Well I like to make him a type of Angel. So I wouldn't mind doing anti hero if I have to do straight up Cohan then I make a better character I just wanted to make someone with a shady area of good and bad

Jangel13 said
Well I like to make him a type of Angel. So I wouldn't mind doing anti hero if I have to do straight up Cohan then I make a better character I just wanted to make someone with a shady area of good and bad

How about, a guardian that is protecting a place he thinks is sacred and has to be ruthless in order for the "greater good"? He might think that the entire world is at stake.

I was thinking about an ancient being that is so old that it had to become a transcendent being that exists without a body. Rather, it is a mind that manifests itself usually through a ball of light kind of like a will o' wisp, but it can also morph its body into other shapes, and maybe even create a temporary body/vessel. Would that be fine? It wouldn't be inherently evil or good. Rather it just seeks knowledge (I mean for a mind that doesn't have a body... what else could it want other than knowledge after all) and doesn't care if it is "good" knowledge like healing or "bad" knowledge like necromancy. So, as long as that desire is satisfied, it will do whatever the hell it pleases. Sometimes its interests may align with the "heroes" and sometimes it may align with "evil".

Heyitsjiwon said
I was thinking about an ancient being that is so old that it had to become a transcendent being that exists without a body. Rather, it is a mind that manifests itself usually through a ball of light kind of like a will o' wisp, but it can also morph its body into other shapes, and maybe even create a temporary body/vessel. Would that be fine? It wouldn't be inherently evil or good. Rather it just seeks knowledge (I mean for a mind that doesn't have a body... what else could it want other than knowledge after all) and doesn't care if it is "good" knowledge like healing or "bad" knowledge like necromancy. So, as long as that desire is satisfied, it will do whatever the hell it pleases. Sometimes its interests may align with the "heroes" and sometimes it may align with "evil".

gooooooood.

ActRaiserTheReturned said
How about, a guardian that is protecting a place he thinks is sacred and has to be ruthless in order for the "greater good"? He might think that the entire world is at stake.

I actually like that idea and I tried to change my character accordingly to that

Is he better?

Good. :D Everyone's accepted so far.

Um, about the Angel, he doesn't know who the God he serves is, how about that?

Character Name: The Sentinel (Doesn't actually remember its name)

Character Attributes:
The Sentinel is an ancient being that is so old that it had to become a transcendent being that exists without a body. It exists as a mind that manifests itself usually through a ball of light. However, it has the ability to morph its body into other shapes, and maybe even create a temporary body/vessel through its psionic powers. The Sentinel's powers come from its ability to control things through its mind, and because of a lack of a corporeal form, largely communicates via telepathy.

Character Race: Transcendental Being

Character Archetype: Ancient Entity

Character Occupation: Psion

Notoriety Points: 0
Legend Points: 0
Fate Score: 0

Appearance:
Ruins/Lair Name: The Cavern

The Cavern is a huge cave system that is so big that it has its own weather system, jungle, and major river. In fact, one shouldn't be surprised if he stumbles upon a new species of flora or plant that is different from the ones above ground.



After a long, 5 mile trek through the various parts of the cave, one will finally come upon the first sign of civilization, a small underground temple that has been carved into the cave. However, it gives signs of age due to the vegetation that has obviously been reclaiming the temple. Still it remains relatively, structurally sound. This was where he Sentinel woke and found himself.

Character Name: Eric
Character Attributes:
Character Race: Human
Character Archetype: Swordsman who once protected the king of his land.
Character Occupation: Swordsman
Notoriety Points: 0
Legend Points: 0
Fate Score: 0
Appearance:
Ruins/Lair Name: inluminata castle


Inluminata castle was formally used by the king as a home and it was once surrounded by a great city until it was destroyed by unknown creatures, it was the only surviving part of the kingdom. It's quite similar to the usual medieval castle with red carpets, paints and other things. But most important is the throne room where Eric usually is, since all of his people were dead and the gates outside not working he was trapped in the castle for seemingly all eternity.

When the strange creatures attack Eric's best friend betrayed him and helped the monster but was later killed, because of this it's mostly impossible to gain his trust and he usually attacks anyone who is suspicious.

Olimario948 said
Character Name: EricCharacter Attributes:Character Race: HumanCharacter Archetype: Swordsman who once protected the king of his land.Character Occupation: SwordsmanNotoriety Points: 0Legend Points: 0Fate Score: 0Appearance: Ruins/Lair Name: inluminata castleInluminata castle was formally used by the king as a home and it was once surrounded by a great city until it was destroyed by unknown creatures, it was the only surviving part of the kingdom. It's quite similar to the usual medieval castle with red carpets, paints and other things. But most important is the throne room where Eric usually is, since all of his people were dead and the gates outside not working he was trapped in the castle for seemingly all eternity.When the strange creatures attack Eric's best friend betrayed him and helped the monster but was later killed, because of this it's mostly impossible to gain his trust and he usually attacks anyone who is suspicious.

Wait, so...

They're a villain?
Sounds like a hero/antihero with a tragic backstory.

Derpestein said
Wait, so...They're a villain?Sounds like a hero/antihero with a tragic backstory.

In the interest check, it says that you can be a good person, and just be oblivious or something.

Act, I am in.

CS:
Character Name: The Fridge
Character Attributes:
Character Race: An animated human shaped ice block that uses an enchanted suit of armor to keep it from melting.
Character Archetype: Tormented Being
Character Occupation: Used to serve the will of its master.
Notoriety Points: 0
Legend Points:0
Fate Score: 0
Appearance:
Ruins/Lair Name: Glaciem Crustallum (Credit To Derp for Name.)

Lair:

Notes:
-The Fridge has an inherit hatred of all living.
-The Fridge has the ability to grow an icicle sword using the moister in the air when he is in a fight.
-The Fridge's lair is a deep cave that is moderately cold (just enough to cause discomfort, not enough to freeze anything) full of assorted creatures.
-The lair is full of treasure. The Fridge doesn't understand what it is worth, but guards it anyway.

I'm working on something.

My villain will be a lich mage. I'm settling for that.

Does anyone know what the name of my lair should be?

Glaciem Crustallum?

Ice rock/hard thing in latin.

Derpestein said
Glaciem Crustallum?Ice rock/hard thing in latin.

I like it.

Derpestein said
Wait, so...They're a villain?Sounds like a hero/antihero with a tragic backstory.

Antihero.

ActRaiserTheReturned said
Good. :D Everyone's accepted so far. Um, about the Angel, he doesn't know who the God he serves is, how about that?

you want Angelo to be ignorant of what god he serves? is their a religion in this universe that he could assume he follows or just say he doesn't know what god he follows?

I apologise.

But I think I'm gonna drop out.

Sorry, Act.

Derpestein said
I apologise.But I think I'm gonna drop out.Sorry, Act.

Nooo...

and one goes down.

we need to start soon