Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Deserted
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I have an idea for the rogue. I'll write one up for you.
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Gone
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by UnendingEmpire
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UnendingEmpire bye~

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I'll be putting in a pending resignation here. Pending.
Progress on that bard CS is crawling along, but if I haven't posted it within four days, please assume I've left ^_^;

EDIT: it figures I finish the CS the same day I say that :P
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On that note;

I was writing up the cs for a Tank, but sadly, things happened and now I have to start over.

So, while not really an excuse for taking my time, it's at least an explanation, I guess.
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@Deserted So that character is very vague. I don't think I can accept it as is. PM me if you want to try and edit it. The main problem is the grammar, the lack of a clear character concept, and the huge missing chunks in the background.

@UnendingEmpire Okay, the character write up is good, but we had a big miscommunication. When I said I didn't want some totally unique culture like out of serious fantasy I did not mean create a totally unique culture like out of serious fantasy and just ignore the details. Everything in this story should be archetypal. It's a satire. So a desert culture shouldn't be some unique creation, it should be a satire of middle eastern culture and pop fantasy, just as the main setting is a satire of western culture and pop fantasy. For the same reason, ethnic appearance should reflect location. If you're playing with Persian and Arabian themes then have them look like people from those regions. Imagine how confusing it would be if I introduced an Eastern themed setting and had the people there be tall with green hair and brown skin rather than oriental.

@Cid It's alright, I'm in no rush to get started. It takes as long as it takes.
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Never mind then.
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UnendingEmpire bye~

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glibglobb said
@Deserted So that character is very vague. I don't think I can accept it as is. PM me if you want to try and edit it. The main problem is the grammar, the lack of a clear character concept, and the huge missing chunks in the background.@UnendingEmpire Okay, the character write up is good, but we had a big miscommunication. When I said I didn't want some totally unique culture like out of serious fantasy I did not mean create a totally unique culture like out of serious fantasy and just ignore the details. Everything in this story should be archetypal. It's a satire. So a desert culture shouldn't be some unique creation, it should be a satire of middle eastern culture and pop fantasy, just as the main setting is a satire of western culture and pop fantasy. For the same reason, ethnic appearance should reflect location. If you're playing with Persian and Arabian themes then have them look like people from those regions. Imagine how confusing it would be if I introduced an Eastern themed setting and had the people there be tall with green hair and brown skin rather than oriental. @Cid It's alright, I'm in no rush to get started. It takes as long as it takes.


I know. I'm the kind of person, though, who if I start writing the details of a society, I won't stop until I've jotted everything down. A satire of the Middle East is what I was thinking; it appears the miscommunication had a miscommunication within itself ^_^;
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nvm
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@Unendingempire Okay gotcha. Just want to make sure we're on the same page.

I'm starting to wonder if I shouldn't have put this in advanced, but I wanted something light and advanced players do not generally excel at the kind of brevity light fantasy requires.
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As a firm believer of good writing being a matter of quality over quantity, with brevity being an important principle to apply, I think it might be good for 'em.

But that's just me.
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If we don't get enough players here in the next few days, I'll punt the interest check over to advanced. I'll keep submitted characters of course.
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