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@Sibelius Firstly, I must point out that a two-hundred-year-old Orc is about middle-aged, so he's starting to get on the old side. That said, nothing's stopping you. I can give you a few different examples of conflicts which the Nordavind have been involved in: -The Minotaur Wars: There's been several of these. The humans and minotaurs fight constantly over an area of fertile land in the southeastern part of the country that both claim as their own (this will make more sense once the map is done). Considering the size of the Minotaurs, the Nordavind are almost always called in to fight against them. -The Dragonkin War: So about ten-fifteen years ago, a group of Dragonkin (like saurians but with wings and fire breath) came out of hibernation in the Desolate Mountains to the Northeast of Haderlock and started to burn towns to the ground. The Nordavind were called in to fight them, and a really big fight initiated where a lot of the soldiers were killed. The group of about fifteen Dragonkin lost, but at the price of many soldiers. -The Frost River Uprising: This was a smaller conflict where a slave uprising of minotaurs, centaurs, icemen, and humans fought with Nordavind troops and Juvegol city guards because they were being forced to build the bridge over the River Frost, which is extremely treacherous. The Nordavind really shouldn't have been called in, but the slaves started burning buildings and so the king at the time decided to shut them down permanently. Needless to say, few Nordavind were hurt in this fight. -The Invasion of Glaces: About thirty years ago, some wise guy had the bright idea to invade Glaces. This was a bad plan. Those are just a few prevalent examples. You can make up your own fight if you want to (since 90% of this stuff I just spit out whenever it's necessary anyways).
Thanks for all this. Was hoping to get round to it tonight, but just had too much work on + will be the same tomorrow. Hopefully will finish it Friday night or Saturday morning, if that's alright? Got the ideas now, just need to find some time to write.
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@SirBeowulf I dont have too much of a problem with the sheet, in fact I do like it, but there needs to be a bit more detail. His appearance section mainly. Pictures are used as supplements and all that, but there still needs to be a bit of detail on his character. His skin for one is FAR too perfect for a swordsman. His skin should be littered with scars ranging from size because you don't get good at an art like that unless you get hurt. I've picked up training in Kendo recently and in the past two months, and while I'm still working with Bokkens I've seen some of the higher ranking members acquired a LOT of scars to add to their collection. I would honestly be surprised that he hasn't lost a few fingers. That's just an example of the detail you should be adding. I have no idea how dense he is as a person in terms of weight, what color his eyes are, stuff like that. Secondly, the average human stands are 5'7 in this RP (since humans weren't as tall in the middle ages, which is approx. just before the time of this RP setting wise). We have a few humans reaching six feet and more so far and I've kept quiet about that, but I want to make sure you know that if you're that big and you're using a style he's using, you're at a supreme disadvantage compared to someone who is the right size for that art. I'm 5'10, and I've been put on my ass several times by people much smaller than me (sometimes my own students, although once we fight on the ground it's a different story). That's in hand to hand combat where speed and agility win out over power (because it doesn't matter how hard you hit if you don't connect). I'm trying to make you aware that your character might be more agile than an unpracticed or new swordsman, but as a human (and a large one at that) he's going to be nothing but outclassed when going up against a smaller someone who's using the same or a similar aggressive style. You might want to add that to the weaknesses which are also somewhat lacking. I say this because this:
The Ferdinand style, while very effective against people simply hiding behind a shield, has problems when going up against another aggressive style. In such a situation, both sides will likely be injured heavily simply due to the fact that neither are able to properly defend.
Isn't a weakness. It's a limitation.
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wordes.
Righto, I forgot there was a whole size chart on the front page. Also that people were shorter back then. I was really intending for him to be only two or so inches taller than the average man, not a whole five or six. Also added onto his disadvantages, but aren't limitations a disadvantage? Really, I don't see much difference between the two.
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Righto, I forgot there was a whole size chart on the front page. Also that people were shorter back then. I was really intending for him to be two or so inches taller than the average man, not a whole five or six. Also added onto his disadvantages, but aren't limitations a disadvantage?
What's wanted moreso in weaknesses should be tailored to your character personally, something the can be used against specifically them. Like an allergy or a past injury. Come to think of it, I haven't seen any characters with any allergies. Huh.
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Ah, but the sheet does not say disadvantages, it saws weaknesses. Even if it did say disadvantages, stating that fighting your character in this style would end up with both of you pretty badly wounded isn't a disadvantage.
