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Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by OnlyThePie
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@Undine On the subject of depression, trust me, it can come from anywhere. I'd be happy to elaborate on flaws.

EDIT: Wasn't sure what you were looking for with Flaws, I tried to add stuff, but didn't get too far.
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Figured this needed a separate thread, will post Relationship sheets here as i finish them, unless you'd like me to attach them to the CC:
(quotes about people are assumed to be answers if asked "what do you think about X?"
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@Undine

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@UndineAh, got it, will fix. Also, is my relationship sheet alright so far?

EDIT: Added some bits about Stubbornness, hope that makes it better
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Nicely done, go ahead and post her to the character tab.


I'm glad you like her, she was fun to write. ^^

I'll get started on the relationship sheet.
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@Undine
Boop, edited it a bit.
Feels like I wasn't able to say much though.
Will fix it when I have time, right now, I need to go somewhere.
Darned group meetings...
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Looks fine for the most part: But could you talk a little about his redeeming traits? You did a great job in talking about how his mind works, but what about his outer personality? He's an asshole, he's got this certain charm... What else?


Ah! 'thought I've forgot to describe his outward persona. Added anyway.
As for Spencer being an asshole, I suppose he is of his own kind ... not like the common definition of an asshole. Or perhaps he's just that to himself. I'm not making any sense. Anyway, I'm still in the search for a faceclaim and I'm having a difficult time since there aren't many celebrity red-heads out there that perfectly matches Spencer. Found it! Also, I'm currently working on that relationship sheet.
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@Undine I've fixed up my sheet a bit, though I did have one more thing that I'll add in later. Also, I'll explain this in more detail later, but Korrie isn't good at handiling group peer pressure. If enough people get on him to do something, he's very likely to cave in to their demands.

Also, here's what I have for my relationship sheet.

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W.I.P. I'll add more detail later on.

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Relationship charts are fun, I like this. Kinda wish more RPs would include 'em. I'll expand on them at a later point in time, maybe later.

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I'm a little confused about why people don't like her beyond the whole popularity/social ladder thing. If she's friendly and approachable, why do people not like her? While a social hierarchy is important in high school, it's not always the case. As part of the unpopular kids back in high school, it was always really fun to talk to people, even if I didn't know them very well. I suppose it would all depend on where Marie stands in the social hierarchy... But are there other reasons why people don't like her? Or is it literally just because of the popular/not popular kids thing? Because if it's the latter, it feels like a little bit of a stretch to me.


Basically I was pulling from my own high school experiences, where any potentially popular kids (which Marie would be, since she's friendly and approachable as well as sporty, active, and relatively attractive) who mingled with the nerds or the socially inept folks ended up catching just as much flak as those unpopular kids themselves. Like a "Why aren't you as elitist as we are" penalty. If you feel that's unreasonable, I don't mind changing it up a bit, because I don't really disagree with you either.

My intent was that she's generally popular in the school sense of the word, like she's part of the 'it' crowd, but she gets talked about a lot behind her back because she's not that smart, and she definitely doesn't act like somebody who's going to be a successful businessperson one day. She doesn't worry a lot about the social norms, clique boundaries, etc, and doesn't really even recognize that they exist. I figured that would make her an easy target for potential bullying, etc. She'd definitely be an easy mark, as somebody who wants to help people all the time, or somebody who steps on peoples' toes by accidentally forgetting their name or face.

Let me know if that cleared anything up. If you still feel it's a stretch, I don't mind shifting some things around, I'll just need a bit to think on how I want to approach it. I'ma start working on a relationship sheet now as well, so I should get that up in a couple hours or so.
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For posterity and so I can close notepad, posting this here maybe a bit prematurely.

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Okay, sorry guys, I was super busy yesterday. I'll have mine up soon.
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Alright, here she is.

Let me know what I should fix!


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@Little Loser Interesting character, unsure of how Korrie would feel about this person. I think it really depends on how cruel she gets when she talks to guys. I feel that she could potentially be a target of his, which would probably not end well for all parties involved.
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I'm just going to put this here, it's not done yet but I should add more as the day goes before I have work tonight.


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Holy CRAP! It's back! You best know I'm applying!
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