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Penumbra - Sigil of the Damned
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Chapter 1 - Predator
“Do good,” Flynn’s mother said to him the day she died. “Stand in the light.”

He’d hardly understood what doing good meant at six years old. He wasn’t sure he was much closer at eighteen. Here he was, after all, wasting what should have been his proudest moment, still trying to puzzle out the good thing to do.

Joining the police academy was supposed to be the honorable thing. There weren’t many options available for a street urchin like him, and this was far preferable to slowly rotting away begging for scraps like so many others in the city. As long as Flynn could remember, it had been his dream to stand armed among his brothers in uniform.

But he didn’t feel like he was standing in the light. All he could think of now was Thomas with the gaping hole through his neck, drooling red as he made that honking pig sound. The last he’d ever make. And Eddie, laid on the ground with blood smeared across his face, jaw-hanging open as the others named him a murderer. And the other thing he saw last night…that abomination. He should’ve told the truth, but who would believe him?

Thomas was a good man, who stood for those beside him just as a member of the police squad was supposed to. Surely he hadn’t deserved to die for that?

Eddie cared for nothing past the end of his own nose. Flynn still bore bruises from the last time he had to help calm Eddie’s drunken rage. Even so, surely he didn’t deserve to be named murderer for that?

Flynn glanced guiltily up at the statue of the scales, the emblem of Penumbra’s police force. Towering in judgment over him. He squirmed as though he was the one who’d killed Thomas and named Eddie a murderer. All he’d done was watch.

Watch and do nothing.

The Captain was always first to arrive and last to leave. Flynn had waited until all the others had gone for the evening before approaching his office. Flynn’s heart beat loud in his ears. His mouth opened.

“Captain Elliot!” he blurted, far too loud, and then, as the police captain turned toward him, croaked far too soft, “I need to speak to you.”

“What about, Flynn?” That gave him pause. The department was huge, he hadn’t thought the Captain would even know his name.

“About Edward Blake.”

A long silence. The captain might only have been a few years older than Flynn, pale-skinned and pale-haired as if the color was washed out of him, so gaunt a stiff breeze might blow him away, but close up there was something chilling in the captain’s eye. Something that caused Flynn to wilt under his gaze.

But there was no going back now. “He’s no murderer,” he muttered.

“The others think he is.”

His throat felt dry, but Flynn pressed on. “The others weren’t there. They didn’t see what I saw.”

“What did you see?”

“It was our day off. We were sharing drinks at the Rat’s Nest-“

“Yes I already know all this. Get on with it.”

This wasn’t going as well as Flynn had hoped. “Eddie and Thomas got into an argument, something about Eddie’s drinking habits. They took it to the alley outside…they started fighting. But then, there was something else there. It was- It was a monster!”

Captain Elliot glanced toward the office window, and eased a little closer. “But Flynn,” he whispered, “I already knew this as well.”

Flynn tripped backwards, gaping in horror at the nightmare that had suddenly appeared before him. The captain was covered slowly by a wispy shadow, his head arched forward and he grinned revealing a bright set of razor sharp teeth. It was the creature from last night, and up close it was even more terrible than he remembered. “You! But—“ he began to shout out for help but found he could not speak with the monster’s jaws clamped onto his neck.

It didn’t take longer than a few minutes for the beast to finish its meal. He gave a satisfied burp as the last traces of officer Flynn Avery melted away in his stomach, cut his contentment was cut short by the shadow that suddenly flashed in front of him.

“So, it was the captain all along? This city never ceases to amaze me,” came a stranger’s voice.

“Who are you?” The captain snarled, still in his monster form. The man that stood before him looked like a genuine mortal. How could he have snuck up on him so easily?

“I am the hunter,” the man said calmly as his silver blade sunk into the captain’s chest. “And you are my prey.”

Penumbra


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I've been having trouble finding something to jump into, but something like this that is brand new seems really simple to get into. I will try to work out a character in the near future. :)
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Sounds Good :^)
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A WIP. I need to figure out what sort of weapons I want to have, as well as decide if I have any notable other skills. And of course I need to find an image I'm happy with... but otherwise I think I'm almost done.

EDIT: character sheet completed.

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I am very much intrigued by this - it's almost remeniscent of Bloodborne, in its own unique way. Let's see if I can't assemble a halfway decent character sheet.
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interest noted, will have something up
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Edit: Completed! Hopefully, it turns out all right!

