As for the souls that I have, they are not affected by hell or anyother thing more differently as other souls that are in demigod bodies. Cause all of this souls already have a vessel(me), I don't see them leaving anytime soon. However souls will deplenish in the case of my character receiving a "fatal blow" or strong hits, you can call it my hp bar.

I'm not sure why they wouldn't be affected by Hell. The souls stored within you are still to be judged, those who fit the bill should rightfully be damned in Hell instead of stored within you. Since the souls you possess do not contain a divine spark, you cannot claim they are unaffected by Hell as all normal souls are indeed affected by it, regardless of where they are. To what degree varies with the soul. You may fight the pull Hell has on those souls, but you will have to RP out the effect the deeper you go if you wish to keep the souls. You're not the only one with soul harvesting powers in Hell, since Hell is essentially a collection of souls.

If I were to let this power get out of hand, then in such a case the quest would be over with your demigod absorbing all the souls in Hell and since you claim Hell has no effect on the souls you claim, then there is nothing I can logically do save for have Divine punishments kill your character until all the souls are depleted. Don't think I so easily accepted your character without considering the implications of having a soul manipulator in a realm of souls. I'm not THAT stupid, hence rule 6.

That being said, despite not having listed your ability to absorb souls to recover from fatal wounds, etc on the application, please quantify the number of souls you are currently carrying for this adventure through Hell should you wish to retain such souls, within a reasonable number please as you technically are not an immortal yet.

Is this reasonable and Fair?

I won't try* to collect any souls in hell as the only reason I do this is to rid the world of corruption(and power myself up) BUT you can consider me and my personal realm as a separate kind of hell. None can influence each other in relation to soul dealings. As a matter of "how many souls do I have", I have thousands upon thousands but for the sake of this rp I will dump them in my personal realm while only having 100 within me. These souls cannot be taken from me and they stand as lives=100 lives. This leads to Soul Drainage and Divine Judgment/Condemned and Soul Controlling Wires not working inside the realm of hell.

Changed: *Divine Judgment/Condemned- By putting one hand over your forehead and looking into your eyes, his gaze piercing through your fleshy self and into the depths of your soul, he can confirm the darkness/light in you. Even the slightest stain of corruption present in your soul will make you unworthy of existence in his eyes leading to damnation in his realm.*

Changed: Dagger part: *indestructible-If the dagger is broken it means that his god doesn't support him anymore*

Added: *Double Edged Condemner-59(149.86cm) inches long katana that can cut through any material or soul. If it is destroyed Talændrel loses half his current souls that are in his body. When sheathed it is indestructible, cannot be unsheathed by anyone except the owner(Talændrel) himself.

Added Condemned=leading to damnation in his realm. Both don't work in the realms of hell as I earlier mentioned but just added it as a bonus.

@The Grey Dust Also added **Forsaken Humanity: All the souls that Talændrel has in his body serve as fuel for his powers and life points hence they are consumed when receiving any-to-be-fatal damage or using an ability or the Double Edged Condemner.

For balance and while using certain abilities like knifes infused with souls or soul wires to shred souls they don't necessarily consume a soul per use if any at all. And my sword consumes 10 souls per strike.

Definitely weird. Soul-eating character seems to be a thing. I'm not sure how "useful" this one may be when battling the armies of hell.

I won't try* to collect any souls in hell as the only reason I do this is to rid the world of corruption(and power myself up) BUT you can consider me and my personal realm as a separate kind of hell. None can influence each other in relation to soul dealings. As a matter of "how many souls do I have", I have thousands upon thousands but for the sake of this rp I will dump them in my personal realm while only having 100 within me. These souls cannot be taken from me and they stand as lives=100 lives. This leads to Soul Drainage and Divine Judgment/Condemned and Soul Controlling Wires not working inside the realm of hell.

Changed: *Divine Judgment/Condemned- By putting one hand over your forehead and looking into your eyes, his gaze piercing through your fleshy self and into the depths of your soul, he can confirm the darkness/light in you. Even the slightest stain of corruption present in your soul will make you unworthy of existence in his eyes leading to damnation in his realm.*

Changed: Dagger part: *indestructible-If the dagger is broken it means that his god doesn't support him anymore*

Added: *Double Edged Condemner-59(149.86cm) inches long katana that can cut through any material or soul. If it is destroyed Talændrel loses half his current souls that are in his body. When sheathed it is indestructible, cannot be unsheathed by anyone except the owner(Talændrel) himself.

Added Condemned=leading to damnation in his realm. Both don't work in the realms of hell as I earlier mentioned but just added it as a bonus.

@The Grey Dust Also added **Forsaken Humanity: All the souls that Talændrel has in his body serve as fuel for his powers and life points hence they are consumed when receiving any-to-be-fatal damage or using an ability or the Double Edged Condemner.

