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Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Rade
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CS is revised and complete as per regulation. The sample, I know, is bad. It's the worst sample I've ever written to be frank. But, I had to get something up and I didn't want to take up too much of my brother's time again. Feel free to comment or criticize.

I will, though, either today - if I can do so from the PS3 - or tomorrow be adding an extra segment that'll give brief one paragraph or so outlines of dedicated NPCs and rogues. But as that isn't needed for the CS to be accepted, I won't take up anymore of his time than necessary.
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mattmanganon said
Look at the bright side, now you only have to focus on one character. It's better to do 1 character well, than a load of characters badly...


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*Has two character sheets up, and a possible third coming*

Yeah.... totally....
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I guess I'll hold off on DD for now then.
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DrewVonAwesome said
Rade's profile is making me feel like I shouldn't bother aiming for Spider-Man. His just makes it clear he knows exactly what to do with the character. Meanwhile I didn't have much planned, so I concede my Spider-Man profile, leaving my Iron Man profile there instead.


Oh.

Rade vs Runner then. I'll have a reread of Rade's new writings (reread of Rade's writings; reread of Rade's writings. Tongue-twisty...) and try and make up my mind. That's the only actual competition for a character at this stage, right? Wasn't Sloth going to apply as well?
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The New Yorker said
I guess I'll hold off on DD for now then.


Look, if you want to try for two you can. I've seen your work. It's always good.
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ErsatzEmperor said
Look, if you want to try for two you can. I've seen your work. It's always good.


It's very nice to hear that you think that. Your work is excellent so that's a big confidence boost.

I don't know if I will go for DD right now though. Classes are starting and I don't want to get ahead of myself.
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The New Yorker said
It's very nice to hear that you think that. Your work is excellent so that's a big confidence boost. I don't know if I will go for DD right now though. Classes are starting and I don't want to get ahead of myself.


Thanks. I can't say that I agree with excellent, but they're certainly masterful, if I may say

Go for what's comfortable then.
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Don't mind these. In a couple of hours I'll transfer my written notes onto them.
Player Name: ErsatzEmperor
Character You Wish To Play: Otto Gunther Octavius, Doctor Octopus
Moral Alignment (Hero, Villain, Walking the Line): Villain
Affiliation (what group/team/organization, if any, is your character affiliated with?): None.
Character Origin & Backstory: W.I.P
Powers and Abilities (What can you're character do? What can't they do?): W.I.P
Sample Post (This is used as an introduction to your writing – try to keep it to around three paragraphs or more and try to include dialogue):

Player Name: ErsatzEmperor
Character You Wish To Play: Scott Lang, Ant-Man
Moral Alignment: Hero
Affiliation : S.H.I.E.L.D, The Avengers.
Character Origin & Backstory: W.I.P
Powers and Abilities:


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Taken care of the samples.
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Just so you know, I'll concede my She-Hulk CS since I'm a newcomer. My main will be Deadpool and after the probation period (however long that is) I'll see about restarting her if no-one else has taken her up or I can fit it around the Hulks character.
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Nightraider said
Just so you know, I'll concede my She-Hulk CS since I'm a newcomer. My main will be Deadpool and after the probation period (however long that is) I'll see about restarting her if no-one else has taken her up or I can fit it around the Hulks character.


I did say that i changed my Hulk CS to fit around your She-Hulk CS...
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Yes Matt, I noticed. Even though I didn't ask you to or respond in anyway to the offer.

I wasn't referring to the CS, I was talking about the storyline that you've obviously planned out for your character and also leaving it open ended enough that if anyone else decides that they want to try the Hulk that they know there may be a She-Hulk entering their storyline.

Since I've conceded the She-Hulk CS, you're welcome to change it back to the way you had it if you want to.
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Nightrunner said
My mom did too actually. We ordered another screen for her laaptop off a certain worldwide networking resource.


SO, you're the infamous Nightrunner I've been hearing so much about and been confused with so much........
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Nightraider said
SO, you're the infamous Nightrunner I've been hearing so much about and been confused with so much........


Infamous? You mean inFAMOUS! My name is Jimmy! and you better not wear it out. Suicide committer that 'cho momma talked about. King of the fourty thieves! I'm meant to represe-e-ent, the needle in the vein of the establishment!
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Alright, i changed it back, although i kept the part with him working alongside Betty in finding a Cure. Also, i added my Sample-Post.
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Cap CS is finally finished.
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If my app hasn't been rejected before I get the chance, I'll be adding some notes into my CS regarding NPCs and rogues. It's the cohesiveness between them all that makes my Spidey, I think, interesting.
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Gowi said
Taken care of the samples.


Alright. I'll take a look.

HenryJonesJr said
Cap CS is finally finished.


And you.

Nightrunner said
Infamous? You mean inFAMOUS! My name is Jimmy! and you better not wear it out. Suicide committer that 'cho momma talked about. King of the fourty thieves! I'm meant to represe-e-ent, the needle in the vein of the establishment!


This is going in my signature.

Rade said
If my app hasn't been rejected before I get the chance, I'll be adding some notes into my CS regarding NPCs and rogues. It's the cohesiveness between them all that makes my Spidey, I think, interesting.


No one's rejecting anyone yet (though I'll have to start today, gulp). Stop being so pessimistic.
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Not pessimism, realism. I knew you were deciding today, but I'm unsure of when I'll be able get the notes section up. Thus there is a possibility that by the time I'm ready you'll have chosen NR's over mine, in which case I would no longer need to add notes. That's all I had meant.
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Rade said
Not pessimism, realism. I knew you were deciding today, but I'm unsure of when I'll be able get the notes section up. Thus there is a possibility that by the time I'm ready you'll have chosen NR's over mine, in which case I would no longer need to add notes. That's all I had meant.


I'm not petty. Ersatz, would you mind waiting to decide until Rade finishes his CS.
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