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@Boggle: Everything looks good so far, just finish everything up and you're accepted. Your Hunter's Aspect and Title is "Bloodletter" which gives you grants you endurance and regeneration when consuming blood. Drinking the blood of creatures aligned with the dark will also temporarily grant you aspects of their powers (be careful though, since this can also include taking on their weaknesses). What will happen when you drink the blood of a fellow Hunter is as of yet, uncertain.

@Clericbeast: You're right, it's heavily inspired by Bloodborne (as is your name I see) along with some other things like Dishonored, Bioshock, Claymore, etc. As for your character, looks cool so far, just finish up your backstory then I can give you your Hunter's Aspect.

@Grimoire: Looking forward to it.

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@Mancala

Backstory finished and sheet updated. Hope it's all right!
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Oh good. I was hoping for a new rp to jump in, one that was not already advanced. This will do.
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I edited with the completed character. :)
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@Clericbeast: Looks good! Your Hunter's Aspect and Title is "Salamander" which gives you the ability to manipulate and quell (but not create) fire. You are also able to read the memories of ash and cinder, and are unable to be harmed by flames while you are conscious. Be careful, something bad might happen if you are enraged.

@Boggle: Accepted

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How are we supposed to rank the stats? I know you said 'Rank them A through E' does that mean one gets an A, one gets a B, etc.? Or is it more random and you'll tell us if we're going balls deep into the over-powered dangerzone?
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@Dandelion

I'd assume the latter - I can't speak for everyone, but personally, I assigned my character's stats based on his actual capabilities.

I'm sure you'll be fine doing a random delegation, though, so long as you exercise some restraint.

Don't quote me on this, though; after all, I'm not the GM.
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@Mancala

Moved Xerxes to the character tab. Hope that's okay.
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@Dandelion

I'd assume the latter - I can't speak for everyone, but personally, I assigned my character's stats based on his actual capabilities.

I'm sure you'll be fine doing a random delegation, though, so long as you exercise some restraint.

Don't quote me on this, though; after all, I'm not the GM.


This was what I'd assumed. I guess I'll just roll with that idea and fix things up if need be. Cheers.
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@Dandelion: Clericbeast was correct. You are free to distribute stats however you want, and if it's too much I'll let you know.

@BeachBurrito: I have a few concerns with your character, mostly curious what the point is for your "Bondage armor". The mask is fine, if a bit eccentric, though I have to ask how she's going to fight besides trying to peck people. It's also a personal peeve of mine, but I really do prefer character images to descriptions, though I don't mind both. Backstory looks fine though, your Hunter's Aspect and Title is "Belladonna" which gives you the ability to enthrall and hypnotize others with your dance and movements. This is much less effective against creatures aligned with the Dark, while you can usually slow down or distract monsters you cannot fully control their actions as you would a normal human.

@Geoffrey: I know he's supposed to be a bookish coward, but you might want to consider giving him an actual weapon. Caltrops will be woefully ineffective against most the things you will be fighting. Everything else looks fine, your Hunter's Aspect and Title is "Mirrorwalker" which grants you the ability to instantly travel or send messages through reflective surfaces. Your attacks and weapons mysteriously seem to ignore hide and armor. Be wary of traveling through mirrors in the darkness, you never know what else will be doing the same.
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@Mancala - Happy to anwser!

1. Bondage Armor: Mostly a stylistic choice. Ligiea's take on 'I could beat you with my arms tied behind my back'
2. Aside from pecking she's sure to unleash volleys of kicks, knees, leg locks and shoulder take-downs. More to the point however, that helm of hers is attached to a full sized sword...
3. Not really the sort of aspect I had in mind when hoping for something to work in tandem with her inventions but I can work with it. I wouldn't have left it blank if I didn't want to be surprised.

One last thing though--and I don't really want to be that person--but I feel it needs to be said. I'm not a fan of the many spelling and grammar errors to be found in Geoffrey's rather short CS. By all means it's your roleplay and your decision and I might be the only one bothered by it. That said I'd rather back out early if that's where you set the bar for applicants, even if some (like cleric beast and yourself) exceed the standard. Wouldn't want to spoil the fun for others or drop out mid chapter.
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