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@NevixThat's fine. No CSs will be accepted nor denied before the OOC goes up. There's no rush.
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@Nevix
A damn good writing sample, imo.
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@Nevix
A damn good writing sample, imo.


Yours was pretty stellar as well, I wish only that there was more of it. I lack your skill in action sequences.
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I look forward to this ooc.
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Yours was pretty stellar as well, I wish only that there was more of it. I lack your skill in action sequences.


'Twas the first thing that came to mind, so I wrote it down as if it were actually happening.
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I love well written action. Desperation and/or focus during conflicts bring out the best and worst of characters.

Edit: What do you think of genetically modified intelligence in a character or improved healing?
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I'm pretty interested. I'd have to know more about the general storyline before nailing down specific character history. I haven't written or RP'd in almost two years, since joining the Navy. I might be a little rusty, but this ain't my first rodeo.
It's probably pretty obvious I'm new here, and as such I'm not really in the know with how to go about applying for these things. If I'm missing something, tell me.

Applying for second in command.

Name: Andrew Koehler

Rank: SO1(SEAL/EXW) [Special Warfare Operator, First Class (SEAL/Expeditionary Warfare)]

Physical attributes: 71 inches tall. 187 pounds. Caucasian. His hair and eyes are both brown. Wiry, but not hugely muscular - an endurance athlete.

Augmentations: Koehler has an integrated Heads Up Display implanted in his dominant eye, typical of UPLN special operators.

Psych Profile: Described by his peers as a model soldier, Koehler knows how to have fun on liberty but still maintains discipline on the battlefield. His service record lacks disciplinary hearings or drug related incidents. However, UPLN Medical has concerns that he may exhibit some sociopathic tendencies. Findings are preliminary, and not confirmed. Investigate further.

History: Born on Earth's wealthy North American continent, Koehler wanted for little in his youth. However, as time went on, that very lack of need drove him to seek out his own struggle - and beating up high school bullies wasn't doing it for him.

He enlisted with the United Planets League (UPL) Navy a few months after graduating high school, passing through Basic Training at Camp Stevens on Luna. Recruit Division Commanders described him as focused and driven, a model recruit. From there, he went on to BUD/S training on Ceres.

After completing training, ranking third in his graduating class of forty-seven, Koehler went on to [REDACTED].

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I love well written action. Desperation and/or focus during conflicts bring out the best and worst of characters.

Edit: What do you think of genetically modified intelligence in a character or improved healing?

I'd assume most military characters would have some sort of augmentations. This is the future after all. Just be tasteful. If you wander into OP territory (E.G. you can get your arm chopped off and regrow it in second... or just regrow it period) then I'd probably reject said character.

I'm pretty interested. I'd have to know more about the general storyline before nailing down specific character history. I haven't written or RP'd in almost two years, since joining the Navy. I might be a little rusty, but this ain't my first rodeo.
It's probably pretty obvious I'm new here, and as such I'm not really in the know with how to go about applying for these things. If I'm missing something, tell me.

Seamen >_>

It's alright. I wont hold it against you. Much...

The general story line is that our little group is trying to hunt down a mass murderer in a giant space tin can and not die in the process. There's not much else I can say in that department without giving things away.

As for applying, just follow the guidelines. As it stands (I've said it before but it bears repeating) I'm neither accepting nor denying characters before the OOC goes up. (Tomorrow. I wasn't as productive today. My chores took me twice as long because I'm still not 100%.) But if you follow the guidelines you'll be on the same playing field as everyone else. Which it appears you did. So yeah. +1
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Sounds good. I look forward to seeing this OOC, whatever that is. And don't worry, I'm sure I have more problems with the Navy than you do. :P
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I look forward to seeing this OOC, whatever that is


OOC stands for Out Of Character. In this context it also means a parent thread that you can write your IC or In Character, chat in the OOC (anywhere from off topic things to characters, story, etc) and where the character tab is. If it still doesn't make sense, don't sweat it. When a link mysteriously appears tomorrow just click on it will all make sense.
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Is personal shielding a thing in this?
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Is personal shielding a thing in this?


That my dear friend is a mine field.

Mine. Field.

I'd say right off hand, yes. Personal Shielding is a thing. But error on the side of tastefulness. If your character can suddenly take a nuke to the face and laugh it off... well, then it's not good. Be cool. Don't OP.
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@Blue Demon
I know what you mean by that, heh. I personally like to make characters take use of intelligence and cleverness over overpowered technology and skills. It makes things far more interesting to read, that's for sure.

Weak characters or characters with real flaws doing awesome things. That's always fun. When I make a character, that's the way I intend it to be. I'm mostly asking about things to test the waters before I make up my mind.
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<Snipped quote by NickTrano>

OOC stands for Out Of Character. In this context it also means a parent thread that you can write your IC or In Character, chat in the OOC (anywhere from off topic things to characters, story, etc) and where the character tab is. If it still doesn't make sense, don't sweat it. When a link mysteriously appears tomorrow just click on it will all make sense.


Tomorrow?

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Tomorrow?


I know. But when you decide to get off your back (from being sick in bed) and mow the lawn. Then almost pass out half way through despite feeling better. And your headache returns.... writing just isn't something you want to do.

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Man is everyone playing humans so far?

I'm going to need to inject some diversity into this cast then.
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@Lord WraithOoooh. Alien? Cyborg? AI?
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All of the above!
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Interested
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Interested

Awesome. I should have the OOC up tomorrow baring world ending unforeseen circumstances.
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