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But no really, I hit a block when I sat down to write it because I wanted to bring in Maxine and continue the fight, but I couldn't organically do that without modding her, and I felt that would have been a little flawed for Tyler. I got a lil stuck and then Sunday came and went (woosh).

So, you all do what you want with Ren, just don't kill him or lob off any extremities (I feel like I have to specifically say that to Tyler for some reason), and I'll wrap up from there.

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Heehee POST!!!!! Whooooo!

It is the one in which Ren is bothered. Lol I feel kinda sorry for these guys, just cuz their plans are being ruined inexpertly by civilians. Must be an embarrassing sort of headache. Lol :P
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Heehee POST!!!!! Whooooo!

It is the one in which Ren is bothered. Lol I feel kinda sorry for these guys, just cuz their plans are being ruined inexpertly by civilians. Must be an embarrassing sort of headache. Lol :P


Haha I think that's what I love about it. It's so mundane and disrespectful lol
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Haha I think that's what I love about it. It's so mundane and disrespectful lol


It really is. And that's pretty awesome.

Also, I feel like I should probably wait on posting Andrew until other people post, because right now, his reaction is pretty much a long list of nopes.
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Haha yeah, if you want to hang off you definitely can. I wanted to really get Maxine in the story, so the post is a little bit geard toward her
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So I'm a little confused by the latest post, did Joseph's assault on Ren do nothing? I had written Joseph having a hand on Ron's throat while pummeling Ron's face with the other but your latest post, Stein doesn't reflect that. Did my post make it seem like Joseph had Allen because I thought Andrew was dealing with Allen?
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So I'm a little confused by the latest post, did Joseph's assault on Ren do nothing? I had written Joseph having a hand on Ron's throat while pummeling Ron's face with the other but your latest post, Stein doesn't reflect that. Did my post make it seem like Joseph had Allen because I thought Andrew was dealing with Allen?


I'm having this confusion, too. I didn't really understand the post at all. I thought we were all targeting the same guy.
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Andrew is definitely dealing with Allen.
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So I'm a little confused by the latest post, did Joseph's assault on Ren do nothing? I had written Joseph having a hand on Ron's throat while pummeling Ron's face with the other but your latest post, Stein doesn't reflect that. Did my post make it seem like Joseph had Allen because I thought Andrew was dealing with Allen?


Oh my you're right!

I'm sorry, I focused on getting Maxine into the story and completely glossed over that.

I was actually physically writing the post at work because we can't have any non work related electronics in the work area, and didn't have opportunities to check all my stuff. Then I just typed it up when I got home. That was a huge err on my part.

Let's just consider that equivalent of the Green Lantern movie: A nice attempt, but completely loud and wrong.
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Seems a little harsh to compare your writing to the Green Lantern movie.
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Rather.
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Seems a little harsh to compare your writing to the Green Lantern movie.


Awwwww, you're too sweet!

....or completely reading me to filth

Wait, I think it's the former. Yeah, I'm gonna go with former.

Okay so, I just got off work, and I'll throw an edit up there tonight
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OH my God, I really don't know what I was thinking story-wise when I wrote that post originally, definitely gotta change more than a few things around.

Once again, sorry about that guys
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I think we can find it in ourselves to forgive you.
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You sacrificed work hours to bring it to us. All is forgiven. :P
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Okie so! I think I got it this time.

Hell, I like the edits I made this time around lol

Now Wraith, you can get in on that fire beam action if you want to, and just have you standing near Ram again. Also--short of killing him or dismembering him--you can take him down if you want. Just if one of the villain's is unconscious I want the other one to be conscious.
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Stein, henny. You just gave me so much life.


Bringing this back because it's relevant.
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Bringing this back because it's relevant.


You're an absolute doll!

How's everyone's week going?
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Lazily.
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Good Lord, this week has been busy for me!

I submitted my first manuscript for my grad program.

I told myself I'd give 15 pages max.

When I hit 27 pages, I knew I should probably reel it in.
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