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Mr Allen J said
Since these new guys have prompted me to get off my ass, here's that recap I promised (About twenty years ago)I probably missed a few things, but whatever.



I'm adding it to the OP, where I will continue to update it.


Reposting it.
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I never knew how hard it would be to come up for weakness/limits/drawbacks for a power that's basically having animals and plants be happy around somebody.

But anyway, about to post second CS. Will be up soon.
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I never knew how hard it would be to come up for weakness/limits/drawbacks for a power that's basically having animals and plants be happy around somebody.But anyway, about to post second CS. Will be up soon.


He has to engage in musical numbers to do it.
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What. No. I'm not turning this into a musical.
And anyway, I can't rhyme or write song lyrics. The only thing interesting about my Lithuanian is his quote: "Bibbity bobbity boo bitch."
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He cant be taken seriously ever.
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What. No. I'm not turning this into a musical.And anyway, I can't rhyme or write song lyrics. The only thing interesting about my Lithuanian is his quote:


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You have offended my inner disney child.
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I can't stop myself though. Bibbity bobbity boo bitch. I'mma turn all your dresses an ugly periwinkle and I hope your chipmunks leave you little presents everywhere.

Also, this CS is a little under a thousand characters less than my first one. Maybe it's because he doesn't really have any traumatic experiences. Oh well. Posted it. Now tell me everything that's wrong with it. And you don't have to mention the relationships; I'll edit all of those when I get my next two characters done.
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Now, I have to say that maybe you should strengthen his power a bit so he's not completely useless in all but a few situations.

Maybe it extends to people?
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Is this the first time you had to say "make them stronger" to somebody?
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... Yes.
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Then my work here is done. I am unique in my pathetic-ish characters.

Edited. It now extends to people.

On another note, I was recommended Tokyo Ghoul earlier this week. I am watching it now and they were right. It is intense.
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Very well, Myk is accepted.

Rating is...

Other 3
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Alrighty then. Onto my klepto with hammer space.
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Okay, I just had Codi shove Atticus over the falls, and Atticus discovered he could breathe underwater. I actually already intended at some point in the story for Codi to force Atticus into a situation where he thought he was going to drown, just because it's extremely good for character development. I've actually based some of the reactions off of real-life events, but I'm still not sure how well I pulled that off. I really had to think that post over.
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It's official. I hate waking up in the mornings.. Everything is blurry without my glasses and it's dark as well, so all the black magnets lying around my house (which, I assure you, are everywhere) are blurry around the edges and they all look like spiders. The amount of terror I have to deal with in the morning should not be necessary.
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What should i do for relations as i have a new student?
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Well, I'd leave it blank since he's new, unless you want to arrange that he met someone off screen or something.
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My character has been posted, i feel like his history is dumb but w.e for some reason i had a bit of writer block doing it >.<
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All right Eklispe, let’s get to work.

Unfortunately I have to say that your sheet REALLY isn’t up to par with most of the others. There are many errors that we require you to fix if you want to participate. I understand you might be upset hearing this, but this is the advanced section, and we have high expectations.

First off, the picture doesn’t work. We normally prefer worded out descriptions rather than pictures. It’s almost an unspoken rule that a picture can accompany a description to provide extra support or to solidify the description you provided and give others a mental image of your person. Using a picture alone, in my opinion, is lazy and shows a lack of care for the character you are creating.

This RP isn’t anime either. You can have green hair if you really must, but if has to be dyed and your character will be seen as weird for it.

Your personality section is heavily lacking, more details there please.

Your history is… iffy. I’d talk to Allen about that one.

Your power at first glance is okay, but upon further inspection it shows to be not really acceptable. I like how you went for something that’s not entirely combative based, but I’d prefer you make up your mind on what its capabilities are. What it’s capable of from what you’ve seen is far from mundane. That’s LIFE SAVING. Mundane is semi useless. And given it’d ability to produce weaponry as you say, what is stopping you from just producing a sword, or a laser gun, or some other object with no drawbacks? The power doesn’t really have a weakness and isn’t detailed enough for us to make a good call on it.

Refer to the characters Allen, He Who Walks Behind, Leonerdo, or myself make. We try to make sheets that we want to see others make. Try to go into the detail we went into.
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Okay thanks i'm well aware that i'm not the best Rp'er by any means and i will try to improve. yayy..... looking at some of those CS's the appearance and atire alone are longer then my entire CS sorry should've looked more carefully and made it accordingly. Might take a while
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