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Hey, I'm kinda interested in this, but I'm gonna say one thing.

Aristo is pushy and annoying about this Dracon thing, and attempting to dictate the RP that he's trying to join by making numerous demands of the GM is kinda asshole-ish.
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Alright, I've read the first two Eragon books but that was forever ago so it slipped my mind. That makes sense, this looks fun. Thanks.
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Hello LeeRoy! Welcome as well! Aristocles is not going to join the rp. I gave him way too many chances. Lets all just move on.

And I warn you guys, this rp is going to be quite different feom the rest. For example, CSs will be a lot less important. I think its unecessary to spend 5 hours on a CS when revealing things during the rp is so much more fun and also interesting for others. When have you ever read a book with a character's personality description at the front? Probably never.

What do we have to know about a char then? Basically:
Name, race and phisical appearance.

You could start the rp with. "Rick hit the piece of red hot metal once again, holding it against his anvil. The sword he was making was going to be for himself this time"

And this already implies that Rick is a smith, why put it in the CS?
However, I ask of you to write a bit of history, just to see how you write and if your english is good enough for the rp. Just to make sure.

Clove: No worries, I will explain everything needed. Will spend the whole day writing tomorrow :)
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Aight cool, now he's PMing me and preaching about how he's right. Pfftch, I ain't give a fuck.

And dude, I love adversity. Just a couple questions. What are the already defined races? Just a short list.
I wanna see if I like them, or if I'm going to play as a Human.
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Dragons playable as Rider's Dragon.
Humans (vary varied. Can be a Northen snowdweller, southener, rebel, anything)
Gran'zul (idk if I remember the name right. Basically Urgals from Eragon books. Very big guys, males have potruding fangs. A bit orcish in appearance. Usually live in villages but they have a settlement that can almost be called a town. They have horns. Are warlike but aren't necessarily evil. They still love their family and fight for their freefom and evetything)
Narven(reptilians, live mostly to the south. Many live together with the southern people near the desert, they are agile and varied in colour and shape. A bit like humans.)
Elves (Immortal in the sense that they cant die of natural reasons. They can get old though. The are very fast and strong compared to humans, and all of them know how to use magic. Their hair and eyes can be many colours, no ginger hair though, but their skin is always fair)
Dwarves (live in the massive mountains to the south, they have 9 clans which specialize in different fields and each has a leader. They have a king that rules over all clan leaders. Their biggest cities are underground but have some above ground as well.

Thats kinda it I guess. You can add monsters like sea serpents and krakens and huge desert worms and mega man eating yetis for action though.
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Okay, gonna toss out some ideas on the swamp-dwelling Narven (Lizardfolk). Maybe they're trash, maybe we use some, maybe we use all, just let me know what you all think.

Firstly, they're big. While desert Narven are like desert lizards in that they tend to be light coloured and more slender (smaller body mass = more surface area / body mass ratio = better heat dispersion and ability to survive high temperatures) swamp Narven are more along the lines of gators- they're big and fairly brawny, lacking the dexterity and agility of their desert-dwelling cousins but making up for it in more brute strength. Their coloration is also darker to allow them to blend in to their environment, generally shades of green that range from the green of tree leaves to almost being jet black, green only on the highlights when the light reflects off it.

Coming from the swamp as they do, they have no history of working with stone or metal, instead using the materials that can be found in the swamp- namely wood, vines, and animal parts. Most of their weapons are constructed using bones, frequently jawbones, and the majority of their clothing, what little they need to wear (mostly ceremonial) is generally made from barkcloth. Their homes vary from tribe to tribe, with a general trend of the lighter the tone of the Narven in the tribe, the more raised their dwellings will be- the darkest of them seem to be borderline amphibious, not actually capable of breathing underwater, but quite comfortable with being partially submerged indefinetly. As a result, several Blackscale Narven tribes actually construct their dwellings half submerged, making such villages rather difficult to find.

Most swamp Narven seem to be prejudiced against magic to some degree, and those Narven who show a predisposition towards it are often ostracized by their tribe. These outcasts often form small communities of their own, around which many dark rumors tend to flow- regardless of what they actually do, in the eyes of other swamp Narven these spellcaster communities are unholy abominations. Due to the fact that they tend to be composed of members from all different skin tones, such villages are often quite chaotic and mismatched, showing cultural icons important to a wide variety of tribes.

