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Dedonus, were you going to post first or can we go ahead?


You may go ahead and post. I have a Spider-Man post in the works, but I do not have a specific GM post planned at this moment.

Edit: Gambit will be accepted in 16 hours unless someone else posts a competing application.
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I'm just going to leave this here to be looked over. It looks a little dead in here but I'm hoping thats just temporary.
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Player Name: Nosuchthing
Character You Wish To Play: Anna Marie (Rogue)
Moral Alignment (Hero, Villain, Walking the Line): Walking the Line
Affiliation (what group/team/organization, if any, is your character affiliated with?): None currently

Character Origin & Backstory: Anna Marie has not had a happy life, though she grew up relatively happily as a normal child, raised by loving parents, her genetic potential would intervene to ensure that this average existence would not continue. She was only thirteen, in the full throes of puberty and finally beginning to discover who she was as a person when everything she ever knew changed for ever. At the time mutants were not known of, but her father's predisposition towards intolerance could perhaps be a warning as to what was to follow.

Like many children that age, Anna Marie had begun to notice the opposite sex, in this case a boy around her age called Cody. Cody became her first boyfriend, and her first regret. Her powers manifested during, or a short time before their first kiss, putting the boy in a coma for three days. Her father was not, perhaps, the man he should have been, and if he had then things would not be as they are. Terrified of the demon his child appeared to be, he disowned her, throwing her out and telling her to never darken his door again.

Abandoned and alone, Anna Marie wandered around the states, rapidly running low on cash and any way to survive, when she was discovered by an old woman in a bus station, a woman who, it turned out, was a powerful mutant in her own right. The still young and impressionable Anna Marie was taken in by Mystique and raised as a powerful mutant, she took to calling her saviour ‘Mama’ and was trained in her abilities, practising on her team mates. When Mystique deemed her old enough, she started taking her on some of the groups missions, often stealing documents or valuable equipment. Anna Marie’s abilities proved undeniably useful, until the day that Mystique set a trap for her then-nemesis, Carol Danvers, better known as Ms. Marvel, a 17 year old girl with amazing superhuman abilities.

Ms. Marvel attempted to intervene in their illicit activities, terrified and forced to defend herself Anna Marie drained her powers, but she held on for a long time, longer than she had ever done before. Ms. Marvel was rendered powerless and reduced to a coma, one that showed no sign of lifting. Anna Marie remained with the team for a short time after that, but traumatised and wracked with guilt, left her home once again. She was 18, no longer a child, but still too young for the responsibilities her powers have forced upon her.

Seeking something close to a normal life, Anna Marie, now a wanted criminal, stays in one place as long as she can until someone recognises her, waiting until hopefully enough time passes and people will forget her face, and finally leave her in peace.

Powers and Abilities (What can your character do? What can't they do?): Anna Marie has the potential to be an extremely potent mutant, but several self-inflicted mental blocks lie in the way of her unlocking her true potential and truly controlling her abilities. She possesses what has been described as a fluid genome, one that can change and adapt to the changing situation, or more specifically, to the powers of whatever mutant she happens to be touching at the time. This has a number of effects, contact with what appears to be any living being, human or not, begins the process, she begins to drain what seems to be life force from her target, this is a painful and difficult experience for those she touches, and is far from pleasant for her as well. Those affected by her touch can struggle, but the weakening effect that comes with it makes it difficult to willingly break the bond. This ability does not simply draw energy, should the target be possessed of special abilities, then Anna Marie will replicate them herself, this includes both natural and artificial mutants, but not abilities that are magical in nature. This is not a permanent effect unless the contact is excessively prolonged, but a contact of a few seconds is enough to induce weakness in her target and grant her their abilities for a few minutes. With the powers also come memories, and even in some cases, entire personalities, though Anna Marie is not yet aware of the extent of this ability.

In addition to this ability Anna Marie possesses a whole host of abilities she has received from her prolonged contact with Ms. Marvel.

Superhuman Strength – Superhumanly strong, she can lift huge weights and throw punches through walls. Though it has never been properly measured, Anna Marie is capable of throwing cars with relative ease, and is likely capable of lifting approximately fifty tons.

Superhuman Stamina – Anna Marie can physically exert herself for many hours until her muscles produce enough fatigue toxins to truly slow her down.

Superhuman Speed – A side effect of enhanced strength, Anna Marie can push herself faster than any normal human could.

Superhuman Durability – Anna Marie is considerably more resistant to physical damage than any normal human, thanks to the enhanced tissue density granted by Ms. Marvels abilities. To the extent that she could take a hit from a bullet without breaking stride, though armour piercing rounds might give her pause.

Flight – Anna Marie is capable of defying the forces of gravity and taking flight.

Sample Story Arcs: Opening Arc – Anna Marie is minding her own business and trying to hold a job down, unfortunately, this proves more problematic than she had hoped, either someone recognises her face from old news reports, or she accidentally uses her abilities, outing her, and is forced to flee.

