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Bob's Burgers, Malcom in the Middle, and then really mind numbing stuff like Worlds Dumbest. I tend to turn on the tv and clean honestly. I hate just sitting for so long. I Also worked on my comic a little too.

What kind of shows do you like?
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Mostly dramas, thrillers, and clever ones. Arrow, Elementary, Walking Dead, that sort of thing.

Also, I hope you don't mind the bit of character control in my post. I didn't want to stop so early on and it seemed like the kind of thing she would do in that situation. If it's not okay just let me know and I'll happily change it.
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I liked Walking dead for a while, it just stresses me out now.

It's alright, I am just ganna change her reasoning for following him.
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Oh? Change it to what?

And I got an idea while writing that post. What if instead of remaining bitter rivals, Bloodshot takes pity on her and offers to train her? As a frendemy, he wouldn't want to see her get killed, but the relationship is going to be a grudging one at best.
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Oh I am not going to change what you are writing, just why she followed him. X'D but I am sure you will like it.

Honestly I wasn't seeing them as bitter rivals, like freindamies? But sure I don't mind. As long as my character isn't portrayed as supper defenseless and weak. People have done that before and it bugs me. She clearly has struggles, but I also want her to be very good at having quick reactions in hand to hand combat.
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Oh, I had no intention of portraying her as weak. That's why it happened when she was trying to sneak (something you mention her not being particularly good at), and why the men he shot were positioned outside of hand to hand range. It gave him a reason to intervene without handicapping any of her strengths.
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Your post was great, that comment was not about your post at all. I am just making sure from your suggestion. Yea, she has very clear struggles. I didn't want her to be perfect. I think that would be a great idea! (:
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Unfortunately, my reply is going to have to wait until tomorrow again. I do have Wednesday off though, so hopefully we can do some back and forth posting then.

And what is your opinion of other NPC characters having more drastically superhuman abilities?
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Dang. I was so excited. X'D But alright

Like, creating more characters between us or?..
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Oh I had to google NPC. Maybe not like lazer eyes, but maybe a few of them can be strangely stronger and more capable. It can be part of the plot.

Also, btw, inside they don't use guns because their are hazardous gas's inside that are easily ignited I am thinking they just find rows of odd plants inside, being grown in their own little plastic pots with special blue lighting above them..they are not normal plants.
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Oooh, interesting twist. I like it.
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Thank you! It would probably just look like a weird plant nursery. But for plans of death! :D
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