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Hello everyone! I'm back, and HOPEFULLY with a more successful RP idea. Please note this RP will be a little slow, but I will allow a little free range in characters for people to play with while I'm away!
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The Land


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Protectors of the Sword Trainers


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Please let me know what you think, and I'll get a full plot-story-world, rules, and everything else, out! But only if I get a bunch of you really interested.
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Teknonick said Zweihänder (Which is a giant German sword, usually so big it's practically useless)


Zweihanders are far from useless, they were used to break pole formations and used in said pole formations themselves. They wouldn't have been mass produced by Germany if they were useless.
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Mr_pink said
Zweihanders are far from useless, they were used to break pole formations and used in said pole formations themselves. They wouldn't have been mass produced by Germany if they were useless.


Oh, okay, thanks! I actually didn't know that. I personally like the swords very much, I just remember reading somewhere about how they're so big that they're incredibly heavy. That's cool to know they're not as useless as I thought. Thanks!

EDIT: Oh, and another factor of the Zweihanders, they were so massive, they scared the enemies! They had no clue the weapons were just so big and hard to use... they just looked massive and scary!

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New update to the OP! Includes Apps, rules, plotline, and world information! BTW, the world is actually mostly created. I'm centering it around a few other RPs I have, but this is simply a different land on the same planet. It's just this one land in particular that's new and needs a little work... so ideas are welcome!

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Anyone? Maybe I'm in the wrong concept check...

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This seems interesting! Count me in!
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Woot! Glad to have you on-board Megadraco!
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First app of the day! I went overboard with the colors.

[1] [ForumsName: Teknonick] | CharacterName: Aaron Eoforwine | CharacterAge: 11 | CharacterRace: Human

Looks:
Aaron Eoforwine stands at four feet, five inches. His hair is kept short and featureless, with a jet-black color throughout all his hair. His face is surprisingly younger than usual, along with big light-hazel eyes, and a small frown across his face. His attitude is usually intrigued and understanding, but seriousness tends to overcrowd the other two features when in tough thought. Aaron has two sets of clothing: A noble outfit, which consists of a plain, electric indigo hat. An azure inner-shirt, with a cerulean vest over top, the vest wearing obvious markings of the noble. The pants blend into the shirt and vest with a cerulean-cobalt hue. The boots are big and heavy, work with the pants rolling into them. A cobalt-blue robe is also worn at times, though rarely. His second outfit is that of a commoner, consisting of a thick brown shirt, and a big heavy and fluffy vest, as well as plain pants, a belt, and fluffy boots. His also has a chamoisee satchel.

Skills:
-Writing and Reading
-Noble Schooling
-Communication Skills
-Horseback Riding

Key Items:
-Pocket Watch
-Robes

Items:
-Satchel
--Ten Foot Coil of Rope
---Small Iron Hook
--One Apple
--Map of the Castle
--Bag of Coins
---20 Gold pieces
---10 Silver pieces
-Belt
--Knife
--Canteen
---Water

Bio:
Aaron Eoforwine, son of Mimic Eoforwine, and Aodh Eoforwine. His father is one of the highest known nobles in the kingdom, being close friends with the king and queen themselves. His father grew up with the king and queen, and has received treatment as though they were related. Mimic Eoforwine prefers being called Eoforwine, and wishes everyone to call him by his title Despot. Eoforwine, that is to say, Aaron's father, is a very powerful man, only ever commanded by the king himself. With that power, Eoforwine has become a very unlikable person to those unknown to him. He is very intolerant of commoners, even to the point of punishing those Aaron would hang out with. Aodh is almost the same, being held high above most everyone, and holds herself to be the most important being on earth. If she had the chance, she would push the king off his throne and take it for herself... but that is only said in joking manners, of course.

Aaron himself hates the noble lifestyle. Particularly [i]his[/] noble lifestyle. He is often forced into boring writing classes, and told to perfect his writing for "Once you get older, you will need to impress your future wife! No woman would take a man with a handwriting such as a slob!" by his father, with 'slob' meaning commoner. He also hates the boring speeches he has to sit through his father give. Or the boring balls he must attend, but always stand by the wall and avoid talking to important people, and never play around with the other children. Horseback riding is the only thing he finds fun about being a noble, as everything else is taken for granted. He is allowed to ride his horse the way he wants, but not during classes. He is very thankful to have a nice teacher, being originally a commoner herself, and understanding how cruel nobles can usually be to children.

