[OOC] Underwood Investigations

Reporting for duty, sah.

I guess we should finish up the OOC and Characters tab before really getting into the OOC, no?

Sounds good, I do love me some headers. I recently skimmed through Graham and realised that, as a character, he's basically furniture. I'm probably going rewrite him before posting for him, not too heavily but enough to make him personality a bit more interesting and less flat.

Same here, I'll have him all edited nicely by the end of the day or, at the latest, tomorrow morning.

Well that took far, far, far too long. I've now done it now but it should've been done yesterday or before.

Still, Graham is now updated. Shall we just post them all in the characters tab? If so, why not in the order they arrived at U.I.? Given that a similar idea was recently ruined...

I was assuming that it would be Dee, Graham, Bariel, Jack, yeah. Dee is obviously the first, Graham found a home there a few years ago while Bariel and Jack are both recent additions.

I'm not sure, really. It's vital for Bariel's journey that he only left Heaven recently and that he's still adjusting to life without an unquestionable set of external rules, so I was imagining it being in the last few months. But Jack and Bariel could've arrived within a few weeks of each other, who knows?

By the by, your relationship description between Lee and Arthur is spot on, perfect and somewhat heartbreaking. I might edit mine a tad to match some of the bits you've written but only because it's so very good.

Sorry about the delay, hard couple of days. Tomorrow is all free though so I'll try to get out all the posts I need to, including this one and Happy Family's one.

Gotta go fast!

Obviously we don't need to keep up this rate of posts but it's sort of nice to move the story along at a rigorous pace for a little while.

I feel like I'm dominating the scene a bit too much by having two characters present though, sorry about that. In future I'll try to make sure I only bring one.

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[OOC] Underwood Investigations

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Barrett Oh, the year was 1778...

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Barrett Oh, the year was 1778...

Barrett Oh, the year was 1778...

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Barrett Oh, the year was 1778...

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Barrett Oh, the year was 1778...

Barrett Oh, the year was 1778...

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Barrett Oh, the year was 1778...

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Barrett Oh, the year was 1778...

Barrett Oh, the year was 1778...