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We're about to do a high fantasy roleplay with fantasy races, impossible magic and all that, but... GASP... SOMEONES HEIGHT ISN'T REALISTIC IN A FANTASY RP?! OH MAI GAWWD STOP THE PRESSES, THAT'S JUST UNACCEPTABLE...! OH THE HUGE MANATEES! Being sarcastic mind you. XD Just think it's funny. Impossible races, impossible magic, but we have to abide by height physics because it would be unrealistic if people were very tall? Wat? Did I miss the meaning of a fictional fantasy?
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We're about to do a high fantasy roleplay with fantasy races, impossible magic and all that, but... GASP... SOMEONES HEIGHT ISN'T REALISTIC IN A FANTASY RP?! OH MAI GAWWD STOP THE PRESSES, THAT'S JUST UNACCEPTABLE...! OH THE HUGE MANATEES! Being sarcastic mind you. XD Just think it's funny. Impossible races, impossible magic, but we have to abide by height physics because it would be unrealistic if people were very tall? Wat? Did I miss the meaning of a fictional fantasy?
Too many tall people and we won't have enough folks to fit into the War Tunnels. Personally I don't give six dicks how tall folks are. You can all be shawties or longies, but in the end, you're still gonna get shot in the ass.
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Ah, but the sheet does not say disadvantages, it saws weaknesses. Even if it did say disadvantages, stating that fighting your character in this style would end up with both of you pretty badly wounded isn't a disadvantage.
By that stuff, I meant that his weakness was that he had no actual defensive skills. If you want more, I've added a bit on him being fairly pampered as a noble, no real skills or knowledge of things outside his field of work.
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Ah, but the sheet does not say disadvantages, it saws weaknesses. Even if it did say disadvantages, stating that fighting your character in this style would end up with both of you pretty badly wounded isn't a disadvantage.
By that stuff, I meant that his weakness was that he had no actual defensive skills. If you want more, I've added a bit on him being fairly pampered as a noble, no real skills or knowledge of things outside his field of work.
I'd say it's fine. Don't know about the other guys. Oh, oh, give him a magic-induced flower allergy halfway through the game, that'd be hilarious.
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Calm down, mortals. Your god is here. @SirBeowulf Sheet looks good, but it's a little light. I think you should try a little harder in the personality and appearance sections personally, but they're acceptable I suppose. When you say longsword, however, what kind of sword are you referring to? While in a lot of MMOs a longsword is one-handed, in real life they're generally two-handed weapons, which don't seem to fit Tazzano's style. If you're pressed for a sword, I would suggest an arming sword, as it was generally used by knights in the medieval periods and was fairly long. I think the weaknesses are okay, but it does seem a tad odd to me that he's fairly unscathed from combat but has such an aggressive attack style and light armor, though if he had money I suppose that he could have gotten some scar-healing potions or something. It's funny that you say his last name is Ferdinand, because that is the surname of the King of Talbor. The Ferdinand family has ruled in Talbor for about 75 years. If you wanted to change Tazzano's backstory some and have him be related somehow to the King of Talbor, you can, though you certainly don't have to.
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Calm down, mortals. Your god is here. @SirBeowulf Sheet looks good, but it's a little light. I think you should try a little harder in the personality and appearance sections personally, but they're acceptable I suppose. When you say longsword, however, what kind of sword are you referring to? While in a lot of MMOs a longsword is one-handed, in real life they're generally two-handed weapons, which don't seem to fit Tazzano's style. If you're pressed for a sword, I would suggest an arming sword, as it was generally used by knights in the medieval periods and was fairly long. It's funny that you say his last name is Ferdinand, because that is the surname of the King of Talbor. The Ferdinand family has ruled in Talbor for about 75 years. If you wanted to change Tazzano's backstory some and have him be related somehow to the King of Talbor, you can, though you certainly don't have to.
doggonit. His sword is a mix between a longsword and a rapier. Really, swords have a bunch of the same names and are really confusing. A one handed sword, just like the arming sword would suffice. His off-hand weapon is about the same length as a machete, maybe a bit longer. As for his family named... should I change it? It might seem a bit confusing. It would ruin his amazing name, though.
