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Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by PhoebeCarlisle
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@Caits

I fixed it for you ^-^
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@PhoebeCarlislethank you!

@little_ninja wnat say you

And I need sleep now
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Your welcome and do I put my character up now? Have a great sleep :)
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@PhoebeCarlisle
Caits mentioned me to look over it for a second approval on your CS before it goes into the characters part
There are three things I would like to confirm inside your CS

In the Bio:
It says that she is the seventh daughter of the seventh daughter.
Is this meaning that she is a granddaughter? Like is there something special about it? Or is it just interesting to know?

Her father died to protect her from a witch.
Uh... In the reality part of SAO, there were witches? Can I get an elaboration on this?

Lastly, with skills, these aren't real life skills, but the skills that are chosen to use in the game.
Here is a list of some of the skills you might want to add your skills section
(Some not all of these should be added)







Anyway, small things inside your Stats area that need to be changed though
At level two, a player has 425 base health
Level three has 600 base health
Your stats at level two should add up to 13 (8 + 6 = 14) and at level three it should be 16
So depending on which level you want to set your character, you should reflect the right stats.

The bio part is mostly fine, the part you need to actually fix is the Stats and the Making a fire, because it is not a SAO skill
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nd that's why I always have a co GM to help me pick up things I miss.

Forgive me, but@PhoebeCarlisle are...are you basing your character around the Thomas ward chronicles? This roleplay is based on the anime sword art online. You don't need to know much about it, but basically the information we have provide should be enough to help you

@little_ninja a seventh daughter of a seventh daugjter basically means her mother has six sisters (making seven daughters) and Sven children (making seven daughters and that phoebes character is the seventh)
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I get that, but it just seems like it's the lead up to something of more importance
Which it seems it isn't
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It was important until I had to change it... I fixed the stats and the skills. :)
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Looking good now, not sure there's really anything else left in there to say much on
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Is this open for new characters?
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Is this open for new characters?


Always!!
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Cool, will get a CS up either tonight or after 4th of July.
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Okay!
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You can post in the character section and find a way to bring her into the RP
Just could you add some formatting? Makes it neater
(Not compulsory)
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If we can get this quest finished, and after the players "Go to bed" I'm happy to skip to a few days before the boss battle,.
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Hey I think this is too far ahead to start now and its all muddled I don't know what to do...
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We are only like two days into the game, you can jump i easily!
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Why are you asking me? You're the one who stalked me all the way here.
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I didn't stalk you here! what the- I didn't even know you did this one until after I joined. I thought we were friends...
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*hides under a conveniently placed scone*

I'm calling the police!
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um.

Right then.

If you wish a way to join in, perhaps you could have your character stumble acrossone of the teams path, hurt?
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