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Lugubrious said
Forgive me, I'm just drawing a blank on how to improve him. Do you have any suggestions?I could make it so that rather than simply survive a year at the school, Riot's job is to place individuals among the School of Deities asleep using Hypnos's powers, which in turn adds to Hypnos's domain. It's a sort of insidious, tricky thing to do; as he goes throughout the year, making others fall asleep, his master's power grows. I can change his personality to be more somber and subversive.Alternatively, I could literally make Phobetor into my character, a young daimon trying to learn how to become the God of Nightmares.


I'm sorry, but I couldn't possibly suggest much more than a re-write.
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While you're being very polite about it, not knowing what you want while knowing what you don't want is something that plagues me.

Very well, looks like a complete rewrite is in order. I'll go with the Phobetor route. I'll see if I can't make him work.
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I would like to make a character based on Asmodeus but I wouldn't know exactly what job or role he could fulfill. He's known as one of the Seven Princes of Hell based after the Seven Deadly Sins. He being the demon of Lust and known as a lecherous prince of carnal desires who enjoys gambling. But his human 'vessel' would be the complete opposite of him, of course. Night and day if you will.
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Name: Phobetor

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Job: God of Nightmares (See here)

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Personality: At the core of Phobetor is a cowardly bully. To protect his own insecurities and fear, he enjoys preying upon the fear of others. This trait comes in conflict with his innate sense of duty, inherited from his father. Phobetor is intelligent, and knows both not to bite off more than he can chew and that there is a time and place for everything. He also sincerely believes that, because of his actions, nobody can ever be his friend or love him. To say he has low self-esteem would be an understatement. To Phobetor, the world is full of people out to get him, and he's no worse than the rest of them.

History: Phobetor is one of the Oneiroi, a daimon son of Hypnos, the personification of sleep, and he is also the grandson of night -Nyx- and darkness -Erebus-. From his birth, he, the middle child, gravitated towards darkness. His toxic personality estranged him from his brothers Morpheus and Phantasus, the gods of dreams and illusions, respectively. When the three came of age, their father sent them westward to seek a new home. Over the mountains and islands of Greece the brothers traveled in mortal form, disguised as a painter, a butcher, and a soothsayer. They faced many hardships in their trials, from tangling with the Centaurs and their poison-tipped arrows to taking down angry river gods. To the people they met on their way, the brothers brought their respective gifts. While mankind grew to love Morpheus and respect Phantasus, they only feared Phobetor, making him all the more bitter.

At last, the Oneiroi traversed the western Mediterranean and arrived at their destination: the Cave of Images. There, the brothers settled down, crafting enormous gates made of ivory and buckhorn. In that cave, each honed their talents, training their gifts until they could share dreams, nightmares, and illusions with the world.

It wasn't long before Phobetor grew dissatisfied. After a string of egregious failures, Phobetor decided to leave his brothers behind, promising he'd return. Returning to wander among men, he sought a place where he could learn how to become a real god. To that end, he found and joined the School of Deities, confident for once that he was on the road to greatness.

Powers/Duties: As the God of Nightmares, Phobetor's chief duties are to punish the guilty with night terrors and balance good dreams with the bad for everyone, ensuring that neither light or darkness gain the upper hand. To this purpose, he can enter dreams and contort them to his own design. Even in the real world, he can shapeshift into all manner of beasts (though the Law of Conservation of Matter still applies) and weave shadows into physical forms. He also surrounds himself in magical artifacts, including:
Vox - this pipe flute is capable of creating a variety of eerie sounds, like growling, rumbling, laughing, crying, fire, and wind
Aliter - an embellished pocketwatch-shaped container strung about Phobetor's neck. Within, it contains soul of every creature his can turn into, allowing him to shift between each at will, and if separated from the medallion, he is trapped in his current form. To add new forms to his index, he must use Aliter to absorb the soul of the creature. He cannot become mythical creatures when in normal areas.
Relief - a rapier with a pommel shaped like a cattle skull. While not practical to use in a fight, it is a lethal weapon.
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Accepted.

Also, I will be gone for the weekend. Keep the thread alive for me, and, endorse players being added, please.
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Anyone have any ideas to what my future OC's role could be?
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Sounds like his role would be to get people to commit lustful deeds or actions maybe
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Sounds like his role would be to get people to commit lustful deeds or actions maybe


Yeah ,but would that fly with Overwatch?
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I don't see why not. After all, the OP says some deities and beings are benevolent, but others are not, and it is a wonder the school doesn't fall apart. Such a character could cause some chaos surely. That's just what I gather though. If you wanted to wait until Overwatch could give the thumbs up that's something else.
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Whirlwind said
I don't see why not. After all, the OP says some deities and beings are benevolent, but others are not, and it is a wonder the school doesn't fall apart. Such a character could cause some chaos surely. That's just what I gather though. If you wanted to wait until Overwatch could give the thumbs up that's something else.


