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Mortosh sat at a table Zam sat in front of him and was munching on her promised sugar cube he was staring up at the ceiling ("We Are Really Doing This? Aren't We Zam") Zam Briefly stop gnawing her cube and looked Mortosh in confusion "what are you talking about Mortosh?" he stop staring at the ceiling looked down at the petal and said ("This Zam This Whole Curing This Outbreak And In The Process Where We're Going Save The Children Of Afina This All Just Sound So Ludicrous And Here We Are An Undead Healer And A Petal") Zam just nodded in agreement "it dose when you mention it" She Toke a quick bite out of her cube before she continued

"but we sorta do this all the time" Mortosh Nodded ("But We Usually Just Deal With One Person But Now Were Saving Almost An Entire Village") Mortosh gave a non existence Sigh "can you tell me why the elven woman bothers you" ("She A Cleric") "how do you know that?"
("Clerics can sense another ones aura but hers is a bit muddled") he looked at the woman in question who busy speaking to a man and woman ("I Cant Sense Hers Properly") "Should i keep an eye on her" Mortosh Shook his ("No I Am Just Properly Paranoid Just Go Back to Your Cube")


Mortosh walked his skirt dragged behind him he stopped and stared at the village in front of him he looked around and saw a sign and "Welcome to Afina" (Afina What An Odd Name who Names a Village After A Goddess) "Zam Wake Up We Have Arrived" Feeling his shoulder Pocket shift he stared and Saw Zam's Head pop up out of her hidey hole her eyes hidden behind her Bangs (If i Had A Heart It Would Have Died twice Right Now) Mortosh Thought as he began to walk into town "Morty did you really have to wake me up i was having the most amazing dream ever" said Zam as she looked up at the void where his face should be "The One About The Land Of Sugar And Cake?" Zam Nodded in conformation "YEAH!!!"if The town people weren't giving the duo odd look before they sure as Trew and his love the Undead where giving them now

"Not So Loud Zam People are Staring At Us" "Let them Stare Mort they don't know that they are dealing with GREATEST HEALER OF ALL TIME" Zam Yelled at the Towns Folk With a Non existence sigh and a chuckle Mortosh gave up trying to calm her down "If You Don't Stop That Yelling Your Not Getting Your Sugar Cube" Zam looked at him with shock "Your lying" She accused "There Only One Way To Find Out Now Ask That child Where The Apothecary Shop Is Zam" She Flew out of her Hole and asked the child where shop is "She says it that way" Zam Pointed Straight Ahead "now Where is my sugar Mort?" Mortosh walked in the direction that Zam Was Pointing to "You'll Get It When Reach The Shop" "I better" Zam Said As she lowered herself back into her hole and Mortosh just Continued walking towards the shop


No you have not! It clearly shows when a post has or has not been edited. Clear out all references to "Afina" the name from all posts and the knowing who a cleric is by "feelings."
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@Afina changeing it as we speak
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I've posted. @Billsomething You didn't have to double post for that.
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@Billsomething no, as I stated in the pm you cannot have knowledge of another character if it is not worked out with that player before hand. So yours cannot have just run into her. This is what is known as metagaming.
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@Afina Can you let slide i won't do it again but if not can you give me a suggestion on what i should do instead
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@Billsomething Also i am a bit new to roleplaying
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@Billsomething Seriously, you've gotta stop double posting.

EDIT: Edit things you didn't say the first time in, like this.
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@Melkor i only see one EDIT: so i am to add this to announce the fact that i have edited something
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There are two double posts, from you, on this page.
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@Billsomething That is actually something you could work out with the player themself via pm. Always get a characters permission before hand. It isn't one of those things to let slide since I would be allowing a metagame towards another player without their knowledge.

Suggestions, can remove it entirely about the cleric and just make notes of what people are wearing and how they look from their posts in IC so far, can take the paper you were given by Wylsen since that is something your character should be reacting to. Things like that.
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@Afina Oh Ok
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@Melkor i only see one EDIT: so i am to add this to announce the fact that i have edited something


People usually do that, it gets the attention of readers so we know there's something else now.
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@Melkor oh ok but i have been doing some edits that don't change anything major but thanks for suggestion
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@Billsomething Since you are new I recommend reading this - Afinas Guide To Rp - it is an article I wrote for another rp forum that is their standard for new rpers to help teach them.
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Alright, I've put up a post. I think I've been quite fair in Tobias's assessment of the other characters based on what's on their sheets, though do tell me if I've overstepped my knowledge boundaries and I'll edit it out.
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@TheWizardLizard you seem to be okay, people have been posting what they wear and how they look, these on on sight things and your character is assuming but not knowing, that makes a huge difference and plays off well.
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Is there anyone whose not in the shop at this point?
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@MelkorSeveral, they will be along but no worries if they are not, I have contingency plans for all characters and even if the group that is there leaves, the shop will be open and the nun there to give out information and direct them to the group that left.
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@Afina Okay. Sounds like a plan.
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