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I see. That's fine. Just drop in and tell me you're still alive every now and then ;)
Halvtand never tells me anything so you have to let me know that you're here


How about I PM you the same stuff and work with you as well to make you feel more wanted? :p
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I'm here. Just having trouble coming up with a low level fire jutsu.
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I'm here. Just having trouble coming up with a low level fire jutsu.


A regular fireball perhaps instead a great fireball? Sicne God forbid they have a standard fire jutsu in this universe...
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A regular fireball perhaps instead a great fireball? Sicne God forbid they have a standard fire jutsu in this universe...


That sounds like it would work. I mainly just want something that could build into the Fire Snake Jutsu I have for him. Like he builds onto it too make it better and stronger.
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That sounds like it would work. I mainly just want something that could build into the Fire Snake Jutsu I have for him. Like he builds onto it too make it better and stronger.


A simple Fireball Technique would work. And might I suggest you add in Katon: Housenka no Jutsu ("Phoenix Fire Technique", I think the English name is), to get the whole controlling-with-chakra aspect of things into it. It's C-rank, so it's plausible that your character would have learned this.

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So...

Has anyone started thinking about their character's Special Place, yet? You all saw it in the OP and now it's time to start talking about it!

I've made Sawaru's Special Place. What's yours?

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So...

Has anyone started thinking about their character's Special Place, yet? You all saw it in the OP and now it's time to start talking about it!

I've made Sawaru's Special Place. What's yours?


Would it be in poor taste for Aro's to be a freezer?

Jokes aside, some sort of hotsprings would probably be Aro's favorite. I'll focus on finishing his backstory before that, though.
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Would it be in poor taste for Aro's to be a freezer?


Perhaps a little bit.

Jokes aside, some sort of hotsprings would probably be Aro's favorite. I'll focus on finishing his backstory before that, though.


Hot Springs make sense, so that's a good idea. Which reminds me; is he self-conscious about his scars? Or proud of them, perhaps? He has both battle scars and frostbite scars; do these have different meanings to him? I was thinking about it the other day, but never got around to asking the question.
I was also thinking about whether he was self-conscious about the fact that he's from another time and all that and feels like he's weird and shit stuff because of it, or if he's simply accepted that that's the way it is and so on?
So basically, I'm wondering how he feels about his situation and the effects thereof, 'cause I didn't really get that from his sheet and I'm a really curious person of nature.
How's it going with his backstory and stuff? He about ready? I'm waiting impatiently to see the finished result. It's exciting. Like Christmas Eve.

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Actually, if everyone (myself included) could go a little bit in depth about how their characters feel, I'd be a happy camper. Like, it's fine that we're told about what our characters can do and what they've experienced, but it's just as important to know how they feel about it.
Like, I didn't even write how my character feels that Gobi is as stifling as the many rules of her nomad clan, just that she feels that way. I need to remedy that.

Since this is such a character-based roleplay where that sense of just not being good enough is mighty important, these feels really should be more pronounced ... to me, at least.
Am I wrong?
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Perhaps a little bit.

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Hot Springs make sense, so that's a good idea. Which reminds me; is he self-conscious about his scars? Or proud of them, perhaps? He has both battle scars and frostbite scars; do these have different meanings to him? I was thinking about it the other day, but never got around to asking the question.
I was also thinking about whether he was self-conscious about the fact that he's from another time and all that and feels like he's weird and shit stuff because of it, or if he's simply accepted that that's the way it is and so on?
So basically, I'm wondering how he feels about his situation and the effects thereof, 'cause I didn't really get that from his sheet and I'm a really curious person of nature.
How's it going with his backstory and stuff? He about ready? I'm waiting impatiently to see the finished result. It's exciting. Like Christmas Eve.


I think he'd be a little self-conscious about them, probably not so much by the scars themselves, he's had a few years to get over it, and I assume that what few medical ninjas and psychiatrists the village has would have helped him overcome the majority of the trauma about what happened to him. The getting turned into a popsicle part, not so much the whole raised in a time of great turmoil, so he's still got plenty of interesting, juicy lil issues left to poke at! But, I think that he's probably very concious about showing off his scars, while he's not a particularly violent, or even thought of as a dangerous person, his scars shows such raw displays of violence, weather they're from a cut, a bruise, getting burnt or indeed his frostbites. So, I don't reckon he'd be one to throw off his shirt and jump into a pool full of people, maybe only because he wouldn't wanna frighten those around him.

Though, I reckon he does have a couple scars, maybe some that look a little less 'violent' that he shows off with stories of 'grandure' (Aka, him lying through his teeth.) To spread around the campfire to amuse his fellow shinobi.

And that is really what I find interesting about Aro. That he is very sad about where he is, on one hand but on the other hand, it's a better time. It's a safer time. He's finally safe, he never had that before, he misses his family and his comrades, he wishes he had been there to see Konoha bloom, and in fact the entire shinobi world become what it is today, and he probably would have liked to have had his hand in it.
But he appreciates the 'second chance' as it where, and that's where he anchors himself to Gobi, in it being a different life. That the Aroshima who got frozen in that cave is not the Aroshima of Gobi.

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Actually, if everyone (myself included) could go a little bit in depth about how their characters feel, I'd be a happy camper. Like, it's fine that we're told about what our characters can do and what they've experienced, but it's just as important to know how they feel about it.
Like, I didn't even write how my character feels that Gobi is as stifling as the many rules of her nomad clan, just that she feels that way. I need to remedy that.

Since this is such a character-based roleplay where that sense of just not being good enough is mighty important, these feels really should be more pronounced ... to me, at least.
Am I wrong?


