebaaz II

Age: 27

Appearance: A tall, very handsome young man with short black hair and stunning green eyes. He is well-muscled, but not body-builder buff. Outside of combat, he can normally be seen wearing royal clothing, his preference being a crisp, white, military-esque uniform with shoulder pads ((similar to those of the prince in Cinderella)) and a white cape that reaches down to his knees.
While armored, as the name suggests, his armor is entirely black. He uses a classic sword and shield. The sword is an ornate longsword that boasts an impressive three-foot long blade. The shield is a kite shield with a red background and the symbol of Saramus emblazoned in black in the middle of the shield. He wears a closed-face helmet, so no one knows his true identity on the field of battle. His armor is stylish, but not overtly ornate; the design focuses more on defense and mobility than decoration.

General Personality: Prince Enson is a noble man, and not just because of his royal status. He is always chivalrous, and is always on his best behaviour in public. In private, however, the prince finds a great joy in combat, something that hearkens back to his warrior ancestry. He invented the Black Knight as a way to sate his love of battle by fighting on the front lines. He takes careful steps to ensure that no one knows of his double life.
Despite his public faces, however, the prince is still a noble, and is often distrustful of those around him. He despises the nobility, as he feels they leave themselves too detached from the world around them, concerned only with lining their own pockets and advancing their own causes. This has forced the prince to grow up cynical and cautious, giving him the cunning of a fox and the viciousness of an angry grizzly, but also leaving him with few actual friends. Not that he much cares (currently). Also, despite his chivalry, his culture has instilled one very dangerous belief in him: women are weak. Saramus's culture teaches that it is the men who fight, while the women should only stay home, care for the children, and feed their warriors. No one in Saramus believes a woman can do anything in battle.

Status: Currently, the Prince is preparing to send off his men into another skirmish with Hadrum. While most believe he is making a simple speech, he is also having his personal armor bearers prepare his Black Knight. After all, he has heard a very important general from Hadrum will be overseeing this battle, and the Prince can't wait to challenge him.

Princess/General character:
Name: Sateena Alivandra (Tina to her friends)

Age: 26

Appearance: Sateena stands about 5'10", with light skin, blue eyes, and long silver-blonde hair that falls to her lower back. Despite the constant admonitions of her mother, she prefers to let it hang naturally, rather than putting it up in "the ridiculous knots and loops that the nobles seem to enjoy." She also often foregoes the flowing, poofy dresses that her mother has made for her, preferring to wear her military uniform. That said, she does keep a few dresses for royal balls and other such events. Her uniform is mostly brown, with golden borders and three buttons down the center. Despite her station, she never wears a hat. While in uniform, her rapier is always at her right hip (she is left-handed).

General Personality: As royalty, Sateena was tutored in many subjects, but military tactics and history were her favorites. She often saw it as a game where each side would move their pieces in an attempt to outmaneuver the other. And she was good at it. The games (actual games) she played with her instructors often ended with her victory, sometimes against real officers. Eventually, she opted to join the military at a young age, using her rank and skill to start off higher in the ranks than most others (though not yet at General), despite the wishes of her mother, who always attempts to mold her into what Sateena calls "another typical girly-girl princess". Even with their differences, Sateena and her mother are very close. Her father, the King, cares little for her, spending most of his attention on Sateena's older brother, Bryson.
After years of service, Sateena made the rank of General, which she considers her highest honor. Upon reaching her rank, she immediately removed all the nobles from her unit, replacing them with men (and a few women) she knew could do the job right. She cares very little about politics and is not afraid to step on peoples' toes (or cut them off completely) to get the job done. This has made her very hated by the nobles (again, not that she cares), but highly respected among her soldiers. She values her soldiers' lives, but will not hesitate to do what must be done. She is harsh and has little patience for stupidity, but those who are closest to her know she also has a soft side that she reserves only for those she trusts. Anyone else? Stand back.

Status: Currently, Sateena is mobilizing her forces to battle against Saramus. She has heard rumors that the dreaded Black Knight will be joining this battle, and is currently working on a plan to capture or neutralize him for good.
I know a lot of that has something of a bio mixed in, but I meant it as an explanation as to WHY they both think like they do. If you're interested, I'm willing to play either one.
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I was really only looking for a princess general character, but I do appreciate the ability to play both genders (As people should be able to do). Your character sheets were fine, however I still want to keep this open a little while longer for Carantathraiel's character sheet and to see if others are interested in the premise. Status was a bit shorter than I was expecting, but you did provide everything I had asked for so I see no problems with it.
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Excellent. Let me know if you want to RP.
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Well at least one character sheet is down, so I will be closing this thread tomorrow if I don't see any others posted. I always hate people who lock a thread before I post a character sheet, so if there is anyone else interested this thread will be locked tomorrow at 12pm EST. Who knows, maybe this will be all the interest I have but just in case right?
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