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ALL RIGHT, EVERYONE!
Today is the DAY!
We have reached the day of the DEADLINE!

We're looking forwards to seeing all of the finished sheets and we promise to be swift and just with our reviews so we can get started as soon as possible! I know I'm excited about this and I sure hope ya'll are, too! I'll be real generous and say you have 24 hours from RIGHT NOW to post your finished sheets (unless, of course, your sheet is already completed and accepted). If no major alterations needs to be done, we're planning to get this up and rolling within the next week.

@Bishop@MMGiru@Hillan@Raijinslayer@Ciphra@alexfangtalon@Halvtand

@HalvtandOkay, also I'm fine with him not being a baby right around the time he arrives at the town. That is what I was thinking when I put 'all of his childhood', though I guess I should've put 'practically' in there to make it more clear.


That's fine. When the corrections have been made, feel free to add your character to the Character Tab and consider him accepted.
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Just to be clear. Thee are the approved characters so far (all done, or still working on details, or just adding for the fun of it).
Hisokana Sawaru by @The Mad Hatter
Shikawa Masakazu by @MMGiru
Chimotou Kai by @Halvtand
Ronin (Uchiha) Aroshima by @Hillan
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I did some changes to my CS. I was dissatisfied with my character's appearance, so I changed it quite drastically.



And I added the flower in her hair to Equipment

  • Eiusmodi suavitatis
    The name of the flower in her hair. It is a beautiful flower with a delicious fragrance that has a calming effect.
The Mad Hatter


I also added her Secret Place "Sawaru's Tranquil Canopy" under her sheet for easy access to it.

Some minor adjustments have been made to the sheet during the week, but nothing that should cost her acceptance.

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By the way, everyone! If you want your characters to know any of the other characters, it might be a good idea to establish some character relationships.
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Well, this is exciting.

I had a few ideas for 'secret places' of Masakazu, but I've been pretty dry of creativity lately. Apologies.
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Well, this is exciting.


IKR? I'm just about bouncing about. I already wrote the IC OP and I'm really just waiting for people to finish/post their characters so we can get this started



I had a few ideas for 'secret places' of Masakazu, but I've been pretty dry of creativity lately. Apologies.


Yeah, that's fine. There's no rush with that. I think I'm the only one who actually made one and Halvtand couldn't even bother to put in the OP where it belongs, 'cause he's a lazy bum.
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I've been busy with school but I have time now. Will one of the Gms be on so I can pm them my on before posting?
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@godlyinfluence
I'm on. I'm almost always on, but not always able to actually post. I have time now, though, and for the next few hours.
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Aside from the fact that his Kenjutsu should be under the Taijutsu tab, I think he's ready. Wait for Halvtand's verdict before moving him to the character tab.
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@Raijinslayer Sorry I'm late, I approve the changes made. You can move the guy to the char-tab.
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I have made the changes that @The Mad Hatter told me to make. I pmed the oc to you both. (Gms)
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'Accept' me into this RP please, I should have a character up in a flash if you do
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You gotta be real quick, then! We had our deadline for character creation already! But if you whip one up in a flash and have it posted here by the time I go to bed tonight, I guess we can allow it ^_^
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[hider=my character]

Name: Hyuuga Maruki
Nickname/Alias: N/A
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 14 - june 17th
Age Appearance: 15
Sexuality: Straight

Parents:Dead... xD
Length and build about 5'1, athletic build
Weight 60 kg
Favorite weather and season a warm, sunny spring day

Village: Konoha
Birthplace: Konoha
OrganizationKonohagakure Military forces.

Clan/Bloodline: Hyuuga

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature: Suiton

Appearance: [img src="img01.deviantart.net/b600/i/2011/177/6.." style="max-width:100%;" alt=""]

Personality: Maruki is a dedicated Shinobi always trying to improve himself. Although he never really had much contact with other people, you don’t recognize this of his actions. He is friendly and kind to almost everyone and does not see evil in any action unless quite obvious.

History:Maruki was born in the last few years of the first Shinobi WO. In fear of the war, his parents moved to a small cabin hidden in the woods of the land of fire, close to Konoha. As soon as he was able to stand on his own two feet his Parents teached him all he needed to know to live off the land. Teached him which plants were edible and which were not. They teached him how to swim. Before they left on what would be their last mission they teached Maruki how to mold his chakra, how to use his Byakugan and how to use the Gentle Fist Taijutsu technique. As well as the basics of some Eight Trigram Techniques.

And then they left. Maruki was ten years old at that time and was already quite skilled for his age, given all the personal training he received from his parents. He kept training with Jūken and the Byakugan. From time to time he met travellers while he was fishing in the river or finding some food. He learned a lot from them. One of those things were how to utilize the Byakugan and making his own jutsu’s based on stories he heard of examples of these jutsu’s which he tried to copy. He learned Eight Trigrams Sixteen Palms from his parents and heard there were also 64 or even 128 palm versions.

