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I have something for the team:

A highly dangerous virus called "Weekly Overload Recreational Killer" (WORK), is currently going around. If you come in contact with this WORK virus, you should immediately go to the nearest "Biological Anxiety Relief" (BAR) center to take antidotes know as "Work Isolation Negation Extract" (WINE), "Radioactive Un-Work Meds" (RUM) "Bottleized Employee Extreme Rebootion" (BEER), or "Vaccine Offers Depression Killing Antidote" (VODKA).

You know just cause they have had a hard day.
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"That's enough son." The mid west accent was as clear as the smell of freshly baked apple pie as the Man of Steel released Sentinel's hand and landed beside him.


I know it's just one line, but can I just take a moment to congratulate Wraith on one of the most concise, on-point and apt descriptions off Superman I've ever read in an RP.
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He said before Sentinel collapsed in his friend's arms. "I tried. He...He was stronger than me." But not strong enough, Isaac thought. "You'll be alright. You did just fine, Sentinel. You made the House of El proud today." Green Lantern gave Superman a certain look. Sentinel understood it well. 'Good?' Green Lantern implied. 'He tried to kill lobo.'


I'm having a little trouble swallowing this bit of dialogue from Superman. As much as Sentinel's actions were thought out, to the observer they were reckless, impulsive and dangerous. I'm not sure 'You made the House of El proud today." is as appropriate as much of something along the lines "You did just fine Sentinel, but you still have much to learn."
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<Snipped quote by FacePunch>

I'm having a little trouble swallowing this bit of dialogue from Superman. As much as Sentinel's actions were thought out, to the observer they were reckless, impulsive and dangerous. I'm not sure 'You made the House of El proud today." is as appropriate as much of something along the lines "You did just fine Sentinel, but you still have much to learn."


Probably. But I don't write the best Superman, as painful as that is to admit. I'll edit it.

Although I totally covered my butt with that Green Lantern comment.
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This is also true.
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Pfft. Kansas, that'd be ridiculous.
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@Cubix Phenomenal post! Looking forward to seeing the developments between Isaac and Rhea.
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I think Rhea is my favorite character on the team.
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It's a bit disjointed, but I wanted to get something written. I present to you, part one of...

Luke is Confused

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Luke Nelson
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Evander the Amazon


On another note, I feel like Luke's motto is going to become "Wait, what?"
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I feel like that scene needs some of those aweful laugh sequences from old sitcoms. It'd be perfect.
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I feel like that scene needs some of those aweful laugh sequences from old sitcoms. It'd be perfect.


Haha, yeah. I was originally gonna have Luke check up on Sentinel, but Cubix beat me to it. So I settled for this, and another thing you guys'll see soon.
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I feel that Luke's face would be this:

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This Superhero gig doesn't work out, Rufus could always make career for UPS.

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This Superhero gig doesn't work out, Rufus could always make career for UPS.


Dude, I'd rather he delivered my pizzas. Fresh? From Nevada?
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I actually was going to have him go to Chicago and get Pizza, and make a How I met your mother reference.
But the guy can only move so quick, so Nevada it was.
To be honest, though. I probably wouldn't eat any food at all from Vegas / Nevada. But that's probably because I'm dumb and thinks it's filthy strippers and sweaty blackjack dealers who makes food in that town.

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Zane is offended
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Good.

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Origin story go!

Also, I felt the need to prove Ariel's comments correct. He's not only an out of control psychopath, he's ALSO a bipolar sociopath! Woo!
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Hooray for Ari being right!
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