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Might I reserve a spot in the Deltawatch as well?
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Might I reserve a spot in the Deltawatch as well?


Noted. Reservation secured.
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I see you are a fan of Kamala. I too love the dork.


Hell yeah! A follow fan of the kickass Dork!
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Name:
Aryn Redfield

Alias:
Clover

Age:
17

Nationality:
American

Occupation:
Student

Team:
Ana



Abilities -
    Neutral Ability:
  • wip

    Weapon Ability:
  • Aryn wears a cybernetic arm which safely allows him to manipulate the electricity from objects around him. He uses this electricity to stun enemies if they are too close and this cybernetic arm also stores all his enhancers.


    Special Ability 1:
  • Aryn uses enhancers to aid his enemies. These enhancers can range from increasing speed, vision, and hearing. These enhancers can be set for each teammate, though cannot switch modes after being applied onto the ally.


    Special Ability 2:
  • If an enhancer is close to being destroyed he can specifically choose one of the enhancers or multiple enhancers and emit sound waves that stun the opponent.

    Ultimate Ability:
  • If the enhancer is at full charge, Aryn can force teleport any ally back to his position if he/she is wearing the enhancer.


Biography:
WIP

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Ahhh. I'm still thinking of what I can do with this character. But he is based off of, Ana if you couldn't tell. XD
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Ahhh. I'm still thinking of what I can do with this character. But he is based off of, Ana if you couldn't tell. XD


Looks good so far, keep it up. :D
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My God, this post exploded while I was asleep! I'll be making a deltawatch character, but they can be a super secret talon spy if need be!
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Thanks a ton, I appreciate it major.
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My God, this post exploded while I was asleep! I'll be making a deltawatch character, but they can be a super secret talon spy if need be!


Or you can be both lol. Ill reserve you for Deltawatch.
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On a side note. Been actually thinking on adding one more Deltawatch spot, but instead of having one major team, there should be two hybrid groups of two. Each will go on different missions from one another, but may team up on a major mission once in awhile. What do you think guys?
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Wait. What happens if your character is underage? What do they put for occupation?
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Student? Trainee? Apprentice? Hero/Villain in the making? Fanboy/Fangirl? Gamer?
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@DesperatePerson Pretty much like Haru said lol
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@DesperatePerson Pretty much like Haru said lol


Is there like a program in Deltawatch were young 'prodigies' come and learn under them or something? XD

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<Snipped quote by Lmpkio>

Is there like a program in Deltawatch were young 'prodigies' come and learn under them or something? XD


That's basically Deltawatch in a nutshell lol
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<Snipped quote by DesperatePerson>

That's basically Deltawatch in a nutshell lol


OHHHHHHHHHHHH I MISUNDERSTOOD THE FUCK OUT OF THAT... DX
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Now it's time for the hardest part of every OC, the backstory.
I was thinking of a Melee-oriented character and thinking to myself "I wonder how he'd fare in an environment where nearly every single character has a gun."
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OHHHHHHHHHHHH I MISUNDERSTOOD THE FUCK OUT OF THAT... DX


Lol thats exactly why you see YOUNG YOUTHFUL folk instead of old farts XD Buts its ok. At least you know why. :P

@Bornlucky You have an interesting character going on there, but there's some things that may want to be nerfed.

Lux's neutral is kinda unnecessary for an engineer and a little OP considering everyone can see it.

For his weapon ability, the slight shield barrier is fine, but I think it would be better if it absorbs a percentage of damage (like between 10% - 20% or something) and last for a hot second or two with a recharge of say... 5 seconds? Just a suggestion.

Special Ability 1 is fine, but I suggest maybe 2 instead of 3. Also how long will it last precisely?

Special Ability 2 is completely fine.

Ultimate is fine, just need to know how long it lasts.

@Haru Nyan D-A huh? Add a V and you have yourself a gamer XD (JK the name is fine)

It also seems like Team Reinhardt has been taken by Lux (and I prefer if every gets a different advisor), however comparing the two, I believe yours is more fitting for Reinhardt.

As for Lux, since he creates and repairs barriers, I think he'll be better off in Team Torbjörn imo.

And as for your character D-A, he looks good so far. I got no problems with him so far :)

Also...

I was thinking of a Melee-oriented character and thinking to myself "I wonder how he'd fare in an environment where nearly every single character has a gun."


Genji, Hanzo, Reinhardt, and Zenyatta say hi lol
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Alfonso confirmed to be best husbando. One of D-A's skins now has to be D.Va's colors.
And heeeyy, I said "Nearly" but other than that. Right-O~
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