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Calm down, mortals. Your god is here. @SirBeowulf Sheet looks good, but it's a little light. I think you should try a little harder in the personality and appearance sections personally, but they're acceptable I suppose. When you say longsword, however, what kind of sword are you referring to? While in a lot of MMOs a longsword is one-handed, in real life they're generally two-handed weapons, which don't seem to fit Tazzano's style. If you're pressed for a sword, I would suggest an arming sword, as it was generally used by knights in the medieval periods and was fairly long. It's funny that you say his last name is Ferdinand, because that is the surname of the King of Talbor. The Ferdinand family has ruled in Talbor for about 75 years. If you wanted to change Tazzano's backstory some and have him be related somehow to the King of Talbor, you can, though you certainly don't have to.
doggonit. His sword is a mix between a longsword and a rapier. Really, swords have a bunch of the same names and are really confusing. A one handed sword, just like the arming sword would suffice. His off-hand weapon is about the same length as a machete, maybe a bit longer. As for his family named... should I change it? It might seem a bit confusing. It would ruin his amazing name, though.
If you make him related to royalty it'd be all the more material to work with along the way in terms of subplot devices. I say go for it.
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Alright then. He's accepted. Just figure out the name thing before you put him in the character sheet area. I don't really care what you do, but I think it'd be cool if he was related to the royal family of Talbor. Also, just a heads-up; I've got hella work to do tonight, so I'm getting off and I won't be back on till tomorrow. If you all have any questions/issues/burning desires to give me your virginity, please direct such requests to SepticGentleman and UrbanEvolution.
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I wonder if I add an E ad the end it'll work out...
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What about my character, Maxx?
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wordes.
Righto, I forgot there was a whole size chart on the front page. Also that people were shorter back then. I was really intending for him to be two or so inches taller than the average man, not a whole five or six. Also added onto his disadvantages, but aren't limitations a disadvantage?
What's wanted moreso in weaknesses should be tailored to your character personally, something the can be used against specifically them. Like an allergy or a past injury. Come to think of it, I haven't seen any characters with any allergies. Huh.
Sikarthis is allergic to bullshit
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(yes I know I said I wasn't gonna be on tonight but I'm a dirty liar and a procrastinator) @Ink Blood Iver needs to be reworked a little. The appearance is okay, but you didn't describe your attire enough; you can provide a picture but you need to describe the picture too. What are the materials that his clothing is made out of? Personality-wise, he's okay, but with the "untrustworthy but also nice" thing you want to be careful because he can pretty easily become an evil mary sue. Might wanna reword that if you're going for "silver-tongued devil". History-wise, the wall has only been up for a little under ten years, so Iver going to the other kingdoms wouldn't have been a problem until about twenty-five years ago when the war between Nepharie and Ostracus began. How long ago did Iver leave Ostracus? Also, magic isn't listed in his powers. If you use magic in this rp, you must specify in the power section (a) that your character can use magic and (b) exactly what you can do. I don't want any "Surprise! it's Gandalf!" moments. Sorry if any of that seemed harsh, I'm just kinda stressed right now IRL. Take your time working on the sheet. The IC is probably gonna get pushed back and I'm not gonna kick you out of you needed time to edit a sheet. If you need any help with anything, feel free to contact me (though God willing I'll be doing schoolwork for most of tonight).
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We're about to do a high fantasy roleplay with fantasy races, impossible magic and all that, but... GASP... SOMEONES HEIGHT ISN'T REALISTIC IN A FANTASY RP?! OH MAI GAWWD STOP THE PRESSES, THAT'S JUST UNACCEPTABLE...! OH THE HUGE MANATEES! Being sarcastic mind you. XD Just think it's funny. Impossible races, impossible magic, but we have to abide by height physics because it would be unrealistic if people were very tall? Wat? Did I miss the meaning of a fictional fantasy?
To answer your question, Your race still has physical attributes that are regular to that said race. Go outside and count how many people are six or seven inches taller than everyone else (AKA a whole head and shoulders) and then apply it to the RP. We have about four humans, all male. Two of which assuming the height remained the same, on Beo's sheet, would be WAY over the average height. Essentially meaning than 50% of the male population is way over. I'm not saying it's unrealistic, I'm saying to keep in mind how tall that is and just how much bigger you are than everage (A six foot tall individual is about 10% larger than the average person height wise, which is huge). That's like the equivalent of myself compared to Shaq O'neal. You didn't miss the meaning of fictional fantasy, you missed the meaning that you're not overly special and if you want to be overly special physically you better have a good excuse to be overly special. Because in human culture a man that big isn't going to weild a sword. They'd be in fall armor weilding a mace or battleaxe of some kind. I know full well you are being sarcastic, but I know SOMEONE is going to eventually use that logic as a legitimate argument. I want to cover my bases and establish that my thought process for you all to see.
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