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@Halvtand
You're good. Go ahead and move him to the Character Tab.

@Hillan
The only thing I can tell that you've changed, is the fact that your character now has a girlfriend ..?
It might just be me missing things, so please do tell me what else you changed.

Also, the chances of bandits coming anywhere near even the outskirts of Gobi seems very implausible. They would have had to either take the tunnel or climb the cliffs and valleys that make up the "wall" around the village. Since no one really knows that the village is even there, they would have no reason to go through the trouble of climbing cliffs and/or valleys and if they would have taken the tunnel, they would have "come out" in the middle of the village and would have had to get past the "guard" at the "gate", who would likely have alerted the entire village.
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The only thing I can tell that you've changed, is the fact that your character now has a girlfriend ..?
It might just be me missing things, so please do tell me what else you changed.

Also, the chances of bandits coming anywhere near even the outskirts of Gobi seems very implausible. They would have had to either take the tunnel or climb the cliffs and valleys that make up the "wall" around the village. Since no one really knows that the village is even there, they would have no reason to go through the trouble of climbing cliffs and/or valleys and if they would have taken the tunnel, they would have "come out" in the middle of the village and would have had to get past the "guard" at the "gate", who would likely have alerted the entire village.


I changed the years he lived in the village - now closer to half a decade than the year and a half he had previously. I rewrote quite a bit of his backstory, plus I further anchored him in the village, both with a girlfriend and prolonging his time he's spent in the village.

Fair enough. Anyway he'd be able to work outside of the tunnel? The village has outside trade, right? So there'd definitely be work for him as a carpenter / construction worker to do, and bandits assaulting traders or something like that outside of the village would be plausible, no?
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@Hillan
Well... I can't really see anything wrong with him, then. Please adjust your Techniques/Jutsu so that they fit our format so I can accept him and you can go ahead and move him to the Character tab
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@Hillan
Well... I can't really see anything wrong with him, then. Please adjust your Techniques/Jutsu so that they fit our format so I can accept him and you can go ahead and move him to the Character tab


Wait, there's something about the format of my techniques that doesn't fit?

WHEN DID I MISS THIS

SO CONFUSED

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@Halvtand@The Mad Hatter So I'd like to join this RP as well, and already have a good portion of a CS done, just need to work out jutsu is all. That is, if I can join.




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@Hillan
It's right there in the Character Sheet. You even already used it for your Custom Technique. You could just look at all the other sheets and see that every technique is fitted to that format there ;)
So, you just need to fit your other techniques to that format. You may still leave the title as a link to the Wiki, to help yourself and others further out with finding out about the techniques.

@Raijinslayer
I think we still have room, but I'm not sure if Halvtand wanted it closed. Until he says otherwise, assume that we still have room and keep working on your sheet.
I can't judge your sheet alone; Halvtand and I do that together in our Skype Conversation of Doom, so you'll have to wait till he gets time and bothers to reply to me before you can get a full review. But, I can give you a few pointers; you may wanna give it a spell- and grammar check. There's a bit to much there/their/they're confusion in there for my comfort and a lot of (what I must assume is) typing mistakes.
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@The Mad HatterYeah, a bit of it had to be written on my phone, so that's probably why.
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@Hillan
It's right there in the Character Sheet. You even already used it for your Custom Technique. You could just look at all the other sheets and see that every technique is fitted to that format there ;)
So, you just need to fit your other techniques to that format. You may still leave the title as a link to the Wiki, to help yourself and others further out with finding out about the techniques.


Oh, we have to do that to canon techs too? Fair enough!
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@Hillan
Yeah. I guess we should have been more clear on that. Excpet you were the only one who didn't get it I only tease because you're Swedish and I do so with good intentions.
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Yeah. I guess we should have been more clear on that. Excpet you were the only one who didn't get it I only tease because you're Swedish and I do so with good intentions.


I'm stuck to ways of all the other Naruto RP's I've taken part in over the years. :B

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@Hillan
Well, you better get used to doing things differently

Both Halvtand and I've been in a lot of Naruto RPs and we strive to make every one of ours an experience to remember ;)

Actually, I started PbP/Forum RPing when I was 12, which is actually (curiously enough) 12 years ago. I joined a total of three RPs before I GMed my own, which was my very first Naruto RP and the birth of another character of mine that I still use more or less every chance I get; (Hagane) Haruka.

Since then, I've been in more RPs than I'd every even want to count, made about half as many characters (I believe in recycling) and about a quarter of the RPs were Naruto.
So I know what it's like to be a vet. xD

Of course, since I started RPing, I've done a lot with my life, so even the old characters I have from back then has grown with me and if I put the old sheet up next to a new one, the only things that would stay the same are the name and appearance (and perhaps a few details about his/her background that would have stayed with me from a previous RP).
One of the (to me) interesting details of a "past life" that Haruka has lived, which has stuck with her, is the fact that her Genin team is actually the team she had in the original RP I made her for. I usually play her as a Chuunin/Tokubetsu Jounin (Special Jounin) now, so I had to "make up" a team for her to have had before she became one. One of the characters that were her teammatess in the original game actually died In-Game and the other actually did end up quitting being a ninja, so they just fit perfectly for her now having a team anymore. 12 years later, none of their players RP anymore, but their characters live on through Haruka.

