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Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Rawk
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Awesome job @Skepic, I love this guy already. Nice story flow too.
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Danke, I'm frankly surprised I managed that much considering the hour. Glad to see I didn't shoot it full of spelling mistake holes. Anywho, off to bed for me.
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Despite Macks arrival, Lee continued to remain in his seat, despite Mack's arrival. - @LokiLeo789


I hate to be the picky one, but I found this quite amusing.
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I hate to be the picky one, but I found this quite amusing.


I've caught myself with similar mistakes when I'm double-checking my posts (English isn't my first language), but sometimes it slips through the cracks. Nonetheless, I found it amusing too.
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Shit is about to go down ya'll
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww shit

(psst, does that rifle have any details you'd like to share or should I just make something up?)
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@Dynamo FrokaneWell...Someone had to get shot, and Greg's probably the unlikable and unwated part of the team so...He seemed like the best candidate.

Also, I've been planning loads of short stories in my own time revolving around Greg and the War, such as the one hinted in the post. If you want any for references or conversation topics to discover the inner terror he has, I'll be glad to provide ; D
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Well that was unexpected.

But awesome. Time for a good old fashioned shoot out.
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Please let me know if I need to edit my post in any way.
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Holy crap this is moving fast. Guess I'd better start writing if I have any hope of keeping up
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Holy crap this is moving fast. Guess I'd better start writing if I have any hope of keeping up


I had the same thought. I was actually about to go to bed and on a whim checked one more time. Figured if I didn't post now the fight would be over by the time I got around to it.
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Sadly. I won't be able to post till tomorrow. And I fear the fight will be over by then.
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Phew, that was a big one. But now I'm caught up and in the action.
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@Penultimate_Piits a high power, bolt action long shot, It can tear a man (or a synthetic) in half, any other specfics are up to you :)
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Sadly. I won't be able to post till tomorrow. And I fear the fight will be over by then.


no it wont, youll be fine, everyone still has to post.
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hey i think in your post said we were down to 6 but even with Craig Shot all other 8 members are still in the room

Mack,Lee,Val,Krauss,Greg,Lily,Colin,Jaime and Craig was the 9th man but is bleeding out.
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The fight is moving fast but everything is still enough to keep up, there are 12 synthetic bots outside and Hornet (Archie Smith), you're all in for one hell of a fight that wont be over quickly.
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hey i think in your post said we were down to 6 but even with Craig Shot all other 8 members are still in the room

Mack,Lee,Val,Krauss,Greg,Lily,Colin,Jaime and Craig was the 9th man but is bleeding out.


I meant people who are able to fight, sorry should've specified. Craig is out for obvious reasons and Mack has to stay by his side.
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@Rawk thanks man! But you put that in the IC xD
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@Rawk thanks man! But you put that in the IC xD


Shit, sorry it's early here and I thought I was under the correct tab >.>

Anyway, here's the OP in the right spot!

Sprinting, Hornet fired at Tim, who collapsed to the floor, spasming from the electricity. Catching his body as he fell, Hornet dragged the target alleyway and binded him with plastic ties.


See Tim?...cigarettes really are hazardous to your health. Should've stayed inside bro! ;)

Nicely inserted antagonist. Archie looks like a he'll be a huge pain in the ass :)
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