Is it getting crowded in here? – Carol Danvers wakes up, inside Anna Marie’s head, I always loved this story arc in the old X-men cartoon series but I’d like to explore it a little more, perhaps with more of a dialogue going on instead of Carol Danvers simply trying to drive her insane. Perhaps as a close to the arc Carol’s old feelings for Spiderman surface and confused by having to deal with two people’s feelings in her head Anna Marie makes her way to New York to track down Spiderman

Redemption – Anna Marie has done a lot of bad things, but at the core she is not a bad person, perhaps just a misguided one, it would be nice if perhaps through Spiderman she encounters the Xmen, finally finding a mentor and someone to help her with her rapidly spiralling personality issues.

Sample Post (This is used as an introduction to your writing – try to keep it to around three paragraphs or more and try to include dialogue):

“Anna we got your order here.”

“Sure thing hun, ah’m comin’.”

The waitress’ honeyed tones were becoming familiar in the diner now. She had only been there for perhaps three months, but she was already becoming a favoured server among the small establishments regular patrons. Her attractive appearance helped, but her kind and sweet personality helped to win over those not enamoured by her physical appearance.

She made her way behind the counter, grabbing the piled trays and whirling on in a movement that demonstrated obvious practice. She took it back in front of the counter and swayed over to the first table, handling the two trays with an ease that belied her size. She slapped them down in front of the Renton family. The father was a big guy, but running slightly to fat now, while his wife was diminutive by comparison. The son was about her age, just back from College it seemed, and had been eyeing her up. He was cute, she couldn’t deny that, and seemed nice enough, but even if he did pluck up the courage to ask her out, nothing could ever come of it. She sighed internally.

“Here ya go guys, tuck in, ya gotta have a big appetite to eat all o’ that hun.”

The father laughed and reached across to clap his son on the shoulder, “oh don’t worry he’s got a big appetite, he’s the star quarterback of his college team.”

“Well ain’t that impressive, he must have all the ladies after him at college.”

The father had evidently noticed his son’s interest, but Anna wasn’t going to rise to the bait, never could, for fear she might do worse than she already had. Cody, not to mention all those since, notably Ms. Marvel. It was true that her abilities had been very helpful since then, but the woman was still in a coma. Anna Marie could barely sleep these days without seeing the look of terror on the woman’s face as her life drained away. Not to mention the strange thoughts that seemed to be appearing in her head without her putting them there.

Maybe you’re going mad…
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Gambit Accepted. I will be reading Rogue right now.

On another note, since Spider-Man so far will be running around with a bunch of Walking the Line characters, I plan on accepting maybe one, two at max more W-t-L characters after Rogue (assuming she is accepted) until we a few more Hero characters.

Edit: I just realized that all of our characters pretty much had crappy childhoods.
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If she is accepted (fingers crossed) then I intend for her to become a hero, I just found it odd that after functionally killing someone like Ms. Marvel no one seemed to take any notice of her. So I wanted to explore that aspect of her first, she does want to make up for what she's done though, so maybe Spiderman could help her do that in some way?

P.S. It does seem to be conducive to creating super heroes, you'd think more of them would lash out instead of defending the world, I guess we're lucky they don't
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Actually, I intended on Gambit becoming a hero too, after he stops all this killing he's about to do

He'll join the X Men shortly thereafter.

Maybe thats when they'll hook up, nosuchthing. Even in this topsyturvy world I still see Rogue and Gambit getting together at some point. They make such a good couple.
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Haha, they do, I always loved their relationship cause Gambit was always presented as something of a womaniser, but then is in love with and content with a woman he can't touch, it's so cute.

Edit: Though I feel we shouldn't miss the opportunity for them to have a fight at some point, I imagine it could be quite entertaining
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Haha, they do, I always loved their relationship cause Gambit was always presented as something of a womaniser, but then is in love with and content with a woman he can't touch, it's so cute


Agreed. It's got to be something to do with her being a rough southern bell. It's like the inverse of belladonna, which makes a lot of sense. He probably wants to distance himself from that experience as much as possible at that point, but there's also a familiarity there.

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Edit: Though I feel we shouldn't miss the opportunity for them to have a fight at some point, I imagine it could be quite entertaining


Edit: Most def.
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@Nosuchthing: Looks good so far; however, I have a few things that I would like changed to fit the "lore" of this RP (see on the first post).

1st, note that the general public has only been aware about super-humans (both mutants and mutates - i.e. Spider-Man, Hulk, Daredevil, etc.) since 2010. Currently in the RP, it is 2012. Your application was vague on Rogue's age. It does mention that she was 13 when her powers manifested, but there is nothing telling me how old she is at the current date. This is important because that would determine Rogue's father's reaction to the manifestation of Rogue's powers. If she was 13 in or after 2010, then her origin is fine. However, if she was 13 before 2010, you will have to alter the origin. However, with that said, if the latter is true (she was 13 before 2010), then all you need to do is edit the wording. While her father might not hate her because she is a "mutant", because that term has not been 'invented" yet, he could still hate her for her powers. This would be a very easy change to make. And you can be creative with it. What would someone in society call someone who has manifested powers that have caused harm towards others?

