As I lay in my bed with my NerveGear on I think about how excited I am to be able to start a new and better life. Maybe this won't be as bad as some say...,"Link start." As I notice my new surroundings i gasp. "Wow! This is incredible!" I am in a small marketplace that has a few others in it. I think to myself outloud,"Well...I guess I can't get nowhere if I do not know anyone." I look around the building at the other players.

Okay, I few things.
1)This is the OOC section (which stands for Out Of Character). To roleplay, you must click the IC button near the title (IC stands for In Character).
2)You must "recruit" others to roleplay with you. That includes putting a Story Line, Rules, and Character Sheets for people to fill out about their character. You may want to look at the other role plays and check out how they did it for examples.
3)Almost all of us role play in third person (using she/he/character name did ___) rather than first person (I/us/we).
4)Other than that, welcome to Role Player Guild! If you need any help, PM. (If you don't know how, click PMs at the top of your screen, then click "New Conversation", then type my username (Gemini) and a Title and what you need help with and click "Send Message".)

Also it seems that he may have clicked on submit a lot of times...

UNOwenWasMe said
Also it seems that he may have clicked on submit a lot of times...

Yep.