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I kind of feel like the GM should make the first post. I feel more comfortable with that xD lol I just can't post first.
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Okay, I'll make the first post if you want. xD
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I'll say it right away that I'm very open to all sorts of feedback—if anyone finds anything wrong with my posts (or just things that could have been better), don't hesitate to point them out. Thanks in advance! :D
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I will post when I get home! Won't be too long. Maybe an hour. Very excited for seeing how the demons react to Davina's appearance in the 7th Sin.
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@Neko Sensei


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Approved! :3

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By the way, note for future players: we need boys. xD
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@Neko Sensei there is no such thing as posting order, right? so I can post when I feel like it?
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Yep, you can post whenever you want. :3 Posting order is boring. >.>
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@KahleenCuthald

Yep, you can post whenever you want. :3 Posting order is boring. >.>


Awesome!!
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You guys are quick! Great posts as well, setting up the tension. Something I could not simply spectate from afar...
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@KahleenCuthald@Mateotis and Anyone else whom wish to get involved with the standoff.

Feel free to do what you will with and take control of the three frat boys. I have no further plans for them. You can scare them off or have the bouncers throw them out.

I may have to work some overtime tomorrow which will cause me to post rather late and don't want to hold up the game with one little scene.
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Just asking for clarification: @KahleenCuthald, are you planning to post now after @Divine Darkness? I definitely want to include Davina's actions in my own if so, and perhaps move on with the scene.
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@Mateotis I'm out shopping. You can post before me if you like.
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@Neko Sensei

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@Mateotis I'm out shopping. You can post before me if you like.


I'm sorry, I know this isn't very PC, but is just such a womanly thing to say. :)
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@Garth Please don't call me that again.

Edit: lalala I am bored and that's why I am adding a useles edit. So guys, just letting you know that, you know, I am bored. But that's okay. I am often bored. Soooo we have another player? Whoohoooo. Fun Fun Fun. Lol I am so stupid xD
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Accepted~

Aww, here I was hoping that maybe, just maybe, the next player would finally create a boy... x'D Well, I guess I'll keep waiting. ^^"
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Accepted~

Aww, here I was hoping that maybe, just maybe, the next player would finally create a boy... x'D Well, I guess I'll keep waiting. ^^"


Sorry hun >.<

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@KahleenCuthald Okay, so. A little background info. I started writing my post well before you posted yours—as we talked about it—, it's just simply that I'm. Painfully. Slow. xD If I don't get a sudden burst of inspiration, things can get pretty lengthy. It's also why I didn't explicitly include your part. I think it still fits well though, the continuity is not broken. Another detail, Lucrezia doesn't know what Davina thinks of her, so she keeps acting the way she does.

Also, I kind of ended the scene as you can see. If you wanted to have a little physical violence in there, just tell me and I'll edit it. Hope everything is clear now!
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@Mateotis Never doubted anything. Everything's fine. And Davina is quick to judge by first impression. She will change her mind don't worry ;)
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