Yeah, I'm sure my OC could help liven things up, incite some chaos/drama and generally keep things fun if not raunchy. I'll just wait for Overwatch's general approval before I write up his CS.
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Ah, screw it. I'll fret the details later and make any changes if I need to. CS being written now, so expect it soon.
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Yay ^_^
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If this is still open, I'd like to join it. .x.

I'll make a shrine maiden and be the Reimu Hakurei quirky one of the group!
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If this is still open, I'd like to join it. .x.I'll make a shrine maiden and be the quirky one of the group!


Yup still open!
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Alright.~

I'll make a CS once I'm home then.
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Good, good.

I messaged NarcissisticPotato this morning and have yet to receive a response. Let us not count on his support.
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Name: Andrew
Age: 18
Gender: Male

Job: As one of the Seven Kings of Hell, Asmodeus is the manifestation of the Cardinal Sin of Lust. His general purpose being to incite chaos in the love lives and relationships of others. Revealing their private lives for all to see and et cetera.

Appearance: Andrew stands at 5'10 and 170 Ibs, making him tall and thin. With his toned body and small musculature, he has a rather feminine frame that he's horribly self-conscious about. When under the control of Asmodeus, a ring of black diamonds surrounds his left eye and he grows small black horns at the top of his head along with a short forked tail and small bat-like wings. He has red hair and bright green eyes with light freckles on his cheeks crossing over the bridge of his nose which are mostly hidden by the thick black glasses he wears as Andrew.

Personality: Andrew is horribly shy, especially around females. So bashful to the point where he can't speak clearly and has a terrible speech impediment in the form of an uncontrollable stutter. Extremely quiet and soft-spoken, he tries his best to avoid social interaction with other people and keeps to himself whenever he can. Secretly, he's a massive nerd. He thoroughly enjoys video games, anime, and manga.

Asmodeus is the polar opposite of Andrew. Taking control over Andrew at the most inopportune times, Asmodeus is bold and self-confident. With an outgoing, yet cool personality, he's also rather vain and narcissistic. A personality befitting that of a King of Hell. A terrific womanizer, he'll attempt to woo/seduce any woman that peaks his interest. Even going so far as to inappropriately 'harassing' them. However, not one to judge, any male he finds just as attractive he'll harass all all the same. However, if he ever feels slighted, he can be rather vengeful. He thoroughly enjoys gambling games and making bets.

History: Andrew's family were worshipers of Asmodeus, the incarnation of lust, lascivity, and promiscuity. However from their worship and involvement with Asmodeus, their bloodline was cursed. Whosoever died, their souls would be dragged into the 2nd Circle of Hell, forever damned. His family made a pact with Asmodeus in order to avoid this curse. Each generation's first-born son would serve as the human vessel for Asmodeus' spirit. Damning just his soul to hell upon his death, instead of the entire family line. As a result, a large burden is placed on Andrew as he rejects Asmodeus' spirit that resides within his own. With the two souls at odds with one another, Asmodeus is unable utilize his powers completely. As a result, Andrew's family enrolled him to the School of Deities. So that he may learn to accept his role and fulfill his duties to his family. Should he fail, the pact would be broken and generations would be doomed to eternally burn in hell.

Powers/Duties: As Asmodeus, he is able to peer into individuals' hearts and view their deepest wants and desires. Using this information, he can manipulate people for the sole purpose of inciting chaos. Not just one to interfere with bonds and relationships, with the aura he constantly projects as both Andrew and Asmodeus he is able to spread and plant the seeds of lust and desire into the minds of others.

Malleus Maleficarum - "Hammer of the Witches" he commands over 72 legions of Lesser Demons and can summon them at will to serve his purpose. Typically, he'll utilize them to harass, distract, and weaken his would-be foes.

Dictionnaire Infernal - "The Infernal Dictionary" he can summon more powerful familiars such as a Serpent, a Ram, a Bull, and a Draconic Lion to fight alongside him. His Draconic Lion acting as his steed occasionally.

Lance of Asmodai - Should he ever be required to become directly involved in physical conflict, he can summon his Lance which bears his banner and symbol.
Symbol of Asmodai

Hellfire - Of course, being a King of Hell, he is able to summon the eternal and destructive flames of Hell itself. Most commonly, he prefers to use them in the form of a directed blast breathing them forth from his mouth. He is able to control the flames so as to not allow them to linger and burn uncontrollably.
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Tell me what y'all think. Be harsh in your constructive criticism too.

I can take it ;_; -Sniffles-
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