Okay, so I was doing a bit of quick writing to oil my rusty gears back into business by doing several random scenes in my head. Then I realised, what if other roleplayers were to write the same scene? How would they pack the punch?
This isn't a competitive thread, but rather, one to help us all learn and grow from others' strengths.
Before sending in a new scene, make sure to specify the most pivotal points in the scene itself. Any unspecified details will be choice of the author to modify. If it's a rewrite, tag/mention the last person who did that scene.
Keep all criticisms objective and constructive. Don't be a jackass by being crude and personal.
I'll post one first. Feel free to rewrite, or add a different scenario. (All genre welcome!!)
Point: It's raining, a guy gets home, and he's in for an unpleasant surprise.
This isn't a competitive thread, but rather, one to help us all learn and grow from others' strengths.
Before sending in a new scene, make sure to specify the most pivotal points in the scene itself. Any unspecified details will be choice of the author to modify. If it's a rewrite, tag/mention the last person who did that scene.
Keep all criticisms objective and constructive. Don't be a jackass by being crude and personal.
I'll post one first. Feel free to rewrite, or add a different scenario. (All genre welcome!!)
Point: It's raining, a guy gets home, and he's in for an unpleasant surprise.