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I rant.
A lot.
My sincerest apologies.
The (one) Mad (as a) Hatter.
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@The Mad Hatter

I've been RPing since I was 14, going on my 7th year now. And while I've mostly kept in the Superhero genre, I've dabbled in most others. Most notably a year and a half consecutive playing in a Naruto RP that used to be one of the biggest on Guild before the servers crashed in 2013. I've had quite a lot of characters that could fit the setting. But, one from the superhero setting is someone I've played since 2011, while still keeping his core superhero team.

As I happen to not really be a fan of recycling ideas. Improving upon them, sure, but not really recycling them, haha.

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Fair enough. Anyway he'd be able to work outside of the tunnel? The village has outside trade, right? So there'd definitely be work for him as a carpenter / construction worker to do, and bandits assaulting traders or something like that outside of the village would be plausible, no?


Indeed. As a carpenter you would regularly have to leave the village and go out into the forest to find the trees you want to use for materials. The hard work would be done by woodcutters, but that would get your character "out there".

@Raijinslayer
Will have a look and a discussion with the hat about this.

Oh, we have to do that to canon techs too? Fair enough!


Yes, in this case it is mostly for convenience. Having all the relevant info in one place makes it so much easier for everyone. I don't know about you, but I regularly browse and update the guild from my phone, and having to switch tabs on one of those is a nuisance at best. It also means that with techniques that are OC (original creations) or long-as-fuck-on-the-wiki we get to know what kind of info you as a player think is more important.

On a different note. It's Monday! (Yes, I know I forgot about last week)
The topic of this weeks discussion is senjutsu.
Should this be a forbidden art, or not?

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@HalvtandI say for now, since it's not something anyone is close to really achieving, but maybe in the future someone could possibly earn it. This really depends on how powerful our characters are allowed to get.
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@Raijinslayer Great input, but I'm talking about the more general term of forbidden techniques from the show. The point is that every Monday (as long as I remember) I try to give the thread something to discuss for the week ahead. That way the people who have finished their characters have something to do, and the people who are still working on theirs can do something else for a while and still be investing time in the game. Also it gives us a better sense of what everyone thinks about stuff in the world and stuff...
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Go crazy with the Senjutsu! I honestly think it's fine - at the same time, I think Space Time Jutsu and other such usually taboo techniques is perfectly fine, too. It just has to be utilized by someone who's at a level where it makes sense to know them.
If we had a character with a huge chakra pool and the shadow clone technique (Which, I think is teh most powerful jutsu in all of Naruto) they should be able to pick up advanced techniques much easier than everyone else, like Naruto did.

Though, Senjutsu itself isn't just something you figure out, you'd have to get taught from masters and the animals themselves, if I don't remember incorrectly.
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@HalvtandAh, in the terms of the show, I believe it fits the bill. While using it isn't likely to kill the user, like the kage bunshin and mass kage bunshin, learning it is highly difficult and has major repercussions if the individual fails. As such, I think labeling it a kinjutsu seems rather fair.
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@The Mad HatterYeah, I'll give a more complete response to anyone of these things later if you require it, but at the moment I'll address a few things. In regards to the skills, this was a state of me thinking more than I was writing. His blacksmithing is best in the village because I made the assumption that the blacksmiting in town would be below average, and I was incorporating some anime logic with the blacksmithing thing, so I'm fine with that changing so that he just has more of a knack for it than most.

I think I saw that explained in the show somewhere that those who come from ninja families are more likely to have larger chakra reserves than those who come from a civilian background. Could be wrong, but it makes sense to me that, if your family have been using chakra for generations, it would gain a certain affinity towards it.

Ken juts just means he knows how to use a sword, no real techniques to it, though to offset it, I'm fine with making his taijutsu bad and ninjutsu average( only thing that made it about be is that he just had more chakra to burn though, rather than being above average in his skill with it.)

As for the body thing, I've always been bad at describing body shapes. What I'm thinking of is that he's got an ectomorphic frame, but his work has made it so that he's gained some muscle.

Being born outside the village is just for story reasons, as their would be know reason for his mother to be in Gobi at the time she was to give birth to him. Kekkei Genkai possibility is partially because I wanted to talk to you guys about it first, and also because I wanted to have him discover it later in his life, similar to what was discussed earlier for the secondary natures. His life in the village has been mostly stress free and, since he was never told of the possibility of him having a Kekkei Genkai( his family heritages were kept secret from him with his mother changing her last name to Kajiya, which is more well- known in Kiri than other nations/villages). Gobi was chosen because it was isolated from the rest of the world.

I actually was wondering something about the natures: should he have learn to use both fire and earth in order to use Lava, or could I start him off with earth and have fire come to him when he discovers Lava, if he hasn't discovered fire already by that point.

Fuinjutsu is extremely basic, mostly a set-up for when he learns his family's style of engraving seals into their smithing, something I planned to happen later on when he meets his father, who would continue on where his master left off, hopefully.
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Okay so sorry I went AWOL for a few days there, I'll get back to work tomorrow!
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