Love the character, just a couple things though - mental manipulation typically is a power seen in demons, or dementors. If she is being experimented on with injections of dementor blood (too much would turn her full-fledged) then she could develop it as a result, but elves don't typically have it.
But there is a way around that. Elves are mages basically, so she could have been taught spells that resemble mental manipulation, or have inscriptions/artifacts that temporarily grant her that power. Don't worry, the spells and inscription aspect of the world is going to be uploaded to the OOC probably
before my morning time. sometime tomorrow. I had put off doing the informational aspect of the spells because I didn't actually have anything on it yet. But it is mentioned in the main introduction to the world and it would only be fitting to actual allow usage of it in the story- with appropriate knowledge of how the system actually works (so it isn't all over the place and random).
Oh and I'm okay with the teleportation so long as it has something to do with her lightning ability. (typically its a dementor skill) so again she could get it as a side effect of experimentation.
If she gets experimented on - not saying she has to.
And then I'll probably get the first actual IC post up.
@AristaCan't wait to see what you come up with for a character.