Though not magical, the swamp Narven do have a few traditions that somewhat confuse outsiders as to how they are done without magic- first and foremost among these is their habit of shrinking heads. This is only ever done with the heads of intelligent creatures, and among most swamp Narven it is done as a precaution against the angry spirit of the slain coming back for revenge. When in the hands of some of the Narven spellcasters though, these heads are used as far more than grisly decoration or jewelery- they can be reanimated or used as the focus of dark magic, allowing some rather unpleasant effects.

Their language is also subtly different from that of desert Narven, not enough to be incomprehensible, but it is more difficult for them to talk. A real world equivalent would be if someone with a strong cockney accent was trying to talk to someone with a strong deep-southern american accent; they can make themselves understood, but their pronunciations are different and they use different sayings and turns of phrase.

In explanation of that, swamp Narvan language tends to be more gutteral with less sibilant sounds, and due to the frame and stature of the Swamp Narven it often tends to be very deep. Hearing it spoken would be similar to hearing a blend of Russian and German spoken by a very large black man.

General reference for the build of the swamp Narven
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The actual process for shrinking heads is super simple, the fact that it was a mystery to people for so long is comical.
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So I've totally decided upon my character at this point.

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By "Out of touch" you mean?

And Primal, all of those things are fine but let Swamp Narven just like a different "Nationality" from Desert Narven. Like there are Scandinavians and Southern Europeans. And there can be Narvens which are half-half as well.
I'm currently working on the OOC, explaining how magic works and history and all that. I'll post the link here and then close this thread.
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I'll send you a PM detailing his detachment, rather than spoiling it for everyone else.
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By "Out of touch" you mean?And Primal, all of those things are fine but let Swamp Narven just like a different "Nationality" from Desert Narven. Like there are Scandinavians and Southern Europeans. And there can be Narvens which are half-half as well.I'm currently working on the OOC, explaining how magic works and history and all that. I'll post the link here and then close this thread.


I don't really follow on the different nationality. Do you mean I should change some of it?
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No, I just mean that both Narven are the exact same species. But they are different in the sense that how Asians look different from Africans and such. There can be a child which has some desert Narven features and some swamp Narven features. And btw, I'll make Swamp Narven be pretty agile as well, maybe not specifically in running but quick movements will be a thing with them. Have you ever seen a crocodile snap at it's prey at lighting speed? They are fast.

And does anyone have a better title for this?
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No, I just mean that both Narven are the exact same species. But they are different in the sense that how Asians look different from Africans and such. There can be a child which has some desert Narven features and some swamp Narven features. And btw, I'll make Swamp Narven be pretty agile as well, maybe not specifically in running but quick movements will be a thing with them. Have you ever seen a crocodile snap at it's prey at lighting speed? They are fast.And does anyone have a better title for this?


Ah, okay, that's actually kind of what I was thinking anyway- different subraces of the same species. And I agree with the quick movements thing, I just don't see them being as good at finesse related tasks as their desert cousins, i.e. I don't see them doing very well with ranged combat. Strong and can move fast, but I doubt they can turn well, that kind of thing.

Anyway the one I have in mind to play will be a Blackscale voodoo witchdoctor. I have IDEAAAS.

But for now I'm going to bed.
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lok ok. It's morning here. I'll set up the OOC, holy shit, so much writing... You guys will have to do lotsa reading :P
I hope others will join meanwhile.
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It's 4am, I fucked my sleep schedule up again.
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Hey, just gonna throw this out there.



This is a map of the world with Native Skin Color by location, it really helps when designing a planet to know exactly where people of a certain skin color would live.
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Are you kidding Leeroy...? Wow. I won't use it for the RP though, lol.
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I started the OOC. It ain't finished yet though.
I'm now doing races and their generic history
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What do you mean kidding? Skin color is based entirely on geographic origin (And genetic heritage), if this planet is an Earth-Like Planet circling a Main Sequence star, the same logic would still apply to the humans who live there.
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It's a fantasy world, there's a desert basically next to a grassland and then plains. There are mountains which are kilometres tall. I don't think logic is a thing here :P
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