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Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Ezmeralda
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There isn't much else to say...my idea was for a mostly quiet life. I'm not going to add more just for the sake of more.
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Added a bit more to Damien's bio. Some of the circumstances of his life, the things that made him the somewhat paradoxical silver-tongued social failure that he is.
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Hmmm fine, Esmerelda and MMM you both are accepted.
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Don't get me wrong, I'd be happy to add more, but...how do you describe the circumstances of a quiet life? It's been entirely learning from her mother, healing people, once in awhile bandit attack, and recently the occasional Risen attack. Which, I suppose I didn't really say, but is kind of a given, I think.
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Well yeah it is, but what happened during them, did anything happen to her father or mother (and no it obviously doesn't have to always be sad stuff happening), did anything really interesting happen. I mean I get it village girl not much to tell ( I look at Donnell for this one) so I do get the boring peaceful village setting. But also maybe say something about the sudden show of undead, a village no matter how small would then take precautions, maybe curfews, how would that feel to a young girl basically. Bio is there to flesh out what the other players need to know, if you do feel that is enough I am ok with that. I was just reiterating my rule and you did give a valid counter argument.
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Name:Felix(Currently goes by the name "Lefix")
Age:19(Turns 20 on second day in Rp)
Gender:Male
Appearance:
Mankaete Appearance:
Class:Manakete
Personality:TBR
Bio:Felix was born shortly before Grima's revival and was for the most part raised by his mother, Aversa. His father along with many others forfeited their lives for the fell dragon that soon ravaged the world. Aversa raised him in secret, never putting in him the front lines until he was able to fight. That was seven years ago, at 12 years old, prepared and ready to kill the evil that would purge the remaining good from this world. Naga, the divine dragon destined to destroy all in time, sent some of her loyal worshipers to a fort he was guarding at the time. They wanted the spot for awhile but failed to take it over, since they didn't have enough men to do so.

On one cold night, their approach was masked by a heavy blizzard storm that gave Naga's warriors the upper hand. Everything went to hell, they killed most of the Grimleal without even being noticed. Not only that but when the scum were discovered, the fight had basically ended before it even began. All of the soldiers murdered the remaining forces except for Felix; who they took pity on after lacking the will to kill him because of his young age. Morning came and he became a prisoner that would be brought back to the enemy's capital in due time. Apparently, the heroic leader planned to have him cleansed of his evil ways and join their side.

Right before thinking that hope was all lost, the Fell dragon Grima came to his rescue personally, killing his captors with ease. Felix was then informed shortly after, that he wasn't the son of some tribute but was the seed of Grima. A couple years later, Felix vanished while in battle with the enemy troops, not to be heard from again.

Quirks:He tends to scratch his head when he is uncomfortable and has no problem eating raw foods....
Strengths:Felix is capable of turning into a powerful fire breathing dragon, High defense, High strength(Only in Manakete form), a pretty good strategist
Weaknesses:Terrible with using physical weapons, cannot transform without a Dragonstone, weak to dragon made weapons even when not in dragon form.
Likes: Death, destruction, peace and quiet, the Grimleal, courage, self sacrifice.
Dislikes:Yilsse's exalt and his/her bloodline, Naga, Cheap tricks, time spent with others outside of battle.
Weapons:Dragonstone
Death quote:Evil Version:H...ow...did this happen? Father....mother....I can..not..vent..ure..any fu...rther... Good Version:Unfortunately... my road ends here...it.. is..an..honor..to..die..next..to..those..that..have..shown..me..the..error..of..my...

P.S. I know people who read this are going to be like "Dafuq is this?" or are going to be like "See this is what we call a good Cs, some of you others need to take note on how it's done."
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good job, you're in go ahead and post.
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20 years old manakete? wouldn't that be like a baby considering nowi is 1000?
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This is true, but Nah was about everyone else's age in Awakening. She did look a bit young though...
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True, Axel up Felix's age if you're gonna use that appearance pic, has to be at least 500+ years due to manakete not aging as fast as humans
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MULTI_MEDIA_MAN said
This is true, but Nah was about everyone else's age in Awakening. She did look a bit young though...


she was half manakete though
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Amalvi said
she was half manakete though


Felix is as well. Born to Aversa.
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Axel said
P.S. I know people who read this are going to be like "Dafuq is this?" or are going to be like "See this is what we call a good Cs, some of you others need to take note on how it's done."


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MULTI_MEDIA_MAN said
Felix is as well. Born to Aversa.


cool then
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I agree with Amald he needs to increase his age. Also your missing the personality section entirely. All of us made one you have to too.

Also I call BS on the cleric but whatever. Before you curse me out Ez please note I have over six years of roleplaying experience on multiple sites. I don't know how much you have but I can post a CS with a loner character and have it bigger than yours.
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Aaaand here comes THAT GUY...

Anyway, waiting on someone else to post before I do. Don't want to leave our cleric and hero, do we?
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vance: I don't really care how much experience you have because it doesn't mean jack. You could be rping for 10 years and still be bad at it. Like how you don't know how to use code in sigs properly. :P

Anyway, I have work and college tend to as well as a life and I can't devote a lot of time at once to one thing like that. Perhaps over time I can add a little more here and there, but I mainly just wanted to get something up so I could start for now. Also, I wouldn't call her a loner.

Also, I've posted.
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Those codes are copied and pasted from an earlier sig and I'm to lazy to get rid of them. All I can say is that you don't have my respect to be honest. I do sometimes make bad posts but other times I spend hours on singular posts that last over three thousand words. Shadow can do as he likes since this is his roleplay but I still say nay.
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Aaaand let the dick-swinging contest begin!
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Yeah, I don't have hours to spend on anything, nor do I care for your respect. You're a person on the internet I know nothing about. lmao
Do as you will. No skin off my back.
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