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@smarty0114 Thanks for the notice, and I'd gladly go for a promotion. :)

Also thanks for the notice with Blue. Now I think we're all notified and ready to continue rolling eh?
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I have a question about character creation. All of the other characters abilities seem to be more based around technology. Is that the theme we're going for or are more supernatural abilities allowed?
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@Leslie Hall According to the characters we have now, it appears so. I mean, Overwatch was essentially that no? HOWEVER, I suppose some supernatural abilities, depending on what they are, could work. Like what are you planning exactly with your character?
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Some supernatural powers might be available if you explained them well. I mean, look at Hanzo and Genji's animated short. How are you gonna explain what they did near the end? (No spoilers for obvious reasons)
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@Scarifar It's not really spoilers though. XD But yeah, thats absolutely one example of supernatural powers. One could go in a similar direction if one wants to
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@Lmpkio I don't really have any solid plan, but I was just wondering what my options were. If it's allowed, I think it'd be cool to write up a psionic support-based character. I was thinking something similar to Nyx from Warframe; without the mind control aspect. It'd be kind of a mixture of Nyx and Zarya. Projecting psychic barriers to deflect and absorb fire for their teammates.

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@Lmpkio I don't really have any solid plan, but I was just wondering what my options were. If it's allowed, I think it'd be cool to write up a psionic support-based character. I was thinking something similar to Nyx from Warframe; without the mind control aspect. It'd be kind of a mixture of Nyx and Zarya. Projecting psychic barriers to deflect and absorb fire for their teammates.


I think that sounds alright. Yeah, that sounds cool! I think that'll work nicely :)
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@Leslie Hall Sounds interesting :D
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Second character go!


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@Scarifar So just a few things. A) She's too young to have fought in the war, seeing as how the war ended 13 years ago, placing her at 14 at the end of the war, which is a bit young even for a super soldier. B) Her father not paying her ransom seems kind of strange, because even if he didn't like her, wouldn't that reflect rather poorly on his company. It might make more sense if the ransom wasn't really what her captors were after, and they kept her even after getting it. Other than those things, I think she's good :)
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@Leslie Hall Supernatural powers could be allowed as long as they have a very good explanation :)
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I apologize for being inactive lately. I have returned from my camping trip and there will hopefully be no more complications in my life :) This rp has my full attention. I had fun writing up that post but I am exhausted from spending the whole day outside and goodness do I need sleep now.
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@Scarifar So just a few things. A) She's too young to have fought in the war, seeing as how the war ended 13 years ago, placing her at 14 at the end of the war, which is a bit young even for a super soldier. B) Her father not paying her ransom seems kind of strange, because even if he didn't like her, wouldn't that reflect rather poorly on his company. It might make more sense if the ransom wasn't really what her captors were after, and they kept her even after getting it. Other than those things, I think she's good :)


Ok, I've made a couple changes to the backstory, mainly about the ransom and the time of release to after the war rather than during the war.
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@Scarifar Okie dokie, she's good to go :D
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I'll likely post after work this evening. That is, if enough people have posted to make me feel comfortable/willing to post again.

Glorious posting to be had by all, and a wonderful Tuesday to you all as well! ^_^
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Just an FYI, Evan Peters was my highschool celebrity crush.

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@Leslie Hall He looks really nice! :)
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I wanna post... but I think I'll wait for @smarty0114 first, mostly due to Creatrix's interaction with Shortcut.
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@Leslie Hall

So I read through your CS, and for the most part, he looks good. I just have a few concerns about his backstory and abilities. One, he's too young. I understand that he was experimented on when he was a child, but the Sentinels Program wouldn't have accepted someone of his age and with unstable powers at that. This would prove to be a liability for the rest of the team if someone couldn't control their abilities. I feel as though he should be at least 23. Another thing that troubles me is his abilities. With his passive, Kinetic Surge, you need to limit his powers more because he can easily become too OP if he absorbs a lot of attacks. Maybe he can only absorb a small portion of the attack? And for Psi Blades, Kinetic energy isn't a tangible object so it would be near impossible to form it into a blade. Even scientifically in a lab, it would be impossible. Once you change these things, I think he would look great :) However, smarty is the official judge. :)
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