2nd: Ms. Marvel. While she might be a too big of a character to make an NPC, I guess your application does not prevent anyone from picking her up as a character. So this part is fine. But again, age is a factor (for many reasons). First, just be mindful that most super-humans started their careers in 2010 or later. This does not mean that they did not have their powers before that, but they started began to fight crime around 2010-11. This again is fine. Ms. Marvel could be in any year of her career (1, 2, or 3).

However, her tie with Spider-Man is a little problematic. Don't get me wrong, if Peter isn't with Mary Jane Watson (who I plan on getting together with Peter in this RP), I would so support a Peter-Carol matching. If we are assuming Ms. Marvel is around her age in the 90's X-Men cartoon, which I would guess would be late-20's at the youngest (and that is a stretch) and mid-30's at the oldest, she would be too old to have a relationship with Peter (who is between 17-18, since he is a junior in high school). Peter also has been in a relationship with Gwen until she died tragically. I liked the ideas, but unfortunately, they don't quite fit. However, I believe that if we work together, we can work something out.

A possible work-around for this second issue is to have a teenage Ms. Marvel (similar to the current one, Kamala Khan, but having Carol be around her age). This would fix the 20-30 year old having a crush on a high-school student. Then, just like in the comics, Carol could have feelings for Spider-Man, but never really act upon them. Maybe a couple team ups in the past, but nothing more than friends (just like Firestar) since Peter was already dating Gwen. Now that Carol is in a coma, this could add onto Peter's already crappy life of tragedies (death of parents, uncle Ben, Captain Stacy, Gwen Stacy, and now Ms. Marvel is in a coma). Let me know what you think of these ideas. My Spider-Man application is one the first page. Either just scroll down or follow the hyperlink to see it just for reference.

If we can fix these few points, I can start the 24-hour timer.

Edit: I hope I did not just rain on anyone's party. :( I am flexible with the story and will work with you to make sure it works.

Edit 2: Looking back over your application, I just realized I overlooked the part of the sample post that made it clear that she was college aged (I assume somewhere between 18-23).
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Firstly...

MY GOD THE WALL!!!

Secondly...

Thanks for the feedback, it's nice to have a GM who not only points out my errors reasonably, but also offers constructive attempts to work around them. I applaud you sir.

I apologise for my oversight regarding age and the term mutant, I did read the whole of the opening post but I did so while half asleep and probably should have re-read it XD.

In terms of age I was intending her to be around that age yes, but I wasn't too sure as I didn't know how it would affect everyone else, I also forgot to clarify it as I am used to there being an age entry in apps, easily remedied though. It certainly wasn't as clear in the app as it could have been.

Regarding Ms. Marvel, yes that works perfectly for me, I wasn't too sure quite how old Peter was, seeing how much crap has been heaped upon him, but I understand now. I also did not intend her and Peter to have had a relationship, merely that she had feelings towards him, your second point rather than your first, which is still entirely possible, I'm sure many people have been in that position throughout their lives. However, do you propose that the teenage Carol Danvers has a crush on Peter but does not know his secret identity, or that Ms. Marvel has a crush on Spidey but does not know that he is Peter?

And don't worry, I brought an umbrella ;)
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Ok, edits attempted, everything I changed/added I put in bold so you don't need to read through absolutely everything again. I think I managed to get everything you referred to but I'm happy to make more changes if there is something I've missed.
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Ok, edits attempted, everything I changed/added I put in bold so you don't need to read through absolutely everything again. I think I managed to get everything you referred to but I'm happy to make more changes if there is something I've missed.
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Interested in this, working on a Black Widow sheet. It's turning out to be a bit of a beast.
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Nosuchthing said Firstly...MY GOD THE WALL!!!Secondly...

My bad. :D

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Looks good. I'll accept it within the next 24 hours (probably less since I can see that you made your changes a few h ours ago).

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Interested in this, working on a Black Widow sheet. It's turning out to be a bit of a beast.


Looking forward to see your application.
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Player Name: NosuchthingCharacter You Wish To Play: Anna Marie (Rogue)


Character Accepted. Just a reminder to everyone that if your character has been accepted, please post your application in the Character Sheet Repository (there is a link to it in the OP). Just a friendly reminder. :D
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Quick question Dedonus, what time of year is it in the RP?
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Quick question Dedonus, what time of year is it in the RP?


Mid-August (before school starts in the United States).

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Black Widow


Application looks good. Once 24 hours have elapsed, it will be officially accepted.
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I'm mulling over a former DD CS I have. I might make some edits and submit it. Though, perhaps I should wait until I get a Gambit post up, test the waters and such.

I'm also thinking of a Baron Zemo CS. That's if we get some more Avengers and perhaps a Fantastic member or two.
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I'm going to try and get my Daredevil sheet up tomorrow or Friday at latest.
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I'm going to try and get my Daredevil sheet up tomorrow or Friday at latest.


Perfect, a good ol fashioned contest. We should time the release of our CS'
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