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There's two high school kids. (cliche right?) they're both superpowered for one reason or another and they're heroes on the side while also being high school kids. Neither know the others secret identity. At school the girl crushes on the guy. in superhero form the guy crushes on the girl. but neither of their love is returned. (Miraculous Ladybug Status Idk if you've ever watched that...) but anyway. this is when things get dark. He gets severely injured in a battle against a powerful enemy (To be decided who the enemy is) and actually dies in her arms. That's when she finds out who he really is and is crushed to find this out. His funeral is closed casket because his parents can't stand to see him in such a state.. They don't know how he really died because the female hero covered it up. anyways. Now she lives a sad life without him. goes on patrols by herself and all. Not long after his death a new vigilante with a darker sense of justice appears. He begins killing criminals on the streets. the female hero can never seem to catch him. Finally she is able to confront him and they fight. He defeats her but leaves her alive telling her to stay out of his way. We can kinda continue on this is just the basic story line and all that. we would start where i first started telling the story and go from there. and yes if you're wondering the new vigilante is the old male hero brought back to life. (Red Hood Status)

That's the idea.

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Name:
Age:
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Powers/Abilities:
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Short Bio: (Optional)
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forgot to add

Alias:

and

Superhero outfit:
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-Moved CS to CS section-
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it's a regular sunny day in the rp right now
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Got my app up! I'll reveal his bio through dialogue(hopefully) and I'll try to get a post up tonight.
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I love ur CS and character already. The only complication is that anyone would kno he is Whiplash because he has blue hair and tats. It's a little too obvious... maybe this, his blue hair and tats only show up when he is in Whiplash form or when he's using his powers. Otherwise he has normal hair color and the tats aren't there or something else creative. Maybe he wears a wig during school to hide his blue hair and he covers his tats with clothes. Idk whatever you want >. < I just don't want his secret identity to be too obvious
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I love ur CS and character already. The only complication is that anyone would kno he is Whiplash because he has blue hair and tats. It's a little too obvious... maybe this, his blue hair and tats only show up when he is in Whiplash form or when he's using his powers. Otherwise he has normal hair color and the tats aren't there or something else creative. Maybe he wears a wig during school to hide his blue hair and he covers his tats with clothes. Idk whatever you want >. < I just don't want his secret identity to be too obvious


Yeah lmao I was thinking the same, I like your idea of them only showing up when he uses his power, I'll write that in!
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@Mr_pink alright I'm glad I was able to help
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I'm a bit confused, are our characters partners? Or do we just meet up by chance while heroing?
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They're already partners in fighting crime and have been for a while
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Cool, just writing my post now, hopefully should have it done tonight!
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Just then, Mr. Gray seemed to freak out at someone. It was Ari, a small blush could be seen on, Austin's cheeks, but he'd be damned if he'd let anyone see it.


not to nitpick but his name is Mr. Drake. ... Sorry!! >.< Just for future reference.
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<Snipped quote by Mr_pink>

not to nitpick but his name is Mr. Drake. ... Sorry!! >.< Just for future reference.


Sorry! Think I got his name confused with Ari's surname
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@Mr_pink It's okay. confusions like that happen to me all the dang time. No worries! I just feel bad for correcting you is all.
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@Mr_pink It's okay. confusions like that happen to me all the dang time. No worries! I just feel bad for correcting you is all.


Oh, don't! If I screw up feel free to correct me, I'd actually prefer it that way.
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Sorry for all the questions, but should I have spoken as Envy there? I'm not sure if it's proper to control NPC's you've made or anything.
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you can speak as NPC's if you'd like too. I don't mind. Sorry I haven't posted yet... I've been thinking about it all day but I've been at work so I haven't gotten the chance. However. I'm totally going to post right now. Just a quick question.

Do we want either one of them to be touched by Envy? Or should we just keep the plot moving as it is? E.G. take her down and return her to the prison?
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@Mr_pink Meow?
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@Xikari chan Sorry, I was sleeping. Idk, being touched by envy could be interesting, but it could also be boring if you get my gist. I'm fine either way, it's up to you.
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Lol it is I guess up to me. But we are in this together. What would u like better?
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