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Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Darkmatter
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Minor suggestion, maybe add a 'played by' line to the character sheets?
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Minor suggestion, maybe add a 'played by' line to the character sheets?


I was actually thinking of doing something like that lol
Hidden 9 yrs ago → 9 yrs ago Post by Darkmatter
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It'd be handy for reference!

I have an intro post in mind and have started it. Wikus might be alone for a bit though if it's all going down at the Spit.

I also have a question with regards the transport network.

@YoshiSkittlez What's the content rating on this. I tend to take no prisoner's and write like I do for anything else; pretty grim and vulgar. That gonna fly here?
Hidden 9 yrs ago → 9 yrs ago Post by Lev
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Revenge, huh? You make it sound like Deon did something to her personally :D Wait... -looks at Deon- Did you?
Deon: -shrugs nonchalantly- hell if I know!

But anyway, that works out. If she's willing to do that, Deon won't have much of a choice with no one there to fight. Let's roll with that then.


EDIT: Because my stupid morming brain missed an entire page of comversation.. Ugh.

I agree and think the simplest way to draw this fight is character interaction. Let someone else end it, ya know?

I've been planning to have Audrey knee-deep in Beta interaction since the beginning. I actually thought that she'd turn to Vander first who would obviously be unable/unwilling to help stop the fight. Unsatisfied with that I figured she'd turn to the next closest thing - the drug dealer (unknown to her) at the bar.

After that she could enter the ring herself - like an idiotic, naive Alpha would (maybe thinking she has pull, maybe something else entitled-like) and verbally coax them out of the cage. Maybe she noticed Kat and threatened to reoport them with her weight as an Alpha? Something like that.

Of course, I might be too late for this. If so, ignore meeee

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Definitely want Audrey to meet Wikus. Lol
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@Lev

About to post! None of the clubs posted met mine, and by extension Wikus' tastes
Or were located in D16, so I placed one there. My post will have him headed to aforementioned club. A run in after or at is possible.
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@Darkmatter

Sweet! I hoped to have Audrey stranded in Beta for the night, so maybe sometime within that nightmare :)
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@Darkmatter
Content rating? -laughs- I'm probably the darkest material writer you'll ever meet with a twisted mind for some really, messed up content. So as long as it doesn't catch the attention of the admins, it's cool by me. Anyone who has a problem otherwise can message me privately and discuss it.
Hidden 9 yrs ago → 9 yrs ago Post by Dymion
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@YoshiSkittlez

All edits have been sent via PM.

And my brain hunter CS is in the works.
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@Lev Awesome. I'll post soon and you can decide then if you want to tango so to speak.

@YoshiSkittlez

Cool cool. Being Irish I have been completely desensitized. Though I'm well aware others often find issue with certain topics or expressions.
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Dark! The words you write! I like em!
For real, man, awesome writing. I love it. Just one question:

We’ve also got someone taking hits in the Districts who doesn’t crop as a contact for anyone we have channels with. Young female. Info on whereabouts and movements is limited. If you can track her down and suss out the situation; do."


Who was that referring to? Vander? My brain is sleep deprived, sorry. XD

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@Mach2

Taking hits = Assassination contracts.
Though if I realise if I said this to anyone in my social circle in real life they'd also immediately assume drug use .
I realise drugs are a major theme and I mayhaps have used a more clear wording. I was referring to Elizabeth, an assassin isn't going to go 100% unnoticed by a large criminal organisation.

Also thanks for the compliment. Cyberpunk is always my favourite setting and I enjoy the writing more than anything else!
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@DarkmatterAhhh, okie. Cool. Dy will be pleased to see someone's interested in Elizabeth. :3
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I was unsure when and who would be leaving the Spit anytime soon, or the intentions of those to post yet! So I made reference to characters Wikus would mostly likely naturally come into contact with soon and left him and a described second location for anyone to bump into him.
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@DarkmatterAhhh, okie. Cool. Dy will be pleased to see someone's interested in Elizabeth. :3


Indeed.
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Okay, my post is shit. Pardon my language. If it's not satisfactory just let me know and I'll more than likely ask that it be deleted...

I stared at my computer screen for so long that I finally conceded to writer's block, and a headache. Ugh
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@Heat Seeing as how our characters aren't straight up in things, perhaps our opening IC posts could be connected. You're an up and coming dealer, it'd make sense for a Crime family to have an interest one way or the other.

Nevermind, just saw you're also at the Spit.

Is anyone not?


Maybe our characters could meet up a little later on.
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Posts are great guys. I'll get to work on another Deon post unless, @Dymion, you wanted to collaborate to get in a bit more fighting before shit goes down?
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I'm fine with whatever.
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@Dymion I'll send you a PM
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Shut off the lights, doing what you guys recommended.
I'll let everyone respond to this change in lighting, nab the NPCrook, and call in the Rookies.
Dymion, Yoshi, you want me to have the Rookies try and stop the pit fight?
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