[OOC] BlackRose79-SinfulSkills: Half-Blood Adventures

This good? I'll post the post when you see this, just wanted to make sure I did this part right.

Yeah this is perfect! 
Make sure you hit the 'subscribe' in the corner so you know when people post.
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@BlackRose79

I apologize I won't be able to get back to this tonight but I will make it a priority tomorrow, I cannot keep my eyes open anymore.
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Yea no problem, get back to it whenever you have time.

My next post might not be so long considering we are going to hit dialog here in a second. I hope its going to be ok, if not I can always figure out something else to write to make it longer.

That's fine, 2+ paragraphs is really what I look for.
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Yea... Mine isnt close to 2 paragraphs.. Its one paragraph, like 130 words.

These things always helped me when I was stuck - 
Details: Describe the area around them; smell, sounds, tastes, sight, colors ect.
Flashbacks: Introduce your readers to a bit of backstory of your character by providing flashbacks.
Inner thoughts: What is your character thinking? Feeling? How is it effecting them on the inside.

Maybe that will help.
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Hey I use ' ' for inner thoughts, I know some people use italics but I mainly use that for flashbacks. Would my ' ' work for inner thoughts for you?

See? You are helpful, brought my previous 130 post to 346 words and I made it in two paragraphs. *Does a happy dance*

[OOC] BlackRose79-SinfulSkills: Half-Blood Adventures

BlackRose79

EasilyAmused Senior Role Player / Always Hunting

BlackRose79

EasilyAmused Senior Role Player / Always Hunting

EasilyAmused Senior Role Player / Always Hunting

BlackRose79

BlackRose79

EasilyAmused Senior Role Player / Always Hunting

BlackRose79

EasilyAmused Senior Role Player / Always Hunting

BlackRose79

BlackRose79