Hey don't rush it man. If you feel you need to take a few days to get your post out, then do so. I just like responding as soon as possible so I don't lose the idea.
Also, about what I choose for Jaakuna to do, I felt that him giving into Monte's temptation/offer/suggestion right away would be too rushed. I mean, I already sort of forced some things with how his attitude changed(when he semi-bluffed his threat of smashing the tubes), so I wanted to kind of stretch this out. Plus, I think it will create a nice dynamic between Avalon and Jaakuna as I'm sure the former would be worried that the latter would want to take Monte on his offer, while the latter character will constantly think back to the words that Monte spoke.
Lol, now that I'm thinking about it, I'm getting a general idea of where I want to take Jaakuna's story arc. :3