For balance and while using certain abilities like knifes infused with souls or soul wires to shred souls they don't necessarily consume a soul per use if any at all. And my sword consumes 10 souls per strike.

Acceptable.


Any thoughts on this? Anyone? @Wraithblade6@Bishop@natsucooldude@tyki@weird tales?

I mean we already do have a soul collector and the abilities of both champions seems similar. There is already a force of Psychopomp without the use of the gods, although mortals don't know about it, so they attribute it to the God. That being said does anyone have any objections to this character?

@The Grey Dust
Well let's see... My main complaint would be that this character is utterly redundant with an already existing and accepted character in this rp... both in powers and in seemingly intended tone of. Pardon my blunt way of putting it... nihilistic edgelord.

@The Grey Dust Total rip off from the Reaper. Like wtf, can't people be at least original on appearance? If you're getting him in the rp you can make him part of hell, with that description he fits right in as the real Reaper. If not then at least he should change his soul powers to something else ,since it would be completely dull for 2 characters using the same powers, or I might have to power my character a "tad".

@The Grey Dust I don't see anything wrong with it.

@Bishop I see your character has a weapon that seems rather OP. A weapon that can cut through any material and soul, sorry but that is going overboard.

@Weird Tales yeah and you forgot to mention the most crucial details like for example that I lose half of my souls from that weapon being destroyed and that it consumes 10 souls per successful strike.

And about your character:"basically nothing can be immune to death with his magically powered weapons" yeah and that doesn't count op at all. get out of here

@Weird Tales yeah and you forgot to mention the most crucial details like for example that I lose half of my souls from that weapon being destroyed and that it consumes 10 souls per successful strike.

And about your character:"basically nothing can be immune to death with his magically powered weapons" yeah and that doesn't count op at all. get out of here

Uxzan's power basically overrides healing factors and immortality, but that doesn't equal his weapons can pierce through anything or they can't be destroyed. Also the weakness of your character's blade doesn't really mean too much if it can cut through anything.

It's not a my wand is bigger competition. Let's keep it civil. We are using DOTA logic here where everything is so unbalanced, everyone is balanced in being unbalanced. Ergo tis fine.

Also I shall have the introductory IC post tonight, hopefully, unless we want to have a group larger than 5/6.

@Wyverntamer Seeing how at least people have voiced opinions against your character due to some duplicity, and since I did have reservations about allowing another soul-wielding character, is it possible for you to go through thru same process as we did with Wraith to modify the character to be more acceptable by the group?

It's not a my wand is bigger competition. Let's keep it civil. We are using DOTA logic here where everything is so unbalanced, everyone is balanced in being unbalanced. Ergo tis fine.

I'm just pointing out the fact the weapon is like a soul taking sword and lightsaber combined into one.

@Weird Tales Why do you keep ignoring the fact that I can only use it 9 times totally with the current number of souls I have in the rp without dying? It's not like I'm gonna spam it throughout the rp slashing everything as I please.

@The Grey Dust And that dagger that I have has a secret that may come to use during the end of the rp.(Nothing like overpowering me or giving me a one shot kill)

@Weird Tales Why do you keep ignoring the fact that I can only use it 9 times totally with the current number of souls I have in the rp without dying? It's not like I'm gonna spam it throughout the rp slashing everything as I please.

it seemed you worded it like it could take ten souls per strike as in you can kill ten things in one successful strike, not it can have a maximum of ten strikes.

I am fine with creating another character, I need to dump my ideas somewhere, no? (Also, all those who voiced complains about him being a ripoff of the Grim Reaper, he is inspired by another character of mine who once met the GR, Great Righteous, and was killing for him)

@Wyverntamer

Excellent then, what sort of character did you have in mind?

We have currently on our roster the following:

1 Horseman w/ shiny steed
1 Paladin w/ tank bubbles
1 Mage w/ destruction magicks
1 Ranger w/ animal friend
1 Rogue w/ sharp things

Note our lack of definitely Cleric/healer type or something other than fighting.

I may have to provide a group healer.

I am fine with creating another character, I need to dump my ideas somewhere, no? (Also, all those who voiced complains about him being a ripoff of the Grim Reaper, he is inspired by another character of mine who once met the GR, Great Righteous, and was killing for him)

my friend, we critisized you because there's already a character in this rp that's basically your character concept hook line and sinker.

@The Grey Dust Just saying that I have improvised with my weapons and have/will use them in different means, just saying in advance. Nothing like a change in their properties/powers. But didn't want to write a book on my powers/weapons called "101 ways to use your powers".

@The Grey Dust I edited the app, it is an entirely new guy, so don't go read it expecting Gerard.