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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by TheBigJon
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It worked! Thanks
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No problem man!
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Is this supposed to be first come, first served?
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I'm reluctant about letting more people in since so many posted interest but it seems to be somewhat quiet at the moment so if you get a good CS up I'll review it.
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I updated the map to give it a more classic look. And I added in more cities. The great cities (or Ancestral cities) are marked with a city marker and bold lettering, the lesser cities or towns are marked with a black dot and non-bold lettering.

EDIT: I also added in the pictures of cities and other major places.
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Here you go:

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Oh wow looks great. I'm not trying to be rough I really do appreciate it but I don't want to put it on the front since it's got some spelling errors in the names of places. If you want to fix them I'll totally put it on the cover it looks rad. Which map client did you use?
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Rather than spelling errors that just how the font works. I checked every place name and It was just the font. I could change it if you want.

No map client, I edited it using photoshop.
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Oh yes I can see it now, the consistent problem was that E's were made into A's and I totally overlooked that connection. That's real quality work, I'd be more than happy to use it on the cover page. I'm glad you were able to put it in an elvish style font as well.
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Yeah, I saw that problem and went...I like this font. If ONLY THE E'S ACTUALLy LOOKED LIKE Es
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Ha yeah but it's alright. Assuming that's the kind of font an elf would write in I believe the map is meant to look hand-drawn so it's good.
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Caildir Dimaethor

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Accepted, I like your character a lot.

With that being said, however, I want to point out that our characters are not meant to have actually killed people. That was actually my reasoning for making you have to get permission to be older than ten thousand because you would likely have done a bit of fighting. The point was that we're trained to fight very well we just haven't done it (maybe a little bit but not a lot) that way the humans aren't grossly under-powered. The humans after all are slower, less intelligent, and less magical than the elves. Their advantages come from their technology and love of warfare. Even my character, the general of the entire military, has never actually killed a person.

Do not take this the wrong way, however. It is highly likely that you could have gotten into a squabble or some other small engagement, however picture Tolkien's Elves from lord of the rings murdering eachother the way human beings do. It just doesn't make sense and that's the feel I'm going for with these elves. I hope this doesn't seem too stringent I'd hate to lose your interest over something like this.
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Wait, I'm a little confused. Don't get me wrong, I'll fix whatever you'd like me to, but I'm not too sure where I said Caildir had killed someone. If it was in the combat style section, I'll change some wording around because I can see how you'd think that I was saying Caildir had killed people. I was just talking about a hypothetical situation, his sword would be his last resort. Hope this clears things up, and please let me know if I'm in the wrong about anything!
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It was just where you said "He only draws his sword with intent to kill" that part just seemed to imply that you meant he'd killed people before that's all.
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Editted that line
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Awesome sauce. I hope we get the other CS's in sometime relatively soon so people don't start to lose interest.
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Note: Tomorrow after roughly 12pm or 2pm I will not be able to accept CS's or read messages/posts until sunday. Have them in by then unless you're okay with waiting a bit.
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ugh... School have been strangling me slowly. My character sheet will be ready tomorrow night!
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Sounds good I had a busy couple of days as well I'm hoping everybody is ready to play by the end of the week I'm eager to get started and I've got a few plot points in mind that I think will be pretty engaging right from the start, let's go everyone don't lose interest now!
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