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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Etcetera
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I don't want it tooooo my addenda are all ruinnnnnned


That's a shame. Let me play you a sad song on the world's smallest trombone.

Thanks guys. I'll most likely be on tomorrow all day.


Sweet. Sounds good.
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So I guess the characters tab is a thing now.
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So I guess the characters tab is a thing now.


Lol. Surgeh.
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Lines of the song so far! =D

Welcome to a new world's what they say.
What if a new world is not for us?
The creatures of this place they did belay.
All they seemed to do to us was crush.

A "welcome" to a new world? Where is that? (Where is that?)
No one's told us what we need to do. (What to do...)
How hard is it to find a little chat?
They didn't leave us with a single clue. (Not a clue.)

We thought this world could be ours... (We think this world could be yours...)
But now we don't belong.

Dear me! (Welcome to a new world!)
Dear me! (It's great to have you here!)
Dear me! (Know that you belong!)
Where did we go wrong?
We've failed. (Try another shot now.)
We can't! (How can you know that?)
We shan't! (Maybe you'll be wrong!)
Now we don't belong.

Welcome to a new world--yes, it's new,
So different, and we never could have guessed
That everything we knew would just fall through:
The very most of different manifest.

Rhythm: (Single dashes signify a very short pause. Spaces signify a regular pause. Underscores signify a slightly longer pause. Double dashes signify a noticeably longer pause.)
Wel-- come to-- a new-- world's what-- they say.
(Same for the rest of this verse and the next one.)
We thought-- this-- world... could be ours. (We think this world could be yours has the same rhythm and starts at "be".)
But now-- we-- don't-- be-- long... ("long" is drawn out.)
Dear_me! (Wel-come-to-a-new world)
Dear_me! (It's great_to have_you here.)
Dear_me! (Know_that you_belong.)
Where_did we_go wrong?
(Same rhythm set for the second part of the chorus.)
(Same rhythm set as the first and second verses for the third verse.)

Is it good so far, David? (And anyone else who happens to read it)
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Lines of the song so far! =D

Welcome to a new world's what they say.
What if a new world is not for us?
The creatures of this place they did belay.
All they seemed to do to us was crush.

A "welcome" to a new world? Where is that? (Where is that?)
No one's told us what we need to do. (What to do...)
How hard is it to find a little chat?
They didn't leave us with a single clue. (Not a clue.)

We thought this world could be ours... (We think this world could be yours...)
But now we don't belong.

Dear me! (Welcome to a new world!)
Dear me! (It's great to have you here!)
Dear me! (Know that you belong!)
Where did we go wrong?
We've failed. (Try another shot now.)
We can't! (How can you know that?)
We shan't! (Maybe you'll be wrong!)
Now we don't belong.

Welcome to a new world--yes, it's new,
So different, and we never could have guessed
That everything we knew would just fall through:
The very most of different manifest.

Rhythm: (Single dashes signify a very short pause. Spaces signify a regular pause. Underscores signify a slightly longer pause. Double dashes signify a noticeably longer pause.)
Wel-- come to-- a new-- world's what-- they say.
(Same for the rest of this verse and the next one.)
We thought-- this-- world... could be ours. (We think this world could be yours has the same rhythm and starts at "be".)
But now-- we-- don't-- be-- long... ("long" is drawn out.)
Dear_me! (Wel-come-to-a-new world)
Dear_me! (It's great_to have_you here.)
Dear_me! (Know_that you_belong.)
Where_did we_go wrong?
(Same rhythm set for the second part of the chorus.)
(Same rhythm set as the first and second verses for the third verse.)

Is it good so far, David? (And anyone else who happens to read it)


I'd have to hear it to tell you that.
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Lines of the song so far! =D

Welcome to a new world's what they say.
What if a new world is not for us?
The creatures of this place they did belay.
All they seemed to do to us was crush.

A "welcome" to a new world? Where is that? (Where is that?)
No one's told us what we need to do. (What to do...)
How hard is it to find a little chat?
They didn't leave us with a single clue. (Not a clue.)

We thought this world could be ours... (We think this world could be yours...)
But now we don't belong.

Dear me! (Welcome to a new world!)
Dear me! (It's great to have you here!)
Dear me! (Know that you belong!)
Where did we go wrong?
We've failed. (Try another shot now.)
We can't! (How can you know that?)
We shan't! (Maybe you'll be wrong!)
Now we don't belong.

Welcome to a new world--yes, it's new,
So different, and we never could have guessed
That everything we knew would just fall through:
The very most of different manifest.

Rhythm: (Single dashes signify a very short pause. Spaces signify a regular pause. Underscores signify a slightly longer pause. Double dashes signify a noticeably longer pause.)
Wel-- come to-- a new-- world's what-- they say.
(Same for the rest of this verse and the next one.)
We thought-- this-- world... could be ours. (We think this world could be yours has the same rhythm and starts at "be".)
But now-- we-- don't-- be-- long... ("long" is drawn out.)
Dear_me! (Wel-come-to-a-new world)
Dear_me! (It's great_to have_you here.)
Dear_me! (Know_that you_belong.)
Where_did we_go wrong?
(Same rhythm set for the second part of the chorus.)
(Same rhythm set as the first and second verses for the third verse.)

Is it good so far, David? (And anyone else who happens to read it)


Seems legit. As a songwriter myself, seems good.
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I'd have to hear it to tell you that.


Well, I mean, the rhythm and the rhymes.
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Shinji's patience is wearing sooooo thin XD
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So I guess the characters tab is a thing now.


Yes. Yes it is.
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Shinji's patience is wearing sooooo thin XD


#ShinjiIsStupid
#BlameShinji
#NobodyLikesShinji
lelelel
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Yes. Yes it is.


There goes the ability to make some kind of first post there lel
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There goes the ability to make some kind of first post there lel


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Well, I mean, the rhythm and the rhymes.


It's fine.

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Yes. Yes it is.


Can we refine that, though? Newcomers will look at that and may not take it seriously. At a later point, we may have to use that for regulations.

Shinji's patience is wearing sooooo thin XD


Maybe if you knocked her out, you'd see why it shouldn't be.
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It's fine.

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Can we refine that, though? Newcomers will look at that and may not take it seriously. At a later point, we may have to use that for regulations.

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Maybe if you knocked her out, you'd see why it shouldn't be.


...Okay.
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Maybe if you knocked her out, you'd see why it shouldn't be.


Don't do that right now though because it would take a lot of time.
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What should it be like?
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I. Love. Playing. Sips/Sjin.
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...Okay.


I'm not trying to bag on you or anything, but even for a placeholder, something like "Instructions to be added later" would need to be there.

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Don't do that right now though because it would take a lot of time.


I wouldn't let him.
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I. Love. Playing. Sips/Sjin.


I love Sipping shakes and not Sjinning.
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I love Sipping shakes and not Sjinning.


Sjinning shakes is fun though.
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