Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by RedDusk
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here goes!



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@Deathmyster



So as @banjoanjo sadly found out the hard way (and poor @Diggerton, too), the [code] command seems to break image links.

So I'm putting your codes on PasteBin from now on with minor formatting fixes. In your case, Death, I removed the Stigma section because Arbiters don't have them and I fixed that one paragraph that wasn't indented. I hope you don't mind.

Grant is accepted.

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Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by banjoanjo
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@RedDusk

Looking good so far, just gotta wait for a bit for approval.

A few nitpicks though, cos I am a fussy butt:
  • Replace the indenting spaces at the start of some of your paragraphs with tabs or just get rid of them completely.
  • Add the name of your magic somewhere in your magic section. You can look at the approved sheets to see examples.
  • Capitalise the name of your theme song title to "The Bird with a Broken Wing"
  • This last one's a really big unnecessary nitpick so ignore it if you feel like it, but replace the single quotation marks (') around Sandy with double quotation marks (")


Haha, sorry for having to deal with a nag like me but it would just be more consistent that way plus I'll be able to sleep at night. Cheers, bud.
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Aaaand Grant has moved to the Character thread!
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@banjoanjo

Takes notes.

I'll just keep this stuff in mind for later. I'm not saying that I'll ever use this info against you during the RP if we have a disagreement.

'No, i'm Not saying That At all'
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@banjoanjo

That moment when you realize your co-GM's OCD is worse than yours. Also, I just realized I missed one of Dig's unindented paragraphs and now I can't stop seeing it in my mind.

Your GM is an actually an Aberration.
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Takes notes.

I'll just keep this stuff in mind for later. I'm not saying that I'll ever use this info against you during the RP if we have a disagreement.

'No, i'm Not saying That At all'


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Errr... I have a different format compared to everyone else. Should I edit?
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No, because you are consistently centered.

Consistency is key. Along with communication, shut up, I know.

But you can if you want to.
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@banjoanjo It is all good my friend. All deeds done in the name of the OCD god.
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Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by banjoanjo
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@Kyrisse

Yeah, what the loser above me said.

EDIT: LOL I DIDN'T REALISE REDDUSK POSTED JUST BEFORE ME. SO SORRY, MAN.
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@banjoanjo it is fine. I will not fault you for speaking the truth. sobs
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PLEEEEEEEASE! FORGIVE MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

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Pfft, don't forgive. Just find ways to brutally murder all of banjo's NPCs.
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Pfft, don't forgive. Just find ways to brutally murder all of banjo's NPCs.


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What? I was gonna probably do it anyway at some point, I mean, what's the fun in having them if I can't make a few suffer grumblegrumblegrumble.
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Oh, I'll help! I'll make them... feel really bad or something.
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Yes, perfect. Make them feel HORRIBLE about that leg they lost. I'm counting on you, Snaggle!
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Aye! How dare they not feel horrible already about their dismemberment.
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@January Of course. Leave the murdering to your resident emo vampire. He will run out of bugs and rats sooner or later.
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