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@Section

You slowed nothing, RP's cannot be post-by-post rolling every hour of the day :)
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I'm over here still writing my form xd you can't be that slow!
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Angel Layne Ashton

25 years old, Female


When the disease first spread out, Angel was five years old. Her mom was one of the many people to become extremely sick. Angel did anything she could to help out . She nursed her,cleaned, and did anything else she could do at all means necessary. She didn't want to be alone, not when the world was such a hectic mess such as it was becoming. She was scared out of her wits. When a military man told her he could help her and her mom out, how could she refuse? It was too tempting. The thought of her mom being better, like she was before sickness had kicked in, won her over. She wanted life to be how it used to be before all of this. She spilled everything out to the men. She didn't bother holding back.
She went back home to her mom. Angel told her the news, and she responded to it the opposite than what Angel thought she would of. Angels mom shot herself in the head, her last words being,"You need to run, I am already dead. Remember this, people lie, people are mean, you can't trust anyone. I love you."
The military burst into the room. Angel tried to run but she was caught. The military took her back to the base and placed her into solitary confinement.
She spent three months there. The place was boring, but not the worst thing in the world. They let her out of confinement afterwards but there was something known whether or not Angel, herself realised it. That she wouldn't be able to survive on her own.
She ended up joining a gang. Stealing, tricking, leading people into their traps, anything she could do to help their survival. She left the gang ten years later, when she was 15. Ever since then, she has been making a lonely life on her own.

Personality:
There are many sides to Angel though none would be seen until you break the walls she has put up on herself. On the outside she may seem, stuck up, evil, or just some lame villain. She won't be necessarily mean, but instead be selfish, and quiet. Also a bit questioning and nosy. She is like this because she has a problem with trusting people. In other words, it is very hard for her. Despite whether or not she wants to or not, does not always mean she will let herself. But once one gets past this wall she puts up, they would see her sweet side. The side of her that begs to come out all of the time. When this side is revealed, she is very kiddish and playful. Her major weakness is kids. Also the fact she can't resist the urge to help someone no matter what they have done to her,or someone else is another major weakness. She can kill someone if she had too easily, but when it comes to someone lying on the ground helplessly, she can't just walk by them, despite what it may cost her. She also is one of those people who ball up all her feelings, till it all explodes out at one person. Saying this, she doesn't get super mad often, but when she does, it can be very violent and dangerous.

Description:
She has blonde hair and blue eyes. Two physical features she got from her mom's side. She is skinny and is short in height. She is about 5'1" feet tall. She doesn't tend to eat much and may pass out at times due to this. This habit was born when she was young because she couldn't find food all of the time. She also doesn't like to seem needy. She could be considered somewhat active by her body type. She tends to wear whatever clothes she can find, Along with it being something that she can actually move around in.
Possessions:
  • Duct tape
  • One pair of cloths
  • A canteen
  • Three cans of food

Equipment:

  • Backpack
  • A pocket knife
  • Bandages
  • Hand gun
  • 20 bullets
  • Duct tape
  • One pair of cloths
  • A canteen
  • Three cans of food


Notes:

  • For the most part she is illiterate. She can only read small kid books, though it's been so long that it may be hard for her to do that. Despite this, her English is decent in the aspect of speaking.
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Finally I'm done!!
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Should i post? *sigh* ugh... idk... should i wait for everyone to get their first post in? ugh... idk
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Should i post? *sigh* ugh... idk... should i wait for everyone to get their first post in? ugh... idk


I'd dare to say that you're good to post again. My word isn't the final decision though; that's up to Vermillion.
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@CourierSix And he aint on -_- ugh... idek what i would post...
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I was thinking of throwing my resolve to wait into the wind, maybe make a a post of Drei's travel to the Space Needle.
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As long as your post isn't after another of your own, Im happy for you to post if you feel you must.
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@Always

Some grammatical and spell checks, and while the narrative is a good short story - it would benefit others that your beginning story be short and concise, so that they can gauge your character easier.
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Prepare for a post.
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@Vermillion I'm ready. Feel free to move Drei around a bit for your post if you need to.
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No need ;)

IF you spot any mistakes in my post - do let me know!

Also, play the music when it comes up, and take your time reading. It may just work!
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@Vermillion Two things I noticed and wanted to point out. It isn't true in all circumstances, but in all of your quotations ending with periods, those periods should be commas since the sentence is continued. If your sentence ends at the quotation then a period is used. Second was just that you didn't use an apostrophe in "cars roar," second paragraph in Mike and Kees' part.
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@Vermillionbetter? (I edited it.))
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Okay so I know where Drei and Tyler are but i have no idea where anyone else is... tyler is so far away though XD
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Short post tonight because I'm in a rush. I'll buff it up later, probably tomorrow.
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@Treue

I'm unsure what you mean by periods and quotes?

I will edit all this when I get home.
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Okay so I know where Drei and Tyler are but i have no idea where anyone else is... tyler is so far away though XD


Indeed, though it takes only five hours to reach Seattle on bike from there. One post should be enough to reach Delridge ;)

@Vermillion Should I update my character CS with what I found in Eatonville?
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@Vermillion It's something a lot of people mess up on since it's a little detail. I'll give you some examples.

Correct:
"I want a blueberry muffin," Jack said.
Jack said, "I want a blueberry muffin."

Incorrect:
"I want a blueberry muffin." Jack said.
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