Any chance Aaron has outside of teachings, or riding his horse, he spends out in the rest of the town. His face isn't advertised like the princes are, so he is safe to wander the streets without recognition. He usually puts on his commoner's outfit (Bought at a merchant's stand) before sneaking out his window, or puts it on in the stables before sneaking out through a crack in the wall. He brings his noble clothing with him inside his satchel, as he thinks it might be useful to prove hims nobility in the case of emergency. Outside the palace, he spends his time with his friends he's met throughout the castle. He has only ever told his closest two friends his secret about being a noble, who usually don't even care about it anyway.

Aaron was eventually convinced by his friends to attend their school, under the cover he is a relative to his friends, visiting from the outer villages. He finds schooling fun, and easy. He tries to be quiet, but is usually picked to be asked questions, and get's most of them right. He finds schooling here a sort of game, as he already knows most of what is taught. He does find the nature walks interesting, and insightful.
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By the way! This world is actually based on one of my other RPs! It's currently on-going on the Minecraft Forums, an has a really interesting background to it. I'm not sure what time period this RP is in, but it might be a little bit before the 50-year time jump planned to happen for the redux of the RP. And yeah, this land is the most boring out of the whole world. Yet, it's still exciting! Can you even imagine what else could be going on? :3
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Updated the OP several times recently! Added new ACCEPTED! Applications section, as well as NPC sections, and probably a few other things... oh, like the first APP!
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Here's my application!
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Woooow! Nice job man, that's the cleanest app I've ever seen! Every time I post that format somewhere it's ALWAYS incorrect. I understand it's hard to follow... but if you follow my example of an app, it shouldn't be THAT hard. And look, you got it perfect! Not just that, but the quality of the character is good too! Not sure why a kid would be carrying around a bunch of tools... but that can be overlooked. I'll force you to regret it later though... muhahaha!

Okay, so, I don't have to point this out... but you're obviously ACCEPTED!

I also find it funny, your noble friend's last name is Glint. One of the character's (In the old RP) first name is actually Glint. So that's a little funny. :3

So, I can't wait until we get some more RPers, and we can get this RP going! I'm so glad to have you in my RP, and I can see a lot of stuff coming from you. Thank you for joining!
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Thanks! I actually did the first part yesterday, and did the bio today, though I don't see why the formatting would be a problem... :3

By the way, I did mention that his father kind of forces him to carry his tools around, though I'm not sure if it was clear...

Megadraco said Of course, this doesn’t mean he takes heed of Ellwood’s complaints every time he tries to teach him his trade, or stops forcing him to go with his tools everywhere.
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You would not believe how hard it is for some people to follow directions... lol

Oh, okay. Yeah, I thought that meant something about how he just 'liked' carrying them around. Anyway, it's all good.

Oh, and multiple characters ARE allowed. I'm going to edit that into the rules so everyone knows. :3 It's actually encouraged! It gives you something to do when other's aren't around.
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I... don't know if multiple characters is such a good idea, at least for me... I mean, I haven't done RPs in a long while...
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Well, okay then. That's alright if you don't want to. The main reason I encourage it, is because it makes it easier on myself usually. When I have multiple characters, and there's no one around, I can just interact with my own characters until a point that people come back.
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I'm kind of willing to start the RP with no one else joining yet... hopefully they'll want to join after it's started? IDK. Opinions?
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I don't know... A full-scale RP with only two people...
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Hahaha! Good point. Yeah... I was really hoping other people would see this. Maybe it's in the wrong concept check? My other RP did much better, it just failed because I wasn't around and it was 100% dependent on me. Maybe I should open up another check on the casual thread, then just link it over here. Think it would be casual, or Hardcore? I'm new to this site, so I'm not sure how big of a difference it is here.
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I don't know... I'm also kinda new. Just, if you're going to add it to a certain level, try to keep it constant. I recently applied to an RP that seemed really interesting, which was on Casual interest check, but it turned out we had to pretty much write a short story for the itroductory paragraph. It wasn't what I signed up for, and I didn't have the time for it, so, needless to say, I dropped it.

Also, maybe put the link to the new check here, and carry on there, copy/pasting your first post? I mean, personally, I find it kind of off-putting when I open a thread and find nothing but a link. But maybe that's just me.
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