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Aww I was hoping the limitations I made to telekinesis was good enough, simply because my race has no other real way to build things. It had limitations depending on the size, and they could only move things that were directly in front of them, but I understand if it doesn't fit well with you. As for battle I figured torches, and explosive substances could be the best weapon against them, but I can change that too if you wish.


Arguably the fact they're probably not in a solid form and don't have a brain (or well protected brain) would put them at a disadvantage to build up a society. When I read the app all I could think of was effectively playing D+D monsters in a region of the map as if you're playing something like Spore. Which is to say a whole lot of nothing interesting and rudimentary building.

A soft shell over the brain would probably lead to a lot developmentally early damage impairing them. Or not having any way to really manipulate things would serve as a ceiling to how far they can go. Even trying to get the Pegasid to a point I can work with them was hard without invoking some sort of relationship with something with more fingers.

On that topic I feel like a second race should be invoked for me to better explain things on one end, to at least cover the possibility that I may not get permission to directly control possible exclave communities of other races.
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Posting a Race App as soon as possible, just a tad slow...
First time RPing!! Saw this thread after browsing the internet, and registered just to take part

Hopefully I don't embarrass myself or irritate you all at my lack of inexperience!
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Is it okay to post yet?

Or are we waiting for more apps?

And should I make a nation app for novgrad?
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Posting a Race App as soon as possible, just a tad slow...First time RPing!! Saw this thread after browsing the internet, and registered just to take part Hopefully I don't embarrass myself or irritate you all at my lack of inexperience!


Welcome to Roleplaying Guild (and to the world of play-by-post), fellow! Holy shit, I didn't think that I would make it on Google.

AlienBastard said
Is it okay to post yet?Or are we waiting for more apps?And should I make a nation app for novgrad?


One more app (or until Toaw fixes his) and we start.

You don't have to make a nation app for Novgrad (unless you want to detail it).

EDIT: Dinh, you don't need permission for a second race, just make it straight-away.

EDIT 2: Made a couple of edits in my app, more specifically, in where it explains what is considered a town and a village.
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Sikittok tonrar

Thee Slikittok tonrar are a predatory amphibious cave dwelling race of reptile like creatures, that differ in size and colour. Generic Slik appearances are typically darker colours consisting of purples, deep blues and dark greens. They have a carapace of harden armour scales along their whole body besides lighter softer, leather like ‘weak spots’ under their chins and arms. However dominate males and females brought together by natural selection and cultural beliefs have produced pedigree like offspring with brighter markings and a greater bulking mass of a creature. The Slikittok tonrar typically are Quadraped when out of their natural habitat for speedy manoeuvres, although in their dwellings or when partaking in combat they will raise on two legs for practically in combat and their daily activities. Slikittok tonrar creatures have bulky heads with rows of sharp carnivorous teeth, and two sharp horns either on top of the head or below the jaw. These creatures have six limbs, the hind legs are powerful thicker log like, to assist them with lunging out of the water at great velocity or to lunge at prey inland. While the other two limbs that are humanoid arms and hands yet the digits of the hand form sharp vicious claws but yet still capable of gripping and holding simple tools of some sort. There final two limbs possess cruel spikes that due to evolution have almost came obsolete yet still provided additional sensory benefits and stability while leaping at great speeds and heights, and of course skew prey!
Slikittok tonrara, reproduce as a typical reptilian would, although the females of the tribes approach and seek worthy decorated males who have been trial and tested seasoned combatant, too ultimately better the next generation of strong hunters and warriors.
Behaviour and cultural of this race is very warlike and aggressive, and cruel. Despite the nature of the race, there is a hierarchy to unsure that the species doesn’t succumb to extinction! As previously without these larger ‘pedigree’ domination males, chaos and open warfare was ripe, among the broods that made the population of this race. At a time sliks could only trust their blood related, while the swamp was a host too cannibalism and genocide. Only recently after the birth of these larger beings the race has become more civilised and coexistent of one and other, and not like mindless cold hearted reptiles they once were before. The swamps and lakes warring factions ceased to exist as the average sliks flock too these larger beings and treated them like deity, with undying loyalty, out of faith as these larger forms of them self’s were birthed too lead them, or out of fear of becoming the bottom of the food chain. Now the sliks strive for greater things, and the population have band together with some form of feudal system to keep the peace and to overcome the odds and finally become as one for the greater good of the species, however old habits die hard and many are torn or struggling too adapt to the new ways of an organised social race.



Due to their habitat of being secluded submerged caves in either deep lake or swamps, contact with other races is almost non-existent, even among themselves out of fear of coming across another warring blood thirsty sliks looking for glory or just supper, the race is quite isolated from the world.

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Strengths: Natural Swimmers / scale Armour / night sight / cold resistant /leaping capabilities / camouflage while submerged / lacks empathy / immune to poison

Weakness: Overwhelmed inland / fire / requires moisture / poor eyesight in daylight / aggressive tendencies, predatory instinct, / cannibalistic / lack technological insight / dependant on leaders
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The bells are ringing! The people are cheering! History has begun! (you have been accepted. Quite a great app for a first-timer)

Map to come soon.
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Name: Satyr

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Evolution: The Satyr were born of the mountains where they resided as a foragers amid the rocky outcroppings and valleys for many thousands of years. The advantage of full hands gave the Satyr a distinct advantage in their ability to craft complex tools. Although their homeland greatly hindered their ability to forge a proper life-style and many family tribes lived in migration from one valley to another, gleaning from nature their means to live.

