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I'll be writing up my first post now.
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I hope none of that was too confusing. If anything was off or there's something you didn't understand than feel free to speak up!

Also, I'm SO EXCITED to finally get rolling on this :D
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First off, that RP title! It's just amazing.

Your working vocabulary is freaking outstanding. Though, admittedly, I kind of felt like I was trying to decipher an original copy of Shakespeare or something. Heh. Which also makes me think of this. xD

Hope you don't mind that I reiterated the dream, both to add in Anora's view, and make sure I got the gist of it. Let me know if I need to adjust anything!
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I can only say thank you, you're an EXCELLENT writer and I only hope to match the amount of available detail you incorporate. You definitely put everything necessary in that reiteration along with expertly filling in all the details I missed.

I get your point though, my instinctual thesaurus can present an issue or two in translation. And, in the humor of it. I'll be reinstating the urgency of my post forthright, hearkening to provide lessened tapestry's of superfluous literature!
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Oh! Well, thanks. :-) Seriously, though, I love the dream memory. Kudos to your imagination! (And I'm thankful you didn't mind that I did that. Heh. Wasn't sure if you'd find it annoying or not.)

... *Cries. Gets over it, pulls out an insanely thick dictionary, and puts my thinking face on. Whispers excitedly,* Let's do this!
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Working on my post now. I loved that video! xD
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Hope that post is okay, I was struggling to write it properly for some reason. Had a little bit of writers block I suppose.
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Glad you liked the video! It cracks me up every time.

No worries! It read a bit easier, anyway! Sounds like Pahn has an unrivaled liking for pizza. xD
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Ok, NOW my post is finished. And yes he does quite like pizza, you could even say his taste for it is 'ageless' *Slaps my own knee repeatedly* xD
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You're special. And I do mean that in a good way! xD
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I FINALLY finished my post! Regrettably, I need to sleep. Though, I will hint, things are about to get CRAZY for another post or two. I'm thinking Pahn and Anora might meet soon, we'll see how 'the craziness' turns out and where she is by the end of it. If you have any questions, critiques, or suggestions for what comes next please speak up, the magic storm's about to hit.
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I hope you got some good sleep! Sleep's just a tad bit important. If you don't mind my asking, what time zone are you in?

Crazy. I like me some good crazy. xD And yep, yep! I'm a little confused as to what the poison did to Pahn. It caused some sort of relapse, forcing out his full potential? I don't think I know enough about what is to come to give any decent critiques or suggestions... Which brings me to another face-palm moment at how scatterbrained I feel right now. What of the plot that you have in mind would you be willing to divulge? We could take that to PM if you'd rather.
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He hasnt regressed so much as he's beginning to use his actual strength again. The poison hasnt taken full effect in the least but he realizes what it will eventually do and it's caused him some anger. Being someone who's rarely pushed towards distress by physical circumstance, this is something he wont take lightly. He eminates such an aura, that even when he's faintly disturbed, all who are unprepared will be overcome with an exagerrated and powerful form of whatever emotion he projects. Typically he's far more in control than in this specific circumstance, but it's been nearly one billion years since last he's utilized more than ten percent of his strength. Right now hes riding on about 15-20%, but thats still a hell of a lot when he's consciously whithholding much of it's residual effects even now. Also, the grey man threatened to steal something very precious to Pahn, and with the poison being something that could make such a threat possible in the future, Pahn's mind is racing.

I'll send you plot details in the PM's, sorry I never discussed my plans with you on that one! I definitly should have bee thinking to tell you all about it xD
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Gotchya. Thanks for that clarification! I appreciate it. By the way, if I ever get anything wrong in my posts, just let me know. :-)

No worries. I didn't think to ask until now. So how about we just dub it a mutual scatterbrain-ness and call it good?
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Quick question, if you don't mind! Would the barrier or whatever have you that kept Anora from retreating without being paralyzed have fallen away, or would it still be there?
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Its still there but its much weaker due to Pahns current conflict, it'll only make her feel kinda weak so she can walk through it without any real problems. Itll feel more like a really cold air rather than water at this point.
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Thanks!

Got a little carried away. Heh. Let me know of any objections, and if you're okay with the effects of her overusing her powers.
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You should be fine. I may interrupt some of what happened but it won't change your post much, if at all. Also, I had a thought on the guardians.

What if they were originally created just to protect Pahn during his rest and scour the Earth for anything that may corrupt him or cause a disease of the mind. During this time they would naturally transition into protecting the Earth, assuming that as their duty upon his awakening in the third age. It just makes more sense to me since Pahn never really cared for Earth in the beginning so I doubt he'd make a force to protect it. I know this might not be a huge detail, but it was just bothering me a little ;D
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*Gives a thumbs-up.*

By the way, I meant to compliment you on your foreshadowing with the dream and mouth-hand-thing (such a poetic and technical term)!

It's good to be thorough, even with small details. The reason behind the Guardians being created in the first place, though, is something I'd say isn't exactly small! Sounds fine by me. Like I said, the idea of them was me throwing a clump of clay onto the potting wheel for molding. You know where and how they would fit in best!
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Hmm. I would LOVE a detailed description of Pahn if you're up for giving one! Unless I've overlooked or forgotten details, I believe all I really have is silver eyes, casually dressed, and the recent addition of supernaturally handsome.
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