sorry about that there I fixed it

Thanks. :) Is the slash going from his right to his left or his left to his right?

This is the part of written combat where your RL training could help immensely. Being able to picture a situation (or even get up and acually act it out) can help you be able to give as much detail as possible, making each attack or defense that much more effective. Essentially, the more detail you put into an attack, the harder it is for your opponent to do something unexpected that you didn't account for. Take chess as an example. If you just wrote "I move my piece", then that could mean anything and your opponent could make up just about any scenario to counter it. If you wrote "I move my piece four squares", it's a little bit harder for them to make anything up, but still heavily in their favor. If, however, you write "I move my rook to A-7, putting the king in check" there's only a handful of moves they can make to get out of it, and you can account for most (if not all) of them and plan accordingly.

Of course, there's always the hassle of getting them into the position where a check is possible, but that's the fun part. ;)

ok I edited it and your right actually standing up and performing the movement helped a lot

I'll say it did! That's an awesome attack description. :)

why thank you

I just lost my entire response (yay for phone posting! >_<), and it's getting really late over here, so my next post is going to have to wait for tomorrow.

lol gotcha man TO BE CONTINUED

Really good avoidance, but I'm afraid the telekinetic energy you were charging is no longer applicable (I'm also really sorry I didn't think to mention this earlier, when it first became inert). You can only hold the charge as long as you don't use the associated appendage to perform another attack or defense in the mean time, and you've been using both hands to attack since you last mentioned the charging energy.

Think of it like priming a grenade. You pull the pin to get things rolling, but if you let go of the grenade to grab a sword or gun, you either have to let it detonate or replace the pin. A charged attack only remains charged as long as it isn't interrupted by another action that would interfere, like broken concentration or using the appendage from which the attack would be launched for something else.

Again, I'm really sorry I forgot to mention this before, when you could have just edited instead of losing all your charged energy. >_<

Ah noooooooo. well that sucks ok then its cool ill just edit the post sorry about the wait btw I was at the store

Yeah. I know how you feel. :(

ok I edited it

Before I reply, which hand is holding which weapon?

right hand sword left hand revolver he basically did a 360 bringing the sword around towards her and if it lands he will do a sidekick with his left leg before firing the revolver.

Ok, thanks. And apologies for taking so long. I got dragged into a campaign against the nazis with my brother... >_>

How many rounds is he firing this time? And if you're going to use your ocular implants so extensively as a form of precog, the ability to do so needs to be listed in your CS.

It would also be good to keep in mind that not all opponents are going to be as lenient as I am with the details of that ability. By not actually specifying where you're going to shoot, you leave it open to interpretation and they can take advantage of that. If they'll even allow precog in the first place. In most arena environments it isn't allowed because there's no way to use it effectively without being super vague and extremely overpowered.

yeah I see your point and its not exact precog its extremely likely he will miss its more like he studies their movement then calculates where they are likely to dodge but he can be wrong but yeah ill add it to his CS

210 miles an hour is reasonable due to the average speed of a peak human throwing a punch at 25 mph I took that and upped it by five seeing as he is trained then multiplied that number by seven due to his being seven times faster than a normal human.

I would have just taken the speed of a professional boxer's fastest punch and multiplied that by 7, but whichever works.

And Aureo is left-handed?

Also: FINALLY! Man is it a bitch trying to hit someone that's both stronger and faster than you... Lol.

Aureo is a robot man he is ambidextrous lol it don't matter to him