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IC will be up in a moment. :)
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@ClosetMonsterFirst post is now up. As an FYI, Aachat is just alien for August :3 Hope you like the post!
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Large number of offspring? Jaq's looking at me like, "What the frak do I look like? A puppy mill?"

Heh - very nice.
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Aiduiin's basically just like "Yeah, pretty much." xD Tis the way of the Knurrians.
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I will not convey her thoughts on that, as they are by, and large, very much not suitable for a PG-13 site. Heh.

So... I wasn't sure just how to describe the beam... but I'm figuring it doesn't grasp at one spot on the body, but actually picks up the mass and transports it in some way. If I need to change that, please let me know and I'll fix my post.
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Oh my, haha.

I think that's a pretty good explanation for how it must feel as it's basically a giant magnet. Its that classic beam you see carrying away cows and whatnot in kids stories. Also I did want to mention that the Knurrians do have their own language, but (apart from names and titles) I'll only be using it when they're talking in front of Jaq. Which I'll translate OOC :) Like in this post for example, "ch’Tadous" means my prince.

Hope the post works for you :D
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I don't generally write back over a scene that has already been written, @eskimolander, but I figured it fit this situation. Otherwise, I'd have to process her freak-out later on and that's never any fun. Better to follow the rabbit from the beginning. :)
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Oh, haha, sorry about that. I specifically wrote so that you'd be able to write over it, but if that's not something you're comfortable with then I'll be sure to avoid in the future! Thanks for letting me know :)
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Oh no.. :) There are some, where it is how they do every post. I suppose I wanted to assure you that isn't the case, but yes - writing over it was totally comfortable for me.
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@ClosetMonster It is up, sorry that its a bit short. Next scene will probably be him trying to get her to the medic ward. Test things like overall health, check for any conditions, genetics, and most importantly: her fertility ;) Poor girl
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@eskimolander I could, I guess, fill in their travel to the medic ward? Poor thing indeed. :) Let me know if you'd like me to set that in. Or I'll follow your lead. I'm good with whatever makes you most comfortable.
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