Another thing was that his parents were no longer alive. Maruki’s parents last mission was to aid in the war against Kirigakure, after some years of training together with a lot of other shinobi. The fight lasted long and although their byakugan was a useful asset in battle it was not enough to save their lives. Maruki reached the age of thirteen at that time.

Maruki knew his parents would be looking down at him from the high heavens and vowed to make them proud. For the next year Maruki dedicated all his time to his training and developed a technique similar to Hakkeshō Kaiten as well as some other techniques who looked more like the originals. At the age of fourteen he left the little cabin in the woods, hid it and left for Konoha to attend the Academy to become a full-fledged Shinobi. He was taking in by his uncle after proving that he Indeed was Hyūga Maruki. Now that he is done with his education at the Academy and passed with flying colors he will be placed in a team with other shinobi who passed with good grades.

Theme Song: heart of courage - two steps from hell

Weapons/Items ;

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Name of Weapon or Item:
Standard Shinobi tools.
Description:
Kunai, shuriken and the everyday tools of a shinobi. smoke bombs, exploding tags, etc.




Name of Weapon or Item;
Konoha earphone communicator

Description:
A convenient communicator that enables better communication in and between teams. The communicator is small and designed to not cause any irritation for the user. It has some channels, each for a specific group. The range/radius to which messages and communication can be held with the use of the communicators is about 2.5 km wide.

Channel A :
Is for the team, thus everything that is said in station A will only be transferred and heard by those within the team.

Channel B :
Is for every other team in the 2.5 km radius. It will enable and provide communication to Konoha teams and thus enables better teamwork for when two or more teams are in each other radius, which can lead that more missions will have a higher chance of success.

Channel C:
This is only available for Jounins and leaders of teams. The C station provides communication for leaders of teams, without thus the problem that can be caused if the students also talk through the communicator. It will mostly be used for leaders of teams to direct their teams better in a synchronized attack or movement etc.

Appearance :
[hider][img style="max-width:100%;" alt=" " src="brookstone.com/webassets/product_image.."][/hider]




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Skills/Abilities

* Is able to use as fighting style : [url=http://"naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Gentle_Fist"]Jûken[/url]
* Good Taijutsu skills
* Good Chakra control
* Fast, in moving.
* Can weave handseals a bit faster than average.

* Average strength and endurance.
* Average stamina.

Special Traits

*Average Chakra reserves.
* Very observant
* Good in analyzing

Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai:
[url=http://"naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Byakugan"]Byakugan[/url]
Clan: Hyuuga
Description:
The Byakugan (白眼; Literally meaning "White Eye", Meaning (Viz) "All Seeing White Eye") is the dōjutsu kekkei genkai of the Hyūga clan. It is one of the Three Great Dōjutsu (三大瞳術, San Daidōjutsu; Literally meaning "Three Great Eye Techniques"), along with the Sharingan and the Rinnegan.

Jutsu:


Custom Jutsu


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different coding... anyone be able to help me with that?
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@MarrowReplace Spoiler with Hider, and I think you should be good. Also, for links, use [url] [/ url](remove the space) instead of whatever you're using at the moment.
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Edited but still broken...
instead of whatever you're using at the moment.

its BBcode
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@Marrow


There. I exclusively fixed your broken code. I haven't actually really looked at your CS yet, but I should get the time to do so later today, in about 8-10 hours. I can tell you as much as the fact that you need to adjust your sheet into the skeleton we provided for you.
For future reference, there is a Formatting Cheatsheet below the "New Reply" box, at the bottom of the page.
Also, BBcode can be many things. This here on the site is BBcode, as well. It's just a different type of BBcode.

.:EDIT:.
Uhh... Actually, after skimming your sheet, I have one more thing to add: Read the OP again. Your character needs to be a Gobigakure no Sato (Village by the End) citizen.
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@Marrow


@MMGiru@Hillan@Raijinslayer@godlyinfluence
The IC will be up in a little while, either later today or tomorrow, depending heavily upon the hat's subnatural ability to pull thumbs out of bodily crevices.
To get us into the “action” a bit faster we've decided not to start the game on a normal day in Gobi. Instead, we'll start on the day we leave, or rather, about one full day before. In other words, our characters will have met talked about leaving before this time. Please think about what your character may have done so far to aid our escape.
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@MMGiru@Halvtand@Raijinslayer@godlyinfluence
IC is up, people! I would ahve gotten it up last night, but I got ... unexpectedly otherwise occupied. My apologies.

I just wanna stress the fact that even though I am technically Godmodding Halvtand's character (Kai), here, it's not something that you guys will be allowed to do, unless you have permission from the player of the character (which I have, by the way), but was done to make a more smooth start of the RP.

I don't, and never have, feel the need to make those grandiose IC OP's that some of you might be used to seeing in Advanced, so if you're unsatisfied with my writing, I can assure you that it gets better the more involved I get.
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