For their early paleolithic history the Satyrs lived in caves throughout their mountain homes, moving from one valley or peak to another. In their travels they left behind an assortment of simple illustrations for the next band. These markings and paintings allowed for new bands to read the previous band's general census of the area. Although the effort was wise, it did little to afford them the time and energies to settle down as a sedimentary race and they would have lived that way for many more centuries.

However winds of change blowed from the north bringing to their homes the Pegasi race. The nomadic lifestyle of the Pegasi did not at first bother them as they kept to the high peaks. But as the numbers grew and they became hungrier tribal raiding against the Satyr intensified forcing many early nameless clans to abandon the mountains in and effort to evade the wings of the Pegasid.

Loose and disorganized the Satyr managed to out range the Pegasi as they put down their roots on the cliffs they once called home.

Settling the coastal lowlands proved a boon to Satyr lifestyle with the opportunity of stationary or semi-nomadic agriculture arose. Satyr civilization developed and branches in the lowlands and their race spread as the population grew. Growth in this range however was difficult to maintain as they went deeper into the cold south and over time many returned slowly to the mountains they had once called home in a forgotten time. The gradual process lead to a split of culture into two major groups: the Dionsydis and the Gyn.

The Gyn is the Dionsidean word for the over-all “uncivilized” of their kin who had fled into the mountains. In the legends, they are written as a race who was banished from the Green Lands by the gods for a number of reasons ranging from sodomy to lethargy and that the hero Pen was tasked to drive them to the land where they must work to live, barring them from the wealth and leisure guaranteed through proper tasking.

In reality the rise of the Gyn is a unwritten mystery and they simply are. As a race of Satyr they no more lack in their ability to work as the Dionsidean. However the major factor that would explain for the coastal, agricultural distrust for the mountain tribes is their taste for meat, which sets them apart considerably from the largely vegetarian lifestyle of the Dionsidean cultures.

The Dionsidean are themselves builders of civilization with a multitude of kingdoms that span the coastal territories. Largely favoring the consumption of sugar-rich fruits and grains their diet for some part often includes fish.

Dionsidean culture is not united, is some part less so than the Pegasid to the north. The largest split in their own cultural-ethnic group lies in the division between the Panien and the Rumen, with the Rumen being subjects to the Pegasid kings who rule over the northern Satyr coast.

The Panien Dionsidean abhore the idea of being a servant and refuse to accept that the Rumen would voluntarily work under another alien race. Their shock has not however translated to a sense of liberal freedom for their fellows and has in fact polarized a potential third schism in the Dionsidean psyche. To them, death would be preferable to servitude.

To the Rumen, the relationship between Pegasid and them is of mutual benefit. Though considered largely second class by the Pegasi nobility or Patricians there exists a relative sense of independence between the two based on the understanding the Satyr will perform their duty as craftsmen or peasants and the Pegasi will fulfill theirs as statesmen and guardians.

Strengths: A nimble race with the physical faculties to make more delicately produced crafts, great runners, well hung.

Weaknesses: In comparison to their neighbors they're not the most maneuverable, even with adept track and field skills. Not being able to fly has greatly effected their ability to range or outpace the Pegasid. Even the mountain dwelling Gyn can not tackle the types of peaks the Pegasid often occupy. In addition they are sensitive to many foods or conditions of foods which bar them from things like grain-based alcohol.

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Satyr (blue) in comparison to the Pegasid (Yellow)
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Accepted.

Anyway, I'm going to sleep. It has been a long day despite I didn't go to school and I spent the time mostly on here.
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6) Your race may not be based off a real life animal or on humans (their variants are included) (unless it’s the reptilians).




Probably should axe this rule or clarify better since it seems mythological creatures are fine even though a good share of them are pretty much chimeras or human + animal hybrids.
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It is a silly rule anyways. Why even bar humans in the first place? Unless you want Magical Furry RP 2014.
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Kinda hope to see more races as to have more races for connecting the evolutionary dots.
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Probably should axe this rule or clarify better since it seems mythological creatures are fine even though a good share of them are pretty much chimeras or human + animal hybrids.


Dinh AaronMk said
It is a silly rule anyways. Why even bar humans in the first place? Unless you want Magical Furry RP 2014.


Yeah, I'm sort of reducing that rule to a mere "No silly races" stuff.
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Wait, so are humans allowed or not? I was thinking about creating a human nation, but I'm not sure what the absolute starting maximum of their tech would, nor if I can even use humans.
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The maximum is around the middle-late classical antiquity. And yes, you can play as humans, the rule now states that you can't play as any silly race (EG: Ponies)
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If ya'll want to know Padshi's inspiration.

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Always with the GoTs and the Ponies Aaron.

Seriously, according to my dad who does free lance work at their facility of horrors those are the two most popular subjects on Deviant Art.

Anyhow kinda sad no more races showed up. I was waiting for a bit to see if anyone else would make any apps this week but since not i'll probably carry on this weekend. I got the time.

Also, should I introduce some troll-like race between myself and Kinkaz geographically as to cause some chaos and to give some way to have early game Player-player interaction? His griffins need some harassment and so do my guys and the Persian pagasids whose eyes fill in more of their skull than their brain have yet to spread westward.
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I'm just sad that nothing more has happened.
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AlienBastard said
Also, should I introduce some troll-like race between myself and Kinkaz geographically as to cause some chaos and to give some way to have early game Player-player interaction? His griffins need some harassment and so do my guys and the Persian pagasids whose eyes fill in more of their skull than their brain have yet to spread westward.


Well, I do need some stuff to make my future plans harder, so why not?

And yes, I'm quite dissapointed that many people, even those intrested, dissapeared after a while. And I don't like posting right after someone else did.
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Why not PM those parties and remind them?
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Honestly, the rule banning humanoids and races based on real animals completely killed my interest in this RP.
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