While the idea is sound, I personally don't think one should over explain their character before the In Character even begins. Save some of the details till you can show them off with your character writing. I despise Personality sections for this very reason, as it's a lot different to say that someone is a certain way than it is to write someone a certain way.

I've been pretty busy over the holiday, and currently recovering from family activities, and the traditional binge drinking.
(I swear, we don't have a problem! Long standing Swedish tradition, promise!) But, I'll get around to finishing Aro probably by Wednesday.

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Actually, if everyone (myself included) could go a little bit in depth about how their characters feel, I'd be a happy camper. Like, it's fine that we're told about what our characters can do and what they've experienced, but it's just as important to know how they feel about it.
Like, I didn't even write how my character feels that Gobi is as stifling as the many rules of her nomad clan, just that she feels that way. I need to remedy that.

Since this is such a character-based roleplay where that sense of just not being good enough is mighty important, these feels really should be more pronounced ... to me, at least.


This is a very good post. I've added info to my own sheet under "today" and added some traits to give the character more depth. If you OK it, I'll move it to the char-tab.

While the idea is sound, I personally don't think one should over explain their character before the In Character even begins. Save some of the details till you can show them off with your character writing. I despise Personality sections for this very reason, as it's a lot different to say that someone is a certain way than it is to write someone a certain way.


While I agree that the character really develops their personality in-game we still want to have some idea of each persons own agenda for wanting to leave the village, and how much that would mean to the individual.

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While I agree that the character really develops their personality in-game we still want to have some idea of each persons own agenda for wanting to leave the village, and how much that would mean to the individual.


Okay honestly (I know I hardly poke my head in here and I stay in PM until I have my character up but I'll make an exception here) I see where you want to know about characters ahead of time, but I think another way to put it Hillan's way is that we should give a general sense of the character, but we shouldn't try and define them and let everyone see (Including ourselves) just how our characters define themselves.
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While the idea is sound, I personally don't think one should over explain their character before the In Character even begins. Save some of the details till you can show them off with your character writing. I despise Personality sections for this very reason, as it's a lot different to say that someone is a certain way than it is to write someone a certain way.


Okay honestly (I know I hardly poke my head in here and I stay in PM until I have my character up but I'll make an exception here) I see where you want to know about characters ahead of time, but I think another way to put it Hillan's way is that we should give a general sense of the character, but we shouldn't try and define them and let everyone see (Including ourselves) just how our characters define themselves.


While I agree with the both of you that one should not over-explain their character and/or clearly define their personalities (I despise Personality sections as well), I do think that it is quite necessary to write something about how your character feels, because it's such a huge part of the roleplay. I/We don't need to know how they feel about everything; we just need to know how they feel about Gobi and their whole situation there.
It's all fine and dandy that you want to get that out during IC posts and I encourage if not demand a lot of character emotion from people in a character-centric game like this, especially in the Advanced section, but these are things that could change the tide on whether we find your characters acceptable, as the reasons may not be plausible to us - like leaving everything you've ever known behind just because you're curious as to what's on the other side of the cliffs, without serious mental struggle about it.

I hope I'm making myself understandable, because I'm honestly tired enough to sleep for days right now and my brain doesn't really function properly when I'm tired. I also can't English properly, so sorry for any spelling/grammar mistakes in there.
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While I agree with the both of you that one should not over-explain their character and/or clearly define their personalities (I despise Personality sections as well), I do think that it is quite necessary to write something about how your character feels, because it's such a huge part of the roleplay. I/We don't need to know how they feel about everything; we just need to know how they feel about Gobi and their whole situation there.
It's all fine and dandy that you want to get that out during IC posts and I encourage if not demand a lot of character emotion from people in a character-centric game like this, especially in the Advanced section, but these are things that could change the tide on whether we find your characters acceptable, as the reasons may not be plausible to us - like leaving everything you've ever known behind just because you're curious as to what's on the other side of the cliffs, without serious mental struggle about it.

I hope I'm making myself understandable, because I'm honestly tired enough to sleep for days right now and my brain doesn't really function properly when I'm tired. I also can't English properly, so sorry for any spelling/grammar mistakes in there.


Fair enough, I suppose.

Is there a higher calling, is their Jounin calling on them to traverse the outside world? Else, I will have to think of a new reason for Aro to leave the newly learned safety of Gobi that he's come to know.
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@Hillan Not that their jounin would do such a thing.


But yeah. Higher calling, sense of adventure, tired of sitting on their arses (not much work for ninjas in such a small village), heard a legend about some guy they want to meet, found a spider in the bathroom. You know, normal stuff.
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You know how I said I'd edit my sheet till Wednesday? I lied.

ETA on the IC, btw, because I sort of have the busiest week of the entire year right now, haha.

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Well on another update just to let people know I haven't died and ditched you all. Today I have officially started the sheet and have made small progress. Once I get the room to myself tomorrow I shall begin the process of all of the larger amounts of details, but I have the majority of the minor details out of the way!
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@Hillan As it stands right now we have two accepted characters and five in various stages of completeness that has to be fixed and approved. Unless people really get their thumbs out of whatever hole is best suited to keep such appendages right this instant I doubt we'll go live for at least a couple of days. Even if we should kick this thing to life before your week of hell is over I think we'll survive if you can't post the first hour :P

@Ciphra Great to see you in the thread. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with.
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All right. The weekend is back and I have time to do shit again. Expect my sheet finished by this time tomorrow ('cause I'm being a lazy bum tonight).

@Halvtand
I will look at your sheet when I feel like it. It's likely be sometime tonight or early morning tomorrow.
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I think I updated my Backstory accordingly to the things we talked about. His motivations for leaving the village will be expanded upon in the IC.
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I'll have a look at it when I review Halvtand's sheet in an hour or so.
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