Yay for starting!

I'm here I'm here I'm here!

Sorry for the delay!

No problem at all!

Also, in regard to your message, no worries on continuity. I have no problems with creating an alternative timeline or making changes

No problem at all!

Also, in regard to your message, no worries on continuity. I have no problems with creating an alternative timeline or making changes

Good! That makes me feel so much better. :)

Great to hear! Will you get a post in a bit :)

Loved your post by the way! Leoria seems like an awesome character :)

Also, got you a reply. Let me know if you need anything changed. Tried to build on the foundation you laid in terms of Yerbol and Leoria's past

Hope I wasn't too assuming with that foundation! I know Jedi aren't buddy/buddy, but I've seen enough solid friendships in the movies that it seemed alright. I had considered having some sort of rift between the two, and having them not get along, but I'd rather have a friendship first. If we want to drive a wedge between them later, we can. And she is already so much fun to write.

Posted for you as well! Ditto, on the changing anything bit.

Fair enough, yeah. I like the friendship angle and I'm SURE it'll be tested when they get to Korriban.

Also, I tried to find a picture best representing Yerbol and this was the best I could find. Forgive the anime-ness of it, but again, best I could find xD

Looks great! And no worries on the anime bit. I love anime. :)

Here's what I have. Not the most bubbly, happy picture of her, but I still draw inspiration from it. Reflects her more mellow approach to life.

Neat! Nice picture!

Also, I was thinking it would be cool to have the other Master be Arianth so that both Masters could give them this mission together. That sound ok? If so, would you mind playing Arianth?

Not a problem! And I would be happy to write her. You're welcome to snag her for a line or two too if it makes your bit easier.

Sounds good! Same for Mansuto. Commandeer him as much as you need

I wasn't totally sure which direction you were taking the meeting, so please let me know if I need to change Arianth's dialogue. :)

Aw, sorry, I should've made that clearer...:/

So, I have it set up to where Master Arianth is going to want a relic that has the ability to enhance the foresight of Jedi visions. That sound ok?

Also, please please please feel free to continue to add your own twists, turns, etc. I've LOVED your posts so far and I think we have the start of something gorgeous :)

Also also, I have an arc running in my head right now...let me know if you think this'll work:

-Leoria and Yerbol arrive on Korriban to find the Republic forces slaughtered in an ancient tomb. They look like they were killed by a lightsaber.
-Either Leoria or Yerbol touch the relic and are infused with the enhanced powers of foresight. One sees a future filled with darkness, a few figures emerging from said darkness who claim themselves to be the Heralds of the Sith
-Garbed assassins attack the duo, they fend them off and grab their lightsabers as proof

What do you think so far? Feel free to add/subtract/modify

Thank you so much. I've really, really enjoyed writing with you too. It has been a while since I've been so excited for a story!

That arc sounds great!

I love ancient tombs, because they have so much potential. It could easily have magical elements that our pair would have to account for, even beyond the visions. Last time I wrote about a tomb, it had a relic that brought the dead inside of it back to life. Sort of a twist on the standard zombie scene. By no means am I saying we should do that here, but it is something to consider. Why write about a tomb if we don't have fun with it?

I'd also like to see a contrast between whoever has the foresight, and whoever doesn't. For example, while someone is busy with these visions, maybe they aren't aware of what else is happening around them? Or there's a strange sensation that they are blocked from because they have this new ability? Just stuff to throw around!

I'll get a post for you in a couple hours. Also, looks like the site glitches are getting to the IC. You may have a few extra posts to delete!

Ohhh, sounds great! We'll keep trying to figure it out as we go, yeah? :)

Oh shoot. How do I delete posts? xD

I have no idea! We'll leave it for now, and maybe snag a mod if the time presents itself.

EDIT: Oh, looks like you worked it out!

I hope that's alright! I was thinking that the previous relics drove people mad. Maybe gave them extra abilities to inflict pain and death. And that's why they're so worried, but they won't tell the Knights that. Leo and Yerbol can discover that on their own for added fun!

If you want to time-jump to the planet, or just the trip there, that's fine with me!

Oh man that's awesome. Yes yes yes.

I can do that, sure